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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyarani

Drrr to gud n heart tuching...one of my fav songgg. ..update soon. with next part...wanna to read more...feeling sad for riya...hey plz dr pm me this sss



hey Piyarani,
this is also one of my favorite songs.
Agla part kuch hi der main update hojayega.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc start.. continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch2.


Ayesha,Shree and Chotu went inside Riya's cabin.They saw her crawled up in a corner,hugging Arjun's photo.This view made everyone sad. Ayesha went forward towards,when she heard Riya murmuring,"M...M... Main aapse bohut pyaar karti hu,Arjun sir.Please m...m...mujhe akela chh...chhor ke maat jaiye.Main jeee...jee nahi paungi aapke baghaer."

BG Music.
"Karle kubul khudaya mere sajde,
Aab toh naseeb mein mere usse likhde".

She was praying in her heart to her Bappa,that,don't take away Arjun from me. This scene made Shree and Chotu cry.
Ayesha shakes Riya to make her come back to reality,when she realizes that Riya is burning with high fever.Ayesha found it strange.She double checked it,but,it was confirmed.She didnt eat or drink anything the whole day.
Ayesha(shouted): Shree,Riya ko bohut tez bukhar hai.Usski badan kaaph raha hai.We need to take to the hospital,right now.Chotu,call the ambulance right now.Shree,Sameer ko phone lagao,right now.
Chotu calls the ambulance and Shree informs Rathod immediately.
The ambulance arrives in 10mins.While Shree carried her in his arms,he felt his arms getting wet.He was confused.
Chotu: Ayesha,ye dekho.Riya ke daaye haath pe gehra chot.Ussne uski naase kaat li.Hey bhagwaan,Ri ko jaldi se thik kardo.
Riya was taken to Lilavati Hospital immediately.Ayesha went with her in the ambulance,while,Shree and Chotu followed the ambulance.
Soon,they arrived in the hospital.She was being taken to the ICU.As it stopped infront of the ICU,the doctor examined her and said,"This is police case.Aap log police ko bulaiye."
Chotu became red with anger and grabbed the doctor's collar.Chotu,angrily,said,"Hum log police se hai,We are from Emergency Task Force,ETF.yeh humari colleague hai.Abhi ke abhi iski treatment start karo,warna..."
doctor: Sorry sir..Nurse,jaldi se patient ki BP aur glucose check karo.Glucose agar kam dikhaye toh IV drip start kardo,right now.

The doctors were doing their work.Outside the ICU,Ayesha,Chotu and Shree were pacing from here and there.Suddenly,Rathod arrives there.
Ayesha notices him and runs towards him.She hugs him tightly.
Rathod: Shree,Ri kaisi hai? Doctors ne kya kaha?
Shree: Kuch nahi kahaan docs ne.Abhi abhi usse andar leke gaye hai.
Rathod: Bhagwaan se prarthna karo.
After half an hour,doctors come out of the ICU.
Rathod: Doctor,main ACP Sameer Rathod,ETF. Patient kaisi hai?
Doc: Sir,Patient aapki kya lagti hai?
Nobody could answer his question.
A voice from behind said,
"Patient meri mangetar lagti hai."
everybody turned to see the man.It was none other than ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte,the love of his life.
Doc: Ok.Aap mere saath aiye.Kuch forms pe sign karne hai.
Arjun: Ok.
Arjun and the doc went away to the reception to sign papers and to fulfill formalities.
Ayesha thought,"How come Arjun got to know this?"
Rathod answered everybody's question.
Rathod: Tum sab soch rahe ho ki Arjun ko kaise pata chala.Well,Arjun ko maine bataya iss baare main.
Ayesha: How could you,Sam? Tum jante thhe ki aaj subah Riya aur Arjun ke beech mein kitna bara jhagra hua thha.Even,he tried tried to raise his hand on her,still you told him? How could you,Sam?
Shree: Aapne aisa kyun kiya,Sir? Aap toh Riya ko apna behen maante ho na,toh,aap aisa kyun kia?
Chotu: Shree,Ayesha,chup raho.Sir ko explain toh karne do.
Rathod: Mujhe majburan karna para.subah ke incident ke baad,Arjun gusse main aake office se chala gaya.Usse baad mein ehsaas hua ki usse aisa bartaav Riya ke saath aisa nahi karna chahiye thha,kyunki,Riya ko usska gussa aur naarazgi bardaasht nahi hoti.Isliye maine bataya.
Meanwhile,the doctor and Arjun comes after fulfilling the formalities.
The doctor goes inside to check Riya.
After half an hour,the doc comes outside.
Ayesha: Doc,Ri kaisi hai?
Doc: Dekhiye,Mrs.Rathod. She is suffering from high fever aur unke daaye haath ke kalai pe kaach ke katne ka nishaan hai.Thank god,unki naase nahi kati.Unhe aab injections diya gaya hai.Subah tak bukhar utar jayega.Behoshi ki halat mein woh kuch keh rahi thhi,"Arjun,main aapse bohut pyaar karti hu,Mujhe chhor ke maat jaiye,jee nahi paungi aapke baghaer."
After hearing this,Ayesha burst into tears.She hugged Rathod tightly and Rathod was consoling her.
Shree and Chotu were shocked to the core.
Arjun stood there,leaning against a pillar.A lone tear escaped his eye.
He then went into a flashback of morning's incident.

