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Hey!!!😊😊 Hope you like chaptr 5!!! Please leave ur commentz!!!😛😛😛

***CHAPTER 5 - Part 1***

Arjun let go off her, but still crouched beside, looking to see whether she was alright. Mira was immobile for a minute. She had felt his arms around her, in that moment she felt safe, protected. She hadn't felt that way in a long time. And the fact that it was him, Arjun sir, who was always so annoyed with her...She snapped out of it and straightened up. "I'm fine Sir, Thank..."

Before she could finish however, he had gotten up, his face stern. "Pay attention and be aware of your surroundings, it's the most important part of this job Miss Sharma." With that parting shot he walked away, brushing away at his shirt, while she stared at him in disbelief. And...Curtainrod Rawte was back, she thought, as Rathod, Shree and Chottu rushed up to her.

Rathod- Are you ok Mira? Did the glass...

Mira- I'm ok sir, thanks to Arjun sir.

Rathod- Good. Thank god he was nearby...

Shree- What was he saying to you anyway?

Mira murmured under her breath- Indirectly telling me to grow a pair of eyes on the back of my head I guess...

Rathod- Kya?

Mira- Ah! Kuch nahi sir...kuch nahi!!!

Chottu brought over the guy who was responsible for the whole mess. He was staggering and stumbling even though Chottu held him firmly. They could see that he was drunk like a fish. He reeked of alcohol and sweat.

Rathod- Who the hell is he, and how did he get in?? Are there no constables posted at the back door?

Chottu- Sir, there was one, but he stepped away for a moment it seems...

Rathod looked like he would like to throw a few bottles of his own at the constable in question.

Chottu- And this is Joseph D'callo, the ex manager of this club.

Rathod-ex?

Chottu- Yes sir, according to the current manager, Samar Bhalla. He says Joseph was fired 3 weeks ago.

Rathod- Why?

Chottu- because of his...drinking problem...

Shree- If he was fired, what is he doing here?

They all looked at the man, hoping to ask him, however, they saw that at this point he wasn't going to speak much.

Rathod- Chottu, take him into custody, and keep a watch on him. We can question him only when he's sober.

Chottu took him away, as Arjun had walked over to join them.

Rathod- We have finished questioning everyone here more or less. Let's analyze what we know so far. Mira, the body?

Mira- No identification on him. No cell phone. All I could find where, a set of keys and this paper with the address of the club. He has a lot of blood on his undershirt, but no cuts or wounds anywhere on his body. The blood does look dried though and seems to have got on his shirt at different times, but I need to do the tests to determine anything further. There were traces of blood on his fingertips too, at some point he had blood on his hands, which he washed off. I also found a fragment of something on his shirt...

Arjun- A fragment of something?

Mira- Something yes.

Arjun- What is that something?

Mira- I don't know, which is why I refer to it as 'something' sir.

Arjun- Then it should be referred to as unidentified object, shouldn't it?

Mira- It's easier to call it something, so...

Arjun- It's not a question of easy or...

Rathod- Stop it both of u!!! This is not a debate ground!! Mira, the COD?

Mira glared at Arjun for a moment before answering. "As I was saying, I have to test to determine the unidentified object, but cause of death is the puncture wound on his arm I believe. He seems to have been injected with something, maybe poison. I found no syringe nearby, and as for time of death, I would estimate to be around 3-4 hours before...around 1 pm or so...but we can only be sure after the autopsy.

Rathod- Hm...Shree, send the body for autopsy...Now, for what we know from the club staff and the others...

Arjun-The club opens its doors at 5.30pm. However, the manager, DJ, bartenders, and some other staff come in at around 2.30 pm every day, to set up the club for the evening. Sometimes, some of the frequent customers of the club, there are called VIP clubbies or something to that effect, they come in early as well. Private lounge rooms are arranged for them, those 2 guys and the 2 women with them, they were today's VIPs. They were celebrating their friend's birthday and thought of having a private celebration before all their other friends came in for the party at night in the club. So by prior agreement, they came in with the staff, and one of the bartenders had just stepped behind the bar, to mix them their drinks, when he discovered the body.

Rathod- No one has been able to identify the body, they all say they have never seen him before. Nobody in the area saw him come into the club, he doesn't look dressed to be in this sort of a place either.

Arjun- But there must be some connection with why he was here. Why his body was here. That is what we have to find.

Rathod- But before that, the most important thing. Who is he. Shree, send his photo across to all the local police stations. Maybe someone has reported him missing. Aur Rawte, tum aur Mira, CG Corp ke offices jao.

Mira- CG Corp?

Arjun- It's the company which owns Club Mute and several other clubs in the city.

Rathod- Right. Talk to the owner and see if you can find something. Main aur Shree yahan ke baaki poochtaach karte hai.

