OS: Sari umaar sang rehne ka vaada *COMPLETE*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Charecter Sketch.
ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte
Asha Suryakant Rawte(arjun ki behen).
ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod
Ankita Sameer Rathod.
Shreekant Sen
Chandrakant Patil.
Riya Mukherjee.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Whoa!
One more os by you!!
Waiting! 😳

Yaha bhi Anki Mrs.SDR bani hai 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting. Do update soon. And if you dont mind. Plz pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Sneha..

Whoa!
One more os by you!!
Waiting! 😳

Yaha bhi Anki Mrs.SDR bani hai 😉



PU - janmo janmantar ka rishta hai hamara... to Mrs SDR to mai hi banungi na... 😳 😛 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita2804




PU - janmo janmantar ka rishta hai hamara... to Mrs SDR to mai hi banungi na...😳😛😆


Saadha suki raho tum dono! 😃 😆

Second reason why I wanted to be behind Shree!
Arjun nd Riya toh humesha saath rahenge! 😳
Atleast it can be Shree nd Sneha!! 😳 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Sneha..


Saadha suki raho tum dono! 😃 😆

Second reason why I wanted to be behind Shree!
Arjun nd Riya toh humesha saath rahenge! 😳
Atleast it can be Shree nd Sneha!! 😳 😆


🤣 🤣

Keep it up PU...

n thanx for the aashirwaad
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita2804



🤣 🤣

Keep it up PU...

n thanx for the aashirwaad


Actually one more aashirwaad for u guys! 😃
Dudo nahao.. Puto phalo! 😉

Kahi is os mein bhi tum pregnant nikli toh! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya i am also waiting pls update soon and pls pm me👍🏼👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting .. update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"Bhai behen ka rishta bohut hi khubsurat aur pak rishta hai.
Bhai o ka daatna,behen ki shararat,bhai log apne roothe huye behen ko manana.
Inn chote chote pyaar bhari lamho banati hai Bhai aur Behen ka rishta aur bhi khaas.

Yeh kahaani hai Arjun aur Asha ki.
Asha Arjun ki choti behen hai,par Arjun Asha ko kabhi bhi apni behan ki darja nahi diya.Asha dukh toh zaroor hoti thi,par,uss dukh mein bhi usse sukh milta tha ki usski bhai uski samne hai,sahi salamat."

yeh kahaani shuru hoti hai Asha ki maut ke baad.


Dear Arjun Bhaiya,
Main janti hu ke mere jaane ke baad,aapko nahi dukh huwa hoga,kyunki,aapne kabhi bhi mujhe apne choti behan nahi mana hai.
Aap har waqt mujhpe chillate thhe,gussa karte thhe,phir bhi,aapke gusse aur aapke chillane pe mujhhe aapka pyaar nazar aata tha,ek bhai ka pyaar apni behen ki orrh.
Main janti hu ki main aapki jeevan mein koi mayne nahi rakti thi,par,aap mere jeevan mein bohut hi ehmiyat rakte thhe.
Aapko yaad hai bhaiya,jab aapko goli lagi thi.Aap bohut dard mein thhe,tarap rahein thhe hospital mein.Aapko goli lagne ki khabar jab mere kaano tak pohuchi,tab mere saanse ruk gayi thi.Aisa laga ki mere upar se mere bhaiya ka saaya mujhse chheen jayega.
Maine raat bhar aapke liye Kanhaji aur Bappa se prarthna karti rahi,ki,"Mere bhaiya ko jaldi se thhik kardo."
phir,Bappa ne meri prarthna sunli.

Bhaiya,jab aap ye khat parenge,tab tak main duniya se ja chuki hongi.
Main jana toh nahi chahti thi,kyunki maine,"Sari umar sang rehne ka vaada kiya thha",Maa se.
Par,main woh vaada nahi nibha payi.
Bhaiya,mere jaane k baad,aap kabhi bhi dukhi maat hoiyega,kyunki mere ACP bhaiya k aakhon mein aansu acche nahi lagte hai.
Bhaiya,aap mere guroor thhe.
Aapke liye main kya thhi,yeh main nahi janti hu,par,aap mere liye,mere Bhagwaan thhe,mere IDOL thhe.
Bhaiya,main aapse vadaa karti hu,ki,agle janam,main aapki beti hokar janam lungi iss duniya mein.Vaada raha mera.
Sari umar saang rehne ka vaada.


Samerr bhaiya ke paas main apni saari amanat sop ke jarahi hu.Jaane ke baad unse le lijiyega.

I will miss you,Bhaiya.

Aapki,
Asha."

Everyone,including Arjun,started to cry.
Arjun felt very guilty after reading the letter.
Arjun thought,"jis larki ne mujh jaise insaan ko apna bhai samjha,uss behen ko maine thukra diya.main Asha ki bhai kehlane ki layak nahi hu".

Sameer Rathod gave a box and a painting to Arjun.
When Arjun opened the box,he saw that,the box was full of 15 rakhis.The painting was of Arjun when he was awarded with the promotion of ACP.She painted it with her own hands.
After seeing all this,Arjun cried a lot.
Riya and Ankita were in tears when they heard the last line,
"Bhaiya,agle janam mein main aapki beti hokar iss duniya mein aaungi.Vaada raha aapse."


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