Precap: Arjun having flashbacks of the morning incident.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aare yaar! Ye kya kar diya?! Ek to SS ki starting me Riya ko itna rula diya...aab precap me sidha hospital me hi daal diya?! Itni tortur maat karo yaar uss masum ke uper!
Haa..haa... Jokes apart, really nace update. Ekhon taratari next part update koro...joldi joldi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow.. again an amazing update dear :) lovd evry 1's concrn for riya.. precap... waitng for it.. continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroojarain


wow.. again an amazing update dear :) lovd evry 1's concrn for riya.. precap... waitng for it.. continue soon..




hey,thanks,Aroojarain.
I think tumhe mere kahaniyo se be intehaan pyaar hogaya hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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riyaaa!! meri doll!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

wow!! aisha and rahod were married??? 😛 😛 😛

bas riya ko jaldi tik karo!!! zebbie!!

arjun entered!! 😊 😊!!

lov to see deir concern 2wards riya!!!

update soon!!waitng to see d fb!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: alee001

riyaaa!! meri doll!!😭


wow!! aisha and rahod were married???😛😛😛

bas riya ko jaldi tik karo!!! zebbie!!

arjun entered!!😊😊!!

lov to see deir concern 2wards riya!!!

update soon!!waitng to see d fb!!




yes.
Rathod and Ayesha are married in this story.
Ok ok ok...
Main Riya ko thik kardungi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely dear update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch 3.

As Arjun was leaning on the pillar,a lone tear escaped his eyes.Then he remembered the morning incident.

