New Ariya FF :Dn't mess with ME.(New Update Pg22)

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Two Boys ages 10 yrs old played with one little girl. One little girl around 6 yrs old is trying to play with them. Because they make her cry , always taunt her , don't take her in her team. And when she is playing alonely with her doll , the two boys always laugh on her , tease her. And one women who around her mid 30s try to handle them.
Their parents Mr & Mrs Rathod & Mr & MrsRawte are on their respective jobs. Sameer Rathod , Arjun & Riya working in a ETF. While Rathod's wife is a Banker. All are busy in their works , so usually childerns are in Daycare , but today are childrens school as well as daycare's holiday . So , after lot thiking their parnts decided to keep their childrens at Rathod's home and Rathod's maid take care all of them.
First have a look on their Childrens:
Samar Rathod : Age 10 yrs. Naughty and Angry like father.
Aarav Arjun Rawte : Age 10 yrs , Too stubborn , bt yet soft hearted , and try show angry like his mother Riya.
Ruchi Rawte : Age 6 yrs. Totally Crazy like her mother Riya , But too stubbron & clever exactly like her father Arjun . She always knows how to complete herv work from others. Her fathers Jaan.
ONE IMP THING MRS. KAVERI RATHOD CHARA. DEDICATED TO MY DEAR SWEET FRND Kaveriw2008.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG amazing kids...

Naksh, Arav n veera rite...

super amazing concept waiting for chapters

Superb Yahan bhi ariya hainšŸ‘

waiting waiting

n sorry 1 took d first post ..maarna mat


Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!
Nice strt.. 😃
Waiting for the next part!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh di totally different concept
and 3 kids ar too cute
waiting for the next part di
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ye kya ...ye to sarasar cheating hai...

This is not fare...

Os likhake sirf cs diya

Aur wo kids to sach mein kitane cute hai
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Samar & Aarav play Caram & Ruchi pleaeding them to take her in play. But they says , "Tujhe khelna nahi aata . " Ruchi also says Aarav her big brother that she play with him so they both easily defeat Samar , but Aarav answeres her , " Mai akele hi kafi hue." Ruchi seats alone. No-one play with her , she mis her father , who always play with her , she always give him tea from her "Bhtukali" ( small kitchen set for little girls for play) And her father pretend to drink that tea. She immeadtly goes to Rathod's bedroom where her mother Riya keep her bag , Ruchi climbe on bed & open her bag & open her small kitchen set . She come hall with her kitchen set & take a corner . Ruchi silently play with her kitchen set. First she put on little cooker with Rice & Dal. Then she makes Roties & Sabzi. Aarav silently look at her. After finishing her cook , she take two small plates frm her kitchen set and pretend to take food in plates. Then she goes to Samar & Aarav. She handed them plates & ask them to eat. Samar & Aarav pretend to eat from plate. Ruchi happily ask them , " Khana kaisa tha.?" Samar makes faces and says , " ye khana tha ? , cheee mujhe pasand nahi aaya." While Aarav " Ruchi , tumhe khana bana bhi nahi aata , kya khana hai ye , meri naak kaat di tune." Little Ruchi feels bad , she look at both and goes back to her kitchen set , Aarav & Samar gives high - five to each other , while Shanti their servant ask them , " Kyu tang karte ho re bechari ko ?" Duo answers her . "Maza aata hai." and agin starts their play.
In lunch time Shanti gives them all food , Samar look at food & sees brinjals sabzi , he look at Shanti she is busy to clean kitchen platform. Samar slowly put brinjals sabzi back in big vessel & ask Shanti for Sauce. Shanti does not notice that Samar puts sabzi back in vessel , she give him sauce . Here Aarav loves brinjal , so he happyli eat his food , but he dn't like curry , so he look here & there and when he is sure that Shanti does not notice him he slowly give curry in Ruchi's curry bowl , Ruchi try to objct that , but Aarav succesfully keep her mum. Guys finish their lunch & wash their hands , Ruchi also climbe down from chair when Shanti ordered her , "Tai , pura khana khaao." "Par maine khaa liya , ye to ye... " Ruchi try to explain , but keep mum bcoz of Aarav. Shanti lift her & feed her food. Ruchi silently eat food , while Aarav peeps in from piller & makes werid faces to Ruchi.
After lunch they start to play dartboard. Ruchi decides to go but remeber that they never allow her to play with them. So , she play with her Doll. Her mother brought this doll for her. She lovely call her doll ' Ruhi ' Ruchi talks her doll & pretend to wash her cloths , after that she chenges her cloths & makes her hair with small comb. she tie her hair with small reb rubber from packet that comes with doll. Samar look this & nudges Aarav . They both goes to her & ask her so lovelingly , " Kya kar rahi ho ?" Ruchi chirpily informed them. " Ruhi ko taiyyar kar rahi hue." Boys immedatly look at each other their eyes shows their mischivious , but little Ruchi faile to understand their plan. They ask her : Hum bhi khele?" Ruchi happyli nodded to them. They sat near her , "Dada tu Ruhi cha Mama ani Samar Dada tu Ruhi cha Kaka" ( Aarav bhaiiya tum Ruhi ka Mama banana , aur Samara bhaiyya tum Ruhi ka Chcha) Boys nodded . Then they played for some time. Samar winks at Aarav . Aarav look at his sister , she is busy to cook food for Ruhi , Aarav & Samar . Aarav slowly stol hair colour sparys bottole from doll's kit & coloured doll's hair in very werid way. Aftyer finishing his work he look at doll & flanked his devalish smile give doll to Ruchi. Ruchi sees her doll & her little heart broken into pieces she starts to cry loudly , nw Samar & Aarav scared , Aarav immedatly look at her & warn her with big eyes , " Abhi royi na to puri doll ko colour karunga , chup kar , but he also feels sad when look his little sister's tears , her tears is his weakness. "Acha thik hai , mai meri pocketmoney se teri liye nayi doll lunga." Aarav informed her. " Ha , mai bhi tujhse paisa dunga , meri pocketmoney se ." Samar also inform him. Shanti is in balcony , so she can't hear Ruchi's cry.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Ye kya ...ye to sarasar cheating hai...

