FF: Fire and Water 2 (Chapter 28-B on Pg. 18)

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Oh damn its so confusing. Who is the real traitor

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jemii

@jemii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

u r a awesome writer.. its so thrilling n interesting.. waiting for u next update.

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

hi dear🤗...brillant update when i was reading it na it was like a fiction novel...or i was watching a crime series which has so much twists...riya is so worried for arjun...n arjun ne accha game khela sharvan ke saath...update soon

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Dear believe me claps krte krte hath dukhne lgne h
grt
loving it..

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yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

awesome part
loved arjuns turned of plan nd it worked
nd also saved him nd shravan
loved the whole part
thanx for the pm
update soon

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rparash

@rparash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Awesome update...Just loved it 😊

Just can't wait for the next chapter...

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

fantastic update :) loved it

arjun was great :) his instincts saved him

the way he modified the whole plan was just superb 😃

omg arjun injured his arm :( poor guy

so acharya is not the traitor then who is the traitor?

the case is getting so interesting...

eagerly waiting for next part

thanks for the PM :)

continue soon

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

WOW

Jitani baar bhi bolu kam hai...

i read all parts and just lost in it...i really thought that this is a book and not going to stop,...but i realize that i have to wait for the next update

though it is a investigation plot

but its having the cute touch of romance and comedy ,,,,,,,,,,i really love this

every update is awesome and im sure your going to open thread 3, 4, 5...and go on

Really i missed so many things but im glad that you sent pm on each update,,...thank you dear

I want to ask you where is the index in second thread...i was searching update on each page

second thing...Thanks for adding that pic on your cover page...its beautiful as same as arjun and riya in your book...

mein jitani tarif karu kam hai...

AWESOME...I LOVE IT

Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

superb awsum update..!!!👏⭐️

lvd it..!!

the case is really interesting..!!! it's like m really watching it..!!!⭐️

lvd arjun's instinct.!!! it saved him..!!!

awww riya concerned for arjun...!!!!

hope everything is safe where riya is..!!!

cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!

update soon..!!!

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ValleryRose

@ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
WOW

WOW

WOW

WOW

Jitani baar bhi bolu kam hai...

i read all parts and just lost in it...i really thought that this is a book and not going to stop,...but i realize that i have to wait for the next update

though it is a investigation plot but its having the cute touch of romance and comedy ,,,,,,,,,,i really love this

every update is awesome and im sure your going to open thread 3, 4, 5...and go on

Really i missed so many things but im glad that you sent pm on each update,,...thank you dear

I want to ask you where is the index in second thread...i was searching update on each page

second thing...Thanks for adding that pic on your cover page...its beautiful as same as arjun and riya in your book...

mein jitani tarif karu kam hai...

AWESOME...I LOVE IT