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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Wow... Wow... Wow...!!

Simple awesome update..!!!

It was so sweet... Roshni was 100% right..!!

Arni scene was really cute...
Please update soon... I cant wait..!!
Jaldi update do nah..!!
Please please..

Eagerly waiting for Arjun surprise.!!

Thanks Dear !!!
will think something on it ...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: yas23

amazing updates
both parts are great
loved arni secnes
waiting for more
continue soon

Thanks Dear !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shurtiekta

g8 pt update nxt pt asap...

Thanks
next part havent really thought much !!!
But yes its in progress
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Aww.. Take a bow young lady..

I loved it!!

Thanks So much !!!!!
It really means a lot, as it was your work which had actually got me hooked to this forum ( OS-Who the Boss)

Wouldn't it be absolutely brilliant if this indeed took place on the show..
I also wanted something like this but CVs again confused us regarding the pair ...😕

If I may suggest, please post this one in the Fanfiction corner on Arjun Forum, Forum 32.. It does deserve some serious attention from the Creatives.. 😃😉

Beautiful! Hope is such a wonderful thing.. Awaiting the next one..
I'll definately post it Forum32 , not really sure if it deserves to be there😕

Thanks for the PM.. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome dear...really loved the cont..

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awesome dear...really loved the cont..


cont soon!

Thanks for loving it ...
Now i am actually scared to write the next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update...!!!
loved it...!!!
arni convo was lovely...!!!
so arjun finally ready to get everything okay with rathore and aisha...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Here the final part of this OS ...

I had to divide it into two parts as i wanted a proper closure on all things ...
Maybe you'll find this part a little filmy as i really wanted Rathore to vent out all his frustations and also see a gulity Arjun .This part soley belongs to R-R
Also thanks for all the comments I have tried to reply to all of you .
P.S - Silent readers please do like /comment

Chapter 3:

The dawn had also got a new sunrise in his life as he rushed to lodge to get ready .He remembered the white shirt Sam had got him for his anniversary but he never had a chance to wear it as the following day Sikander and destroyed their lives. With the mission to rekindle old ties and a hope that he would be forgiven, he wore it and he left for office earlier than his usual time.

The ride to the office was more of flashback of their time spent .All the pranks, fights; parties were running in his mind like a movie. Sameer was always the first one to know about all his important decisions whether it was joining the Police Force or his confession about loving Roshini and then marrying her, he was a part of everything. Just by thinking about it tears made through his eyes ,Sameer had to tolerate his indifference, attitude and anger without actually being at fault. Now thinking about it he felt like fool, he had let Sikander succeed by alienate himself from all .With that thought he altered his planand called Sameer.

"Rathore, Come immediately to the beach .I had come here for a walk but there a dead body and don't let the team no, and he hung up

Rawte but who's'.body!! Damn it Phir se phone cut kar diya isne '.

Not within 15 minutes Rathore reached and found Arjun starting intently at the waves'.

"Rawte , kahan hai dead body ,did you find anyone "

"Rawte main tum se baat kar raha hun , Tum sun bhi rahe ho damn it " and with that he pulled him but what he saw was tears in his eyes '

"Rawte , agar yeh koi mazak , then we don't really tolerate such stuff in ETF " and turned around to leave "

"Sameer, hearing his name after so many years made him stop in his tracks'He could see that he was still staring at the sea"

Arjun knew that Sameer had stopped and waiting for him to continue ''He sighed and then face d him

I was not lying about a dead body .If you look carefully you will definitely find one in front of you .He saw him opening his mouth to speak but he cut him and continued 'I was living like a dead body from past three years and you know that . I could always see the pain in your eyes which you could mask so well in front of others but you could never hide anything from me.

Stop it Rawte!! agar tumne mujhe yahan yeh sab sunane ki liye bulaya hai toh phir I guess tum apna aur mera time waste kar rahe ho'and with that he marched towards to car.

"I am sorry Sameer", for everything he added after a pause ", please forgive me.

"Apology accepted Rawte , Anything you want to add "

"Sameer please, I really meant it "

"I also meant every word I said Rawte, was Roshini only your wife. Sorry to break it you she was my sister too .Do you think that I didn't love her or it didn't hurt me to see her drenched in her blood? It killed me to see you there tied helplessly next to her .Can you even imagine that what I went through to see you lying in hospital bed and shouting her name .Every time the doctors sedated you just to control you and they were asking my permission for it, can you even imagine what I felt like .Those were the worst 48 hrs of my life, but survived as I knew that I had to be there for you but no you proved me wrong. Arjun Rawte never needs anyone in his life .I wanted to kill Sikander as much as you did and that's the reason I accepted position in ETF .But why am I saying these thing to you, you hardly care.