This is not fare...

Ab kya hua dear...
Maine kya kiya.???????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007


Ab kya hua dear...
Maine kya kiya.???????




Ab to tu ek no ki badmash hai...

Second update nahi kiya tha is liye first comment

And second update abhi padha nahi...waise meine first comment edit kiya hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...arjun love to ply Bhatukali with ruchi...so cute...lekin aarav to totally apane baap pe gaya hai khadus kahi ka

Ooo bechari ruchi aarav ki vajah se usse extra khana pada...

Baap re ye bacche to bahot badmash hai...lekin cute bhi hai...I like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ruchi wips her tears & keep her doll in her bag. Samar & Aarav play cards , while Ruchi ask Shanti to swtich on T.V so she can watch her fav cartoon on Barbie. Ruchi sees her cartoon & sometimes she giggling loudly & also claps her hands. She loves everything in that cartoon. Every Sunday Arjun is dying to see T.V because first Ruchi watch her cartoons & after that Aarav watch his fav cars show. Arjun complained Riya , "Riya , sang na , mala pan T.V bagaychayay." ( Riya bolo na , mujhe bhi T.V dekhna hai) While Riya ans him , " Ratri bagh na , tyanya baghu de na re Arjun." ( Raat ko dekhiye , abhi unhe dekhne dijiye na Arjun.) After seeing same condition in 2-3 Sundays Arjun finally purchases new T.v for his bedroom ,and happily enjys his Sunday. Here Samar & Aarav getting bore , Samar goes to Ruchi and orderd her , "Ye remote do , hamhe WWF dekhna hai." "Nahi ... nahi" Ruchi yelled on him. Aarav comes there & says her , "Ruchi vo dekh vaha pe kya hai ..." Aarav says her to disturb her. Ruchi turn her neck & look at the dirction where Aarav says her , as soon as Ruchi turn her neck Aarav immeadtly snatched remote from her hand. Ruchi look at her angrily. Nw Samar & Aarav happily enjys their WWF match , and Ruchi sadly fiddels with her frock. Aarav look at her & tell her , "Ye chup-chaap match bagh." (Ae chup-chaap T.V dekh.) Ruchi sadly look at her brother. Between match Samar & Aarav gets motivated and starts fighting like Wrestlers. Ruchi look at them scaredly while Shanti try to slove their fight , but her bad luck she hit on her hands & stumack. After satisfied with their fighting they ask Shanti for water, Shanti give them angry look and goes to kitchen & brings water for them. They both driking water. Suddenly landline buzzes. Shanti is about to pick a phone , when Samar comes phone near hurridly , "Papa ka phone" with that he pick up phone & talk with his father like good boy. After 10 mins phone again buzzes this time Riya speaking , she speakls to Aarav & then Ruchi. Ruchi try to say abt Aarav & Samar & stop when Aarav pleaded her not to tell. After 5 mins phone again buzzes this time its Arjun , he can't stay long from his childrens. Ruchi is near the phone so she immedatly answers phone. She hears his voice & feel happy.
Ruchi : Baba (Daddy)
Arjun : Ha , Sonya ( Ys my dear)
Ruchi : Baba , tu kay kartos? ( Daddy , what are you doing) she asks him innocently.
Arjun : Baba , kaam kartoy , tu jevlis ka bala?( Daddy na , i am doing my work , You ate food?)
Ruchi : Ho baba , mi sagale khaale.( while looking at Aarav.) ( Ys daddy , i ate whole)
Arjun : Shabbas ... ( Gud girl)
Ruchi : ( voice filled with emotion) Baba , tu kadhi yenar ? ( Daddy , when y
ou are coming?)
Arjun : ( feels different ) Kay zhale bala , dada ne trass dila , koni kay bol le ka? ( what happened dear your big brother does not behave with you well ? or any other person scold you?) ( Arjun ask her worridly)
Ruchi : Nahi , baba mala tujhi aatvan yete. ( No , daddy i miss you.)
Arjun : Bala , baba lavkar lavkar kaam karto mag tula ghun jaayla yeto.( Dear , daddy try to finish his work fastly , then he will meet you.)
Arjun : Aata Dada la phone de ( Give phone to your big brother)
Ruchi hand over phone to Aarav .
Arjun talks to Aarav , Aarav only speaks "ys baba , No baba , nahi baba" (ys daddy , no daddy , no ..no daddy) while looking at Ruchi.
After 10 mins Aarav keep phone. And goes to Ruchi, "Tu radu nako , baba & Aai yenar aahet lavkar." (Don't cry , Our parents come soon.)

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