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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Ch 5.
Next Morning.

The rays of the sun peeped in through the hospital window and touched Riya's face.It also hit Arjun's face.He woke up from his sleep and quickly drew the curtains to make sure that Riya is not disturbed.
It was 09.00am in the morning.
The whole ETF team went to the hospital to meet Riya.During that time,the doctors also came for a check up.
Arjun: Doc,how is Riya?
Doc: She is fine now.Fever has subsided a lot.Adhe ghante me hosh ajayega.
Arjun: Thanks,Doc.
Doc: My pleasure.
The doctor leave after checking Riya.
After 10mins,Rathod,Ayesha,Chotu and Shree come inside the room.Arjun looks at them.
Arjun: Good morning,Everyone.
Everyone: Good Morning.
Ayesha: Riya kaisi hai? How is she?
Arjun: Riya is out of danger now.Fever has subsided a lot.Adhe ghante mein hosh ayega.
Rathod: Yeh toh khushi ki baat hai.Shree,Doc se puchke aao ki kab tak Riya ko discharge karenge?
Shree: Sure,sir.

After a while,Riya started to move her fingers.Her eyes started to open.Everybody were really happy to see her open her eyes.
After she opened her eyes,she saw her team standing near her head.She saw Ayesha sitting beside her.
Ayesha: Hey,Riya,my sleeping beauty,uth gayi..Thank God,u r safe..
Riya:Thanks.
Rathod went up to her and ruffled her hair and kissed her forehead.
Rathod: Arey,my sweet liitle sister cum officer,how r u feeling now?
Riya: I am fine,bhai.
Shree: Kaisi hai Ri?
Riya: I am feeling much much much better now,but,thori weakness hai. Waise,where is Arjun sir?
Her eyes scanned thorugh the whole room,but failed to find her.A single drop of tear left her doe-shaped eyes.
Riya: Sir,if you dont mind,mujhe aap sab se baat karni hai.
Rathod: Ya,sure,Riya. Anytime.
Ayesha: Yes,Riya. Tumhare andar jo bhi baatein hai,sab boldo.
Riya: Ok.

Riya gets a flashback of how Arjun became angry on her and said those words,"Humare beech jo yeh risha hai,woh bhi toot jayega,samjhhe ya samjhhau".
This words are not leaving her mind,at all...
Precap: Riya returns her engagement ring to Arjun.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
read everything in one go.. n i feel riya is completely right.. arjun had been a jerk to her.. n he must pay for it!!

update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

lovely update...
loved everyone's concern for riya...
precap is interesting...
riya returning her engagement ring... :O
Hope everything is okay...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice 1 dear :)
aww.. riya returning engagement ring..:o
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Ch 6.

Riya is confused whether she should tell them or not.After a lot of thinking,she started to talk.
Riya: Rathod sir,aapko main apna bara bhai manti hu.Toh,I hope ki aap mere iss faisle mein mera saath denge.
Rathod: Of course,baccha.But,tera kya faisla hai?
Shree:Ri,bey jhijak hoke bolo.
Riya brings her left hand forward.She looks at her ring finger where Arjun put the engagement ring,the replica towards to would be married life.A lone tear left her eye.With all courage,she took out the engagement ring.Everybody were shocked seeing Riya doing that.
Ayesha: Riya,yeh kya kar rahi ho?Apna anguthi kyun nikal rahi ho?
Rathod: Riya,what r u doing?Yeh kya kar rahi ho? Aisa maat karo.
Shree: Are you out of ur mind,Ri?
Chotu: yeh kya kar rahi hai,Ri?
Riya: Main jo bhi kar rahi hu,ekdum thik kar rahi hu.Arjun ko track pe lane keliye kar rahi,samjhe ya samjhau?
Rathod: Riya,aisi bachkani harkatein acchi nahi lagti.Rahi baat,Arjun ko track pe laane ki,what does that mean?
Ayesha: Haan,Riya? Bolo.
Riya: Well,aap sab toh jante hi ho ki the ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte se koi galti ki gunjaish nahi hoti hai,par,unho ne yeh galti ki hai ki woh mujhpe haath uthaye thhe.Bas,unhe unki galti ka ehsaas dilana hai mujhe.Aap ready ho?
Rathod: Baat toh tumne sahi ki hai.
Ayesha: Arey wah,Riya.Kya accha idea hai.