Even after killing Sikander I have lost because he not only killed my sister but my best friend and brother too.

"Sam, main jaanta hun bahut naraaz hai tu mujhse ,par sach kahun toh Roshini ke jaane ke baad mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaya ki main kya karun . Mujhe lagtha tha ki koi merea dukh ko kabhi samjh nahi payega , aur na janne apne gusse main, maine tujhse ke kya kya nahi bol gaya ,par sach maan aise ek pal nahi hai jab mujhe uska afsos nahi hua . bas main kabhi himmat nahi jutaya paya .Aai-baba ko bhi bahut hurt kiya .Unka saath bhi beech main maine chod diya par dil main yeh yakeen that ki tu unka khayal rakhega aur tune wohi kiya .Tune apni hisse ki dosti toh poori tarah nibhayi bas shayad main hi har gaya .

Please Sameer , akhri baar mujhe maaf karde , !!!!

"Tume bahut der kar di Rawte "

"Tu toh janta hai na ki Dil ke mamlon main mujhe waqt lagta hai "

"Is baar tumne bahut waqt le liya Rawte "

And with that Rathore walked towards his car and Arjun slumped down realizing that today he had lost his best friend and brother forever. The tears which were hidden now flowed freely wetting his face and shirt.After few minutues he was brought backby a hand on his shoulder and he saw a half glass of cutting chai in front of his eyes .As his gaze went up he saw Sameer sipping the other half with a sly smile on his face .He couldn't help but smile amidst his tears as it finally sunk in that he wasn't alone .

"Waise Arjun , Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itna rone ki capacity rakhte ho .Agar kabhi Mumbai main paani ki kaami hui toh tumhe bola lenge ."

"Sam , mujhe laga tha ki time ke saath tumhara sense of humor accha ho jayega par lagta hai yeh aur bekaar ho gaya, koi nahi main theek kar dunga " And with this he enveloped him in a hug.

Finally estranged friends were together and chatted on everything which they had missed in these years.

"Waise kya plan hai Arjun "

"Kis cheez ka "

"Ayesha ki baat kar raha hun main , waise tere liye who best hai .Bilkul theek karka rakhge tereko "

"tu uska dost hai ya mera , Waise aaj baat karunga usse ,baki dekhte hai "

"yeh bhi Sahi hai , Waise all the best!! kyunki who sherni hai ,dhayan rakhna"he replied with a wink

With that they rose to go to office and for the first time in past 3years there was a genuine smile on their faces.

Sameer had hoped that one day things would be back to normal and today Arjun had finally moved on in his life.

Oblivious to these two, the trio in ETF was in a shocked state as for the first time both there seniors were late.

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is the Ayesha wala part ...

I cant imagine Ayesha as the rona -dhona types so it devoid of it ...
I am not sure as how it has come out as its was difficult to write this part thanks to the CV who dont show Arisha scenes and keep us confusing reagring the pairing ..So please bear with this..as it doesnt have muchh of romance between them
Silent readers - Go ahead press the like button or comment

Chapter 4-

They finally reached the office and could make out everyone staring at them as if they had seen the 7th wonder of the world. As they moved towards there cabin the trio was busy chatting away temporarily enjoying the absence of their seniors.

However Rathore entered into the cabin announcing the new case all three of them were brought back to the Officer mode. All day they were busy catching the criminal and finally they had succeeded .it was a long and tiring day for all.

Ayesha walked towards Shree & Chotu cabin and threw the files on the table .

"Yeh Akdu Rawte samjhata kya hai aapne aap ko , by god subah se pagal kar rakha hai "

Ayesha , sir par chot lagi hai kya , tum kabse apne Arjun ji ko Akdu Rawte bolne lag gayi .Mujhe toh laga tha who mera aur shree ka kaam hai." Chotu Added .

If looks could kill Chotu would have been dead by now.

"Subah se Arjun Sir ne mere band baja rakhe hai. Ayesha yeh details , Ayesha who detail ..har file bhi mujhse maang rahe hai , yahan tak ki phone ke records bhi Shree se nahi mujhse ' had hoti hai yaar .Upar se mere upar chilla rahe the ki unki cutting chai main time par order nahi kari ..Ab mujhe sapna aayega kya in sab ka.

