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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: tani23
amazing

wen i read arjun ka name ..i was like may b he s conversing wid ria .
but den wen i found sameer ka name ..

i was like ..yeh kaisa dostana hian

then thankfully i scrolled further n found ki sam was practicing to propose BB ...

BB is arjun ki sis ...waah

n sameer ki wud b wifey ...wow

Pata hai tani, mujhe bhi aisa hi laga tha!!! and meri saans beech main hi atak gayi thi... bt THANK GOD!!! Arjun was talking about his SISTER!!!😛

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awsum os...

so arjun helping sameer in proposing...!!!

loved it...!!!

Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago

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@Wj.mad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

amazing dear
pehla mane socha wo arjun nd riya hai.
phir jab sam nd arjun aya i thought it to be dostana.
Phir jab sam ne bola me kase arjun aur ankita ko propose wali bat aye den i was clear
Wase salla bahut help karta hai apne hone wale jija ji ke

titles ke mamle me im very bad

Edited by Wj.mad - 12 years ago

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

owsum...
shuru mei mujhe kuch aur hi laga u kno...
jab samajh mei aya then the 1st thought was that..
dis Amreeka ka map is fab...

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

it was a sudden decission that i should write a sequel to the story . i should really thank gunj for suggesting me...😊
i thought of calling it confusion series...
here it goes...

" kaka... aap kahan ho??? wo abhi tak nahin aaya.. maine kaha tha na... he wont be on time. ab aane do unhe... i ll show him what i am"

" beta, tum itna gussa mat kiya karo... ye tumhari sehad ke liye achi baat nahin hai.. apne baare main na sahi apne kok mein pal rahe iss bacche ka to khayal karo"

" kaka, mujhe kuch nahin sun na. main apne kamre mein jaa rahi hun. wo aaye to khana paros dijiye"

"thik hai beta. ab tum jao aur aaraam karo. main usko khiladoonga"

late night, after conversing with Arjun, sameer was back to his home. he knew she always waited for him till he came home and always made sure he had his dinner, but today something was different.

" kaka, riya kahan hai???? dikh nahin rahi hai..."

" sameer beta... wo naraaz hai tumse. itna der koi karta hai kya? jaante ho na ki wo maa ban ne waali hai... ab to tumhe uska khaas dekhbhaal karni chahiye.. tum aaj kal har roz der se aate ho aur aaj to samay dekha... raat ke do baj chuke hai... itna der koi karta hai kya wo bhi tab jab tum jaante ho ki wo tumhara intezaar kar rahi hogi..."

" i am sorry kaka... aage se aisa nahin hoga.. pakka promise... wo aaj arjun se baat kar raha tha to samay ka pata nahin chala..."

" theek hai beta... aayinda kabhi aisa mat karna.. ab chalo, khana khalo..."

next day was the valentine's day.😊
for the whole day He had not spoken with riya, did not interact directly with her. this left the hormone high pregnent lady all grumpy and angry towards Him.
it was after all valentine's day and theirs was a love marriage...

here sameer with the help of arjun was busy in arranging his special eve... he was all set to propose ankita. he had decorated a gazebo in their favorite resort, with red roses and orchids, her favorites. he himself had shopped a magnificent platinum ring with a large single diamond and 2 small diamonds on each side. he had arranged all her favorite dishes, and even her favorite music.. he waited for the evening eagerly.

in the afternoon, Riya recieved a message from His number to reach XYZ resort. she wore a blood red transparent saree which He had gifted a few days back. she got ready with minimal jewellery with just a kangan on each wrist, just her mangalsutra around her neck, which He had tied...
she caressed her slightly bulged belly and said- " dekha papa aapse aur mujhse kitna pyaar karte hai... he has planned this eve soo special.. i was simply angry on him... now lets go baby..."

she leaves for the venue.

sameer had brought ankita with him to the resort.. she wore a red off shoulder knee length dress with minimal makeup. she looked eternal.. they chatted for some time and then sameer took her to gazebo, knelt before her and took her hand in his. he said-
"ankita, tumhare mere zindagi mein aane se pehle mein sirf kaam ka matlab samajhta tha... akdu, ziddi tha... aaj bhi hoon but, aaj tumne mujhme pyaar bhar diya hai... i fell head over heels for you and love you with every single cell of my body.. will you give me honor of being your life partner... will you provide me privilege of getting old with you??? will you marry me?????"

ankita was moved by his gesture. "yes" she responded. sameer slipped the ring into her ring finger and kissed her fingers.he hugged her tight and pecked her forhead. they parted and turned around and saw a tearful Riya...