After a while,Arjun comes there from home.
He rushes to Riya's side.She saw him and signalled him to help her to get up.
He helped her and,suddenly,he saw her left hand's ring finger empty.He was shocked.
Arjun: Riya,yeh kya hai?tumhari sagaai ki anguthi kahaan gayi?
Riya: Relax,Arjun.
Arjun: Relax... No... Batao,kahaan hai?
Riya: Chillaiye maat,Arjun.Yeh rahi sagaai ki anguthi,Lijiye.
By then,the others come inside and see that there plan is working.
Ayesha nudges Rathod.
Ayesha: Aab aapki yaar ki acchi se class hogi.I m so proud of Riya.
Rathod: Haan,woh toh hai.
Shree: chaliye,hum bhi shuru hote hai.
Chotu: Chal.

Rathod: Kya hua,Arjun?itna gussa kyun ho raha hai?
Arjun: Dekh na Sam,Riya ne apni sagai ki anguthi mujhe wapas de di hai.She wants to break up with me.
Ayesha: What???? Riya,how can you do this to him?Maana ki usse galti hui hai,par,usske liye itna bara kadam.
Riya: Relax,Ayesha? I know what I am doing.
Shree: Are u nuts,Ri? Why the hell r u doing like this with Arjun sir? He loves you,Ri.
Riya: Oh really!!!! If he loves me,then,why did he raise his hand on me?Why did he say those harsh words to me? Why? If i dont have the right on anything connected to him,then,whats the use of being his mangetar?Its better if u back out.
Arjun was shell shocked after hearing this.Riya blinked at everyone,secretly.
Arjun: Mana mujhse galti hui hai.Haan haan,i admit my mistake,Riya. And I am extremely sorry for that,Mujhe woh sab nahi karna chahiye thha.I just love you a lot.Yeh yaad rakhna.
After saying this,Arjun gets up and tries to go out of this,when,he suddenly felt someone hugging him from the back.Riya signalled the others to leave
arjun: choro mujhe,Riya.
Riya: Chhor du,aapko? Thik hai,jaiye aap.aapko kya farak parta hai main jeeyu ya maru?
Arjun swiftly turned towards her and clamped her mouth.
Arjun: Bhool ke bhi aisa maat bolna.Main jee nahi paunga tumhare bina.I love you a lot,Riya. And,I am sorry for yesterday's behaviour.
Riya: Hmm.MAAFI accepted. Waise aap kahin jaarahe thhe kya?
Arjun: Haan.Kahin jaraha thha.Kyunki,tumne yeh anguthi haata di hai,socha main kisi aurke saath sagai karlu? Kya khyal hai?
Riya(clutching his collar): Oye,ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte,yeh galti kabhi bhi maat karna,warna aapka encounter kardungi.Aap sirf aur sirf mere ho,aur kisike bhi nahi,samjhhe ya samjhhau? Jaldi,pehnaiye aap mujhe woh anguthi.
Arjun: abhi pehnata hu.
Arjun takes her left hand and puts the ring on her finger.He slowly takes her palm on his and gently,placed a few wet kisses on it.Seeing this,a lone tear escaped from her eye.
Riya: I love you,Arjun.
Arjun: I love you,too.
After this,they hugged each other very tightly,promising to be with each other,for lifetimes to come.As
Rathod,Ayesha,Chotu and Shree were the witness of this sweet patchup.
Ayesha had tears in her eyes.Rathod saw this and hugged her tightly,ensuring her to be with her all the lifetime.
Riya broke the hug and placed a sweet kiss on Arjun's lips.Arjun also responded to the kiss,as He hugged her tightly.Also,Arjun placed a trail of wet kisses on her forehead,eyes,nose ears.
Suddely,Arjun took out a chain and a box of sindoor.
He applied a pinch of sindoor o her maang and tied the sacred wedding chain on her neck.She was amazed at his actions.Her eyes welled up with tears of joy.
The others came inside and wished them a happy married life.

"Tera hi bas hona chahoon,
Tere drad pe rona chahoon,
Tere dil ke inn zakhmon pe,
Marham main hona chahoon."

Arjun and Riya,now,married,promising each other to stay together for lifetimes to come and share joys and sorrows together.


The End.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awww read ua story in on go and this is cutteee... <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome ending :)
loved aisha and rathore's dialogue churana wala scene :)
loved everyone's concern for riya :)
their patch up was so cute :) loved riya's dialogue "Oye,ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte,yeh galti kabhi bhi maat karna,warna aapka encounter kardungi.Aap sirf aur sirf mere ho,aur kisike bhi nahi,samjhhe ya samjhhau?" :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
niceee!!!

wht a cute and nice patchup!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awww the story ended wo bhi itni jaldi...!!! :(
but awsum update...!!!
loved it...!!!
kya plan ta arjun ko track pe laane ka...!!!😆
wow ariya married...!!
ending was amazing...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
wow
its so nice
read it in one go
very beautifully written

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