Yeh sab chod tum dono ne notice kiya ki aaj undono ke beech ki tuning hi badly hui hai .Rathore sir bhi aaj damn it kaam bol rahe hai . I am telling you guys that ki koi gadbad hai ,Shree added and "Ayesha , chill yaar tereko pata hai hai na mood swings main yeh dono pregnant ladies se bhi 10 steps aage hai ,kal tak normal ho jayenge "

( no offense guys but my sister literally drive me to nuts during her Pregancy so i just mentioned it ..Please take it in good humor)
But on the brighter side yaar , aaj toh full day tum and tumhare Arjun Sir .Only kabab no haddi he winked at her .As soon as Shree finished saying this a file was thrown towards him which he efficiently ducked but alas it landed on Arjun .

Arjun thought the day was about to warp and he hadn't had a talk it Ayesha and he had already pissed her off for the full day. So getting all the strength he marched towards the trio cabin only to have a file thrown at his face. But what the trio dint know that he had every word that they had talked.

"Ms Ayesha Kapoor in my cabin now" he shouted a turned around to find a smirking Rathore.

She would have cursed him a millionth time since morning but couldn't help to stop her rising heartbeats with every step she took towards him.

"Sir '

"So miss Ayesha I thought that you were a professional but seeing you current behavior I am starting to think otherwise "

This one sentence angered the officer in her and she retorted back-Of course, I am a professional but not a robot you see. I love to live my life to the fullest and can't sulk and sit in the corner. If you have any problem with my work then I think you should say but otherwise I don't think you should speak a word. She turned to see if any reaction on his face but it was the smirk that really fused her bulb.

"if you really think I am that inefficient why were you behind me since morning , From files to record even your cutting chai .Why don't you get someone more efficient . You might want to add Neha in your team after all she would provide you with all information and lipsticks too"

All that was in the room was silence , Arjun got up and walked towards her and stooped just a before her and the next set of words shocked her

"Ayesha, I know that you don't use lipsticks so I didn't bother asking you but if you didn't like it will check with you first, or do you want me to buy them for you as you don't have any?

"yeh aadmi pagal ho gaya hai " she murmured to herself .She Sighed and replied "No need sir , I don't care you may go to any Neha or Sneha for your queries "

"Such jealousy Ayesha and I thought you to be ' but he was cut short and he was turned with a force that was usually associated with her .

"Jealous and why the hell should I be jealous Mr Rawte, she added angrily "

"Oh Then which kebab and haddi was Shree talking about he added teasing her further."

"Nothing Sir, Its late ill leave for the day "

"Ayesha Wait "

Arjun walked towards her and held her hands and said "I know jis din se mile hain sirf lade hain hum dono. Thumara mission meri wajah se fail hua uske liye I am sorry Ayesha , but I didn't do it on purpose Aur jahan tak aaj ki baat ,Aadat ho gayi hai mujhe tumhari aap paas rehne ki , cases solve karte hue thumari insights ki ,tumhari smile ki jab tum shree aur Chotu ke saath baatein karte ho ,aur finally tum toh meri personal stunt women ho na .Mainn nahi janta ki kab tume is dil main apni jagah ban li aur mujhe jeena sikha diya .Kuch pata hi nahi chala par ab jaan chukka hunt toh is baat to accept bhi kar liya hai ki tum meri life as bahut important hissa ho .

I am not a perfect man Ayesha , Zindagi ne mujhe bahut dhook diye hain aur In sab main itna ulajh gaya ki aapnon se hi dur ho gaya . Ab jab hosh aaya hai toh yeh akelapan kaatne ko padta hai. Kabhi socha nahi tha ki Roshini ke bina jeena hoga par seekh liya . Par agar tum bhi chali gayi toh shayad sambhal nahi paonga "

Kya tum iss imprefect insaan ki life perfect banugi ,Ayesha ?

She said nothing but just walked away from him , and stopped the door and said

"Arjun , aaj se Shree ki holiday hai , ab roz ghar aap mujhe drop karenge. I am waiting in the parking "

He had got his answer that she was there for him and always be

"Wasie bhi yeh meri sherni hai seedha jawab kahan degi "

With the thought he got his car keys to head towards his destination. Today was just a beginning of two relationships in life which he promised that he will cherish for life .After all not everyone gets a second but he was lucky enough to have these two who love him unconditionally.

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luvd both d part.. Pls write one more os on arisha..

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