New Ariya FF :Dn't mess with ME.(New Update Pg22) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
mannu di sorry for late comment. read the whole part in one go.

firstly after having CS i was like ih wow kitne sweet hai yeh kids but as i get into the story my initial thaughts immediately disappeared..OMG!!! they are lottle imps specialy Samar & Aarav 😲

all the time they teases,performs pranks on Ruchi,creates mess around & put the blame on her!!!! 😲 baap re kitna shaitan hai.

ghar ke aandar football match & broke wedding frame & vas!! I seriously want to hats of to their parents,omg how could even mannage them??

Ruchi is also very chalak. How she takes revenge being an innocent was realy appreciable. she is very smart 😛

🤣 🤣 are bechara Arjun ko kyun daat padha?? usne toh kuch kiya hi nehi 😆

Update ASAP di. love the concept.

just a query is it a OS or SS??

Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
omg ruchi naughty girl😆
poor samar aarav they got caught & no ice cream😆
riya scold arjun 4 aarav's behavior🤣
awww last part s so sweet
loved arjun-ruchi bonding😊
wanna see same bonding with samar & aarav😛
they r also good na😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: -sree13-

mannu di sorry for late comment. read the whole part in one go.

firstly after having CS i was like ih wow kitne sweet hai yeh kids but as i get into the story my initial thaughts immediately disappeared..OMG!!! they are lottle imps specialy Samar & Aarav 😲

all the time they teases,performs pranks on Ruchi,creates mess around & put the blame on her!!!! 😲 baap re kitna shaitan hai.

ghar ke aandar football match & broke wedding frame & vas!! I seriously want to hats of to their parents,omg how could even mannage them??

Ruchi is also very chalak. How she takes revenge being an innocent was realy appreciable. she is very smart 😛

🤣 🤣 are bechara Arjun ko kyun daat padha?? usne toh kuch kiya hi nehi 😆

Update ASAP di. love the concept.

just a query is it a OS or SS??

Dear mai khud hi soch rahi hue ye OS hai ya SS , aisa na ho ki start to OS se kiya tha, end FF pe ho jaye.😆 I'm still thinking ki kya karu.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
manali di..jyada mat socho

next part update karo

yeh 3 cuties ki badmaaashi read karni hian
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
superb update :) loved it
poor samar and aarav they didn't get any ice-cream 😆
love how rathore was pampering ruchi :)
awww riya scolded my poor arjun...
arjun's bonding with ruchi is just superb :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Sry readers for giving short updates , Actually damn busy in sme imp matters . Sry guys. Guys i think can i turn this OS into FF. its upto you. Plz suggest me.
Arjun : Ruchi no. ( And try to adjust his hair)
Ruchi : Nako na re.( No..)
Arjun : Sameer kaka hasel na( Sameer uncle laugh at me)
Ruchi : Ok.
Arjun : ( Kisses her cheeck ) Thts my girl.
They come into hall and sees Riya still in bedroom. Arjun says Rathod , "Lagta hai mehfill jam gayi."
Rathod smile at him , "Ha " He called his name "Kavs ", "kavs" after sevearl calling they come into hall. Arjun leaves Ruchi . Riya look at Aarav & call him .
Aarav : Ha.
Riya : (Shows him Ruchi's doll ) Ye kya hai?
Aarav : ( bend down his head , & stole gazes to his little sis)
Riya : I'm asking you somthing.( Riya said loudly)
Arjun felt bad , he comes near Aarav.
Arjun : Riya , jaau de na , plz ( leave it plz)
Riya : Nahi . (no) Aapke karan bacche bighade gaye hai Arjun .
Arjun : Its k. Ek doll hi to hai.
Riya : No way. he have to be punish.
Aarav : ( lift his head & look at his parents) It's k Dad .
Suddenely Samar speaks , "Maine kuch nahi kiya" Sammer turn and look at him. "Sacchi mai" Samar again inform his father.
Arjun : Ok. guys , now we have to leave.
Ariya & their family comes to car, Arjun takes drving seat , while Riya help their children to seat properly. Samar comes near car & says to Aarav , "All the best " Aarav going to wish him same , but stop when he sees Sameer exactly standing back of Samar. Sameer heard everything. Arjun starts car . There is pindrop silence in car. All the time Aarav & Ruchi gossiping , fights , their silly questions make drive easy for Arjun , but tod is a different day , he knows there is a huge explore in his home tod. They reach home , Riya climbe down & open car door for her childern. Riya pick Ruchi in her arms & keep her down & give her bag to her. Aarav also climbe down from car. Arjun goes to park car, Riya headed for house.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
superb update...!!!
lvd it..!!
arjun n ruchi were vry cute...!!!
cant wait fr d nxt part...!!
continue sooon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
@mannu di make it ff. i would love to read this as ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Kya update thi manali di

Loved it

Ria n Kavs ki talk

Only rathore had d rite to call her Kavs ...WOW

Ruchi so sweet

her talks wid arjun /...

papa ki pari ...luved d father - daughter chemistry

Arav ki band bajegi ghar par

waiting eager;y for more
Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Aaa...abhi hosh mein aayi hoon...

Rathore and kaveri...as husband wife wow...its like dream come true...


So only rathore have the right to call her kavs...so cute...and she try to teach him marathi...but...mein to vahi atak gayi...


Lekin jab...riya told abt bengali coaching...thats so funny...poor riya she not able to teach ruchi her language...

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But the most interesting part is arjun and ruchi...for arjun ruchi request is like order...

She is so close to him...im imgaing whole scenerio... it look so cute ehen she put his hair on his forhead...



Hey dear...thanks for more marathi...I love it...

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