Arjun looked rather reluctant to take Mira with him, as Rathod noted when they walked away. Shree too saw it, and he asked Rathod "Sir, maybe you shouldn't have sent them together. I mean...they don't seem to see eye to eye."

Rathod- Which is exactly why they need to be sent together. This is a team, and the sooner they learn to work with each other, the better...Come on now, we have work to do.

Shree- Right Sir.

Rathod- Wait, do you have the set of keys from the victim?

Shree took out the evidence bag which Mira had given him and held it out to Rathod " Here sir."

Rathod took it and checked through the keys, until he found the one he was looking for.
"A bike key"

Shree- Iska matlab...

Rathod- He must have come in on his own bike...which should be around here somewhere...and if we can locate it...then we can check the registration with the motor vehi..

Shree- And we can identify him!!!

Rathod- let's go Shree.

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Arjun and Mira had arrived at the offices of CG Corp. The ride had been silent, with neither of them saying a single word to each other. While it was awkward to her, and she kept glancing at him intermittently, he stared straight ahead as usual for him, all through the drive. Even now, as they stood surveying the modern 4 storied building that housed the CG Corporation, they didn't say anything to each other, and walked inside.

As they waited for the elevator in the busy reception area, Mira finally gave up and spoke "Sir!!!" She had spoken a bit too loud on the spur of the moment and people around them stopped in their tracks to stare at the two of them. Even Arjun was slightly taken aback, and looked at her as if she had lost it. Mira realised what she had done and looked at Arjun apologetically. "Erm..Sorry Sir...Woh main..."

Arjun ignored her and got into the elevator, while she quickly followed him. Again they stood in the silence punctuated only by the music playing in the elevator. Mira tried again "Fol Chen's In Ruins...I haven't heard the instrumental version before...good choice don't you think?"

Arjun looked at her, and stabbed the level 4 button. Mira sighed and said "Sir. I just wanted to say thank you for what happened in the club, and sorry for...the reception thing...and who are we going to see?"

Arjun- C.Garewal, CEO of this company.

Typical she thought, that he would ignore all the other points in her sentence. "Does Mr. Garewal know we are coming?

Arjun- The inspector called ahead to let him know.

They stepped off the elevator, and as Arjun had said, they were expected. Garewal's PA ushered them in saying "Ms. Garewal is waiting for you officers.

Arjun & Mira both spoke at the same time "Miss?"

A voice spoke from inside the main office. "Yes, Miss Garewal"

The assistant closed the door behind them, and they sat across elegant and smartly dressed lady in front of them. She looked to be in her late twenties to early thirties, but there seemed to be a charm and maturity exuding from her, that was beyond her years.

Arjun- ACP Arjun Rawte, yeh Samaira Sharma. Hum ETF se hai.

Chaya- Mein Chaya Garewal, CEO of CG Corporation

Mira- So you are the C in CG, in C.Garewal...

Chaya smiled- Yes. You see, I realised when I started out, that people tend to give a woman less attention and less credit. In the business world, C. Garewal carried more weight than Chaya Garewal.

Arjun- Impressive, if I may say so. To be the head of a big enterprise like this, by the time you are just...

Chaya- 31...I started this company 2 years ago. I saw the potential in clubbing as a business and worked on the idea till I had the plan for Club Mute. Two of them opened last year, and 3 more this year. By 2015, it's expected to expand to Delhi, Pune, Bangalore, and most major cities.

Arjun- Except, there's been a murder at your latest club.

Chaya looked grim. "Though I have no idea about those circumstances, I assure you that I'll do everything I can from my side to help in your investigation. Even my name and the reputation of my business is at stake, and it is in my interests to clear it."

Mira- Do you recognize this man?

She showed Chaya the picture of the dead man, who looked at it closely and then shook her head.

Chaya- I have never seen him before.

Arjun- And you have no idea what he could be doing in your club.

Chaya- Not one. I understand none of the club staff recognized him either?

Arjun- That's right. We were hoping that you could help us to identify him.

Chaya- I am sorry I couldn't be of help.

Arjun- Acha yeh batiye, why did you fire your old club manager Joseph D'callo?

Chaya- He was a drunkard. On the job, off the job, he was almost never sober. I warned him a couple of times, but when I saw there was no change, I fired him, three weeks ago. Samar Bhalla is the new manager. He's quite efficient.

Arjun- Yes, we met him. One last thing Ms. Garewal. Do you have any business rivals, anybody who was threatening you or the like?

Chaya- no...There's no one like that...

Arjun- That's all then...we'll take your leave...

Mira- Thank you for your time..

Chaya- Of course..It's my duty...

At the door, Mira turned back "One tiny tiny thing...not related to the case, but..."

Chaya- Yes?

Mira- In the elevator, as we came up...I couldn't help but notice, the music, In Ruins...who chose that?