Flashback:
Riya: Arey,Shree. Aj toh Arjunn Sir ka birthday hai na.Why dont we celebrate it?
Shree: Good idea. Par yeh hoga kaise?
Ayesha: Dont worry.Arjun ka yaar aur mera pati,ACP Sameer Rathod unko leke aayenge.Tab tak,hum sab unke surprise party ki taiyaari karte hai.
Riya: Ok.This will be the first time I am celbrating his birthday,as his fiancee... I am feeling so happy today.
Ayesha,Riya,Shree and Chotu decorated the whole ETF Office in a simple way,coz,Riya knew that,Arjun doesnt like dhamaka type parties.
Riya brought a small cake for Arjun,his favorite one,chocolate mud cake.
After a while,Rathod came inside the office with Arjun.
Arjun: Arey Rathod...bijli nahi hai kya?Lights ko kya hua?
Suddenly Arjun switches on the switch and everyone shouted,"SURPRISE... HAPPY BIRTHDAY ARJUN SIR."
he was really touched by his team's genuine gesture.
Riya brought the cake infront of him.
He looked at the cake,and,made an angry face.
Arjun(in an angry tone): Yeh cake kisne laya hai aur kahaan se? Batao?
Everybody remained shocked.
Riya: Sir,maine layi hai,aapke liye.Aapka favorite chocolate mud cake.Aapko accha nahi laga?
Arjun(couldnt control his anger and started accusing Riya): How do you know? Tumhari himmat kaisi hui yeh cake laane keliye? Tumhe kisne bataya thha,Riya,batao Riya?
Arjun gripped her upper arms tightly which made her wince in pain.
Riya: Sir,mujhe dard horaha hai.Mera haat choriye,please.
Rathod: Arjun... Just shut up... Kya kar rahe ho uske saath woh bhi mere nazro ke samne? How dare u?
Arjun: Wait... Tumne meri diary parhi kya? I asked u something.Kya tumne meri diary parhi,kya? Answer me,Daam it..
Riya nods in a YES.
Arjun became more furious at that time.She grabbed Riya's arm and took her to the main lounge of ETF
Arjun: How dare you,Riya? Tumhari itni himmat ki tumne meri personal cheezo pe nazar rakhna shuru kardia?
Riya: Maine intentionally nahi parhi aapki diary.aur,kabse,humare pyaar mein tum aur main aane laage? Aur,ek aur baat.Main aapki cheezon pe nazar nahi rakh rahi hu.
Riya: Bohut bolni lagi ho tum,Riya.Ekdum battameez ho gayi ho tum.Tumhe ETF mein aane keliye kitne paise diye gaye honge?
Everybody shocked at Arjun's words.
Rathod(getting furious): Just shut up,Arjun.Riya tumhari mangetar hai aur ETF mein research analyst hai.
Arjun: Janta hu,Rathod. Yahaan pe rehke isse behtar hoga ki woh Kolkata EtF mein join kare as a research analyst.
Riya(so shocked): Arjun sir,aap yeh kaisi baat kar rahe hai?Main nahi jaungi reasearch desk mein wapas.
Arjun. TUMHE JANA HOGA...
Riya:Main nahi jaungi,nahi jaungi kabhi bhi nahi jaungi.
Before Riya could see anything,Arjun ne uske upar haat uthaya.Thappar lagte lagte nahi lagi.
Everybody was shocked at this behavior.
Ayesha: Arjun... Yeh kya bakwaas kar rahe thhe Riya ke saath?
Arjun: Na...
Ayesha:Riya agar tumhari diary par bhi li,toh kya hua? She is ur mangetar.Usse pura haq hai.
Arjun: She is still my mangetar,not my legally wedded wife.Jab hogi tab dekha jayega.
Riya: Sorry,Sir.mujhe aapke diary ko haat nahi lagana chahiye thha.Meri wajah se yeh hua hai,I am sorry.
Arjun throws away the cake in the ground,making Riya disappointed.
Arjun turned back to face Riya.but,she never looked at him..
Riya: Maine sorry bola toh hai...Par,Arjun aise bartav kyun kar rahe hai,etc,etc...

Riya: please aaiye na.Cake toh cut karlijiye.
Arjun: Nahi...
Riya: Please.
Arjun:nahi Riya,,,,
Riya: Please thora sa khalo.
Arjun: Dont force me,Ri.
Riya: thora sa khane se kuch nahi hoga.
Riya takes a slice of cake towards Arjun,but,Arjun yanked her arm away and said,"tum baaz nahi aaogi apni harkato se.Ekbaar bola na tumhe,door raho mujhse.Mere niji mamle mein dakhal maat do.Door raho mujhse warna humare beech jo yeh rishta bacha hai,woh bhi toot jayega,samjhi ya samjhau?"
everybody were shocked after listening to this,especially Riya.
Riya couldnt hold back her tears.She ran away from there and locked herself in the cabin.She slumped down on the floor and started crying loudly.The whole day went like this.Arjun gusse mein aake office chhorke chala gaya aur Riya apne kamre mein bandh rahi,beena kuch khaye,beena kuch piye.
Flashbacks ends.

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