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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Beautifully written...
Arjun's feeling..clearly drawn...
One of my fav songs... keep writing dear..

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ankita2804

@ankita2804

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Simply Speechless Disha...

amazinggg...

This is exactly what Arjun must have been feeling each and every moment after losing Roshni, who was something more than his life...

how beautifully you put these emotions...

omg...

I never read such kind of OS before...

thank you so much for this treat...

you forced my tears to come out of my eyes...

hats off...!!!

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Ossam.😊

My fav song.

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ALEKHYA VENDRA

@alee001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

itsss fantastic!!!!!!!!!!👏 👏 👏

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diva

@rockz.diva

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

M CRYNG CRYNG N JUST CRYNG
Not able to stop my tears..
it hurts 😭😭😭
I miss you omg it made me cry more n more
y diz happned

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Dishu the first Arni work of you was a sweet,simple but realy heartfelt one.

how you bring Arjun's heart out it was like I can touch those emptiness. Why Arjun is suffering so much pain?? whats his mistake?? to be in love?? even I was searching for these answers.

very very emotional one with a beautiful selection of song & such a lively narration. well done

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

that was such an awesome and emotional OS :) loved it

very well written

song selection was great

thanks for the PM :)

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awesum dear..
beautiful n emotional describe arjun pain..
one of my fav sng..
me crying..!!!!
loved it..
continue d gud wrk!!
claps!!
i m a very bad writer..!

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

superb beautiful update...!!!⭐️

lvd it...!!!

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Disha

@.Brok3nSoul.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Aliya_begh
nice..!

Thank you ! 😊

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
wow..emotional rual diya mujhe
nice work ,agey bhi likte rehna

Thank you Dear! 😊

Originally posted by: prava55663
Dishu...You just let out Arjun's heart in words here...
Awesome Girl...The loneliness in his life...Beautiful written..

Fantastic..keep writing!!

Thanks Prava! 😊

I will as long as you keep reading! 🤗

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
WOW beautiful...
aankhon mein aasoo aa gaye yaar...

poor Arjun...my heart goes out to him!

ufff...iss pyar mein itna dard kyun hai yaar...u were just mindblowing...dard, gham aur pyar...sab ek hi shabd ke teen alag alag naam hai shaayad!

Thank you Di! 😭

Mere bhi aankh mein aansu aa gaye the!

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