Chaya- I did, as a matter of fact.

Mira smiled- Ah. I see now why your clubs are such a hit. You have impeccably good taste.

Chaya smiled back- Thank you very much.

"Samaira." Her name flowed out from between his clenched teeth and
she half ran out to join him.


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Please find part 2 of this chapter below...😊😊
Edited by badolin - 12 years ago
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***CHAPTER 5 - Part 2***

As they waited for the lift to come up, they saw all the people on the floor vacating their offices, as security guards were announcing "Fire Drill" and beckoning them to leave their cabins.

Arjun- There's a fire drill going on, we better take the stairs.

Mira- Sir, it's only a fire drill sir...We can still take the elevator...

Arjun- When there's a fire, you are supposed to use the stairs.

Mira- But it's not a fire sir, and we don't even work here, and there are like a million steps to the ground floor, and probably a hundred people already walking down these stairs, and ...

Arjun put up a hand to stop her rambling and got into the lift, if only to shut her up. She happily got in behind him, and as the doors closed behind her, Arjun was purely irritated. How can a person say so much nonsense in so short a span of time? Sometimes, it felt like taking a child on a field trip. He really had to talk to Rathod about sending the two of them together. If she wasn't good at her job, he would have spoken to the comsn'r about removing her from the task force. But despite the fact, her attitude was clearly...

His thoughts couldn't proceed beyond that point, because right then, the lift stopped with a lurch, and sounds of mechanical braking. For a moment, there was darkness and silence, and then the faint rays of the emergency light came on. The two of them stood with their hands braced against the steel walls, and looked at each other. Mira lowered her gaze, aware of what was going to happen. Arjun pushed the intercom button and tried to get someone to let them out. "Hello..Is anyone there?? Hello???"

Nobody answered. "Everybody is at the fire drill probably. And nobody in their right mind would be using the elevators in such a situation anyway", he muttered to himself more than to her. They pulled out their mobiles before they realised that they were in a lift and would probably have no signal. That confirmed, Arjun put his cell phone away, while Mira hesitated for some seconds before speaking.

Mira- What are the odds, that they'll shut down the lifts for a fire drill...

She trailed off at the fierce glare he directed her way. After he turned back, she built up the courage again and said "Sir, the fire drill will take at the most 2 or 3 hours...It's only 6.30 now...we'll be out before..."

This time, his glare was fiercer. He turned back to stare at the closed doors in front of him, as if to bore a hole through them. He looked around and up at the ceiling of the lift, and thankfully, Mira thought, there was no small fan arrangement that he would remove, and maybe compel her to squeeze through, like in the movies. Mentally picturing a scene in which Arjun sir was hoisting her on his shoulders for such an accomplishment made her giggle slightly, but she forgot who she was in the lift with, and set back her poker face, when Arjun looked at her, like he would like to throw her off the top of this building.

Mira- It seems I am making quite some mistakes today...

Arjun- Today? Really. I think if we just wait for it, you'll be capable of doing it on a regular basis.

Mira- Come on Sir...Don't be so angry. It's not a big deal, after all...

Arjun- Not a big deal?? Because of you, we are stuck in this lift and it's not a big deal for you?? If we had taken the stairs, like we were supposed to, we would be halfway to the office by now.

Mira- Ok...it wasn't my brightest idea, I admit..but...

Arjun- Just be quiet for a few minutes, if I want any more ideas I'll let you know.

With that he turned back, his anger rising, to stare at the doors again. He turned again at a rustling sound, to see that she had settled down cross legged in a corner, and had taken off her jacket.

Arjun- What. Are you doing?

Mira looked up- Oh...it's pretty hot in here...I'm starting to sweat...plus my legs hurt from all the crouching back at the club...so...

He turned back uninterested, and regained his posture, arms folded, staring at the steel doors again.

"Waise sir, you can sit down too. You don't have to stand guard like this, I don't think anyone is going to steal the elevator, or its doors..."

Arjun closed his eyes and tried not to lose it. How could one person be so exasperating!! He turned around completely, and Mira actually scooted further back into her corner. He bent down and held his face inches away from her. "I don't want another word from you. I don't care if it's an idea, an opinion, or small talk. You will not speak again, until these doors are open. Do you understand me?"

Mira blinked at him, then put a finger on her own lips and nodded. He got up and turned, trying to calm himself down. He glanced intermittently to see that she had pulled out her cell phone and was typing away at it rapidly. Even though the incessant clicking got on his nerves, at least she was quiet.

After about 20 minutes, she suddenly shot up, and almost yelled "Sir, I have..."

Arjun- Mira, Chup!!! Ekdum Chup!!!

