FF: Fire and Water 2 (Chapter 28-B on Pg. 18)

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Amazing part... So Achaya s not the spy... Sikki's case s really twisted one... Arjun ws cool duing the fight... his instinct are amazing... update soon...

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Amazing part...

loved the way Arjun turned the tables at them...so cool...his instincts worked..

post soon!

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

it was amazing

once again you rock

amazing...

cn soon

and tnx for pm👏

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

as always Arjun thinks always one step ahead of everyone👏

his instincts saved him and that Shravan😃

and Riya's turmoil was beautifully written and her trust in Arjun is wonderful😊

Please update soon😊

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Wonderful part dear.
Loving it.
Waiting for next part.
Pls update soon.
Thanx for pm dear.

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856040

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

So Arjun is fine thankgod

update soon

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

loved it😃...the case is really griping,i must say u have amazing skills of keeping your readers glued👏👏...u beautifully mange to keep all elements i.e suspense,thrill,action,emotions,romance,friendship in your story😃
arjun was just awesome...the way he modified the plan was great😊...n of course riya pe sangat ka assar sach mein ho raha hai😛...her intuition was superb😃
waiting for arjun to return to the headquarters n he meeting riya...wishing for thoda sa...bahut thoda sa romance😉...would we be getting that rose?😛

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sana khan

@sanakhan.khan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Hey dear read all parts its Awsome yaar...u r sch a gd writer...luv ur story d way u describe each n evrythng abt d case its simply awsome...thnx for d pm babe...u r really a rose...