" ye sab kya hai???? kya horaha hai mere peeche?"

" riya, tum yahan??" pa tumhe to..."

" haan. mujhe yahan nahin hona chahiye tha.aap mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte ho???" how could you??"

" i am soo sorry riya... i never wanted you know this in this way. i was to tell you, but you are pregnant..."

" i am pregnant...not sick that i could not handle this..and you ankita... you were and are my best friend right??? even you hid this from me??? why????"

riya stood there with one hand on her belly and one wiping the tears. she was visibly hurt.

"Riya", it was arjun.

"arjun...how can they do this to me??? they din tell me anything... after all i am his younger sister and her best friend. yet they hid this from me????" *sob**sob*

" shhh... nahin rote.. tum itni ajeeb ho ki khushi mein tum apni condition bhool ke naachne lagti aur apna khayal nahin rakhti...isiliye i did not tell u and asked not to untill his thich skulled brother of yours proposed her... samjhi ya... samjhau???"

" ya riya... i know ki tum itne dinon se apne arjun se dur mere ghar mein mera khayal rakhne aayi ho... i did not want you to stress yourself working on these things beta... bhai ko maaf kardo na... please..."

" aur riya tu apne bff ko maaf nahin karegi?"

" hmmm... theek hai... main tum donon ko maaf kiya... ab mujhe mere bhai aur hone waali bhaabhi hug karo... m soo exited... baby dekha... ab tumhe nayi maami milegi... wo koi aur nahin tumhari bua hai... wow...

after some time sameer and ankita left, leaving arjun and riya...

" bdw wify, tum iss gazebo ke paas kya karne aayi thi...? maine to uss taraf ke gazebo pe tumhe bulaya tha na..."

riya grinning cheekily...
" wo arjun, main wahan aa hi rahi thi ki meri nazar in donon par padi. wo log mujhe bina bataye ye kaam karte rahe na, to i thought i should bring some masala in the story... i was doing well til you came. it broke my resolve." she pouted.

arjun instantly swooped down to her lips and kissed her completely. he tasted every corner of her mouth.. after some time they broke for air...he rested his forehead against hers and said- " riya... tum kitna bolti ho jaan... "

" you know best way to shut it😉 i love you papa"

" i love you to mama... i love you too baby..." saying so he again bent down to capture her lips...☺️

the end...
how is it????
confusion is not between the couples o characters but the confusion in readers mind...
i hope i am succeeded in my task...
please do LIKE and also PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT...
i ll be waiting for your responses😊
i thank who read, liked and commented for the prvious part...

Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

mujhe kuch samajh ni aaya!!!

achcha title hai baby!!!
sach me it matches.
kaun kis ki BV hai
zara samjhau pls!!!

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Res res res...
Pari,dear.
I was really confused.
Lol...
But the story was too good.

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

hey it was very cute

i liked d whole story

Ria preggy n rathore unke bhai sahib

Ria angry wid sameer n anku

Liked d proposal

n ariya were so romantic

nice story

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

yeah.. hahaha i thought sameer was cheating on riya!!

hmm so riya was creating drama coz her big bro proposed her bff without telling her!! n arjun is the mystery "he" who sent her the invitation to come to that resort

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sumuZAMAN
mujhe kuch samajh ni aaya!!!

achcha title hai baby!!!
sach me it matches.
kaun kis ki BV hai
zara samjhau pls!!!

bohut simple hai...
riya arjunki biwi and sameer ki behan..
anita sameer ki hone waali biwi and arjun's sis...
sirf characters ke naam na daalne se kitna confusion hata hai na...😊
i am happy i am able to confuse people with my words...

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