Mira immediately shut her mouth, and sat back in her corner. She wanted to tell him the good news, but if refused to listen, well, she couldn't help it. All they could do, was sit and wait. Almost an hour had passed since they were trapped here. 15 minutes later, they were rewarded with the sound of the lift lurch back into life. As the lift stopped at the ground floor, and they got out, two security guards stood there looking concerned. "Are you guys alright? Actually we didn't know there was anyone in the lift. Good thing we got the call from your office, or you would be stuck in there for about 2 hours more."

Mira smiled at them, buttoning her jacket "Thank you so much, we are fine. Thank you for responding so quickly. And sorry for causing you trouble."

Arjun too conveyed his thanks, and as they walked towards the car, he got a call from Rathod, asking if they were out of the elevator and fine.

Arjun- we are fine Rathod, but how did you know?

Rathod- What? Mira sent Shree a text saying you were trapped in an elevator in CG Corp, and to get help. So I called their offices there...Isn't she with you?

Arjun- Yes, yes...she is..

Rathod- Anyway, drop her home Rawte. It's getting late, and there isn't anything more we can do today. 9 AM tomorrow morning.

Arjun hung up, and was about to get into the car, when he saw a lady walking across to enter the building. She looked vaguely familiar, but he couldn't place her. Mira called out from inside the car.

Mira- Arjun Sir...Is anything wrong?

Arjun- Nothing.

He got into the car and as they sped along, he asked her "There was no signal in the lift, how did you text Shree?"

Mira- The signal was slightly popping up, now and then. So I saw even though I couldn't make a call, if I had a message at the ready, I could try and send it. It took about a hundred tries, and my thumb has become paralysed, but it worked. I did try to tell you, but...

Arjun shifted gears, without acknowledging that he was to blame this time. He pulled up outside the apartment she indicated. A medium storied structure with a lush green garden in front of it. Mira got out, and before he could drive away, put her head in through the open window.

Mira- Sir, I am sorry for the trouble I may have caused...unintentionally of course, but still. And thank you, for saving me in the club earlier.

Arjun didn't say anything, and she thought it would be best to just walk away. As she turned and came around the car, to his side however, he spoke "I would thank you for getting us out of the elevator, but since it was because of you we were in that situation in the first place, I don't think that's necessary.

Mira exhaled- Of course you don't sir, and it doesn't matter, because I wasn't looking for a thanks.

Arjun- Neither was I. Tomorrow morning, 9 AM at the office.

She nodded and stepped into the compound. She turned, out of sight around some tall ferns, and as he shifted gears, he heard her speak to someone "J!!! You are early today!! Were you waiting for me?"

He didn't bother to look who she was speaking to, and silently drove off into the night.

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Rathod- Dammit!!!

Arjun sat quietly thinking, while Shree and Chottu looked frustrated but helpless. They had traced the registration of the bike they had found behind the club, the one who's key was in the body's pocket. But it turned out to be a dead end.

Shree- Hanh sir. I called the police station too, to confirm. Raju Yadav, the owner had reported the bike stolen a week ago, from outside his house in Lataur Gali. The local police have no leads on who was behind it, so basically we have no idea who this dead guy is.

Chottu- And Sir, we circulated his photos to the police stations, no one has reported him missing, and nobody recognizes him.

Arjun- We have to look for other ways to trace him Rathod.

Rathod- Hanh, magar kya?

"Perhaps I can help." Mira had suddenly walked into the room. Everybody looked at her, and was immediately struck by something different in her. In 2 seconds, they saw what it was. Instead of her usual green sneakers, her legs looked serious today in black low heeled pumps. No one commented on them though, and listened as she continued to speak.

Mira- I have just finished the tests on the victim's clothing and met Dr. Ahuja also, he is done with the autopsy as well. Cause of death is drug overdose. Doctor reckons it was a heavy dosage of some opiate, like heroin.

Rathod- Someone injected him with a deadly dose of heroine...

Arjun- explains why there was no mess at the crime scene. You can smoothly and silently eliminate with a single shot of a drug. No hassle.

Rathod- What about the blood you found on his clothes?

Mira looked excited as she answered "It's not the victim's blood. In fact...it's not even human blood!!!"

Her 4 team members were startled by her statement, and Mira enjoyed the confusion on their faces with a mischievous smile. Shree suddenly spoke, snapping his fingers. "Are you saying...if it's not human...it's...could it be..it's alien blood?"

Mira's smile dropped, as the other 3 looked at Shree, as if he was an alien escaped from outer space. Mira looked at him with a deadpan face and said "Yeah, aliens killed him, that's what I was trying to say."

Shree looked incredulous- Really??!!

Rathod- Shree! Bakwaas bandh karo!!

Shree- But sir...

Mira- its goat blood. And that fragment I picked up from his vest. That was a piece of goat bone.

Chottu- Goat blood and bone??

Shree- Why did he have that on him?

Rathod- Unless, he was a...

Arjun- Butcher

Mira- Yep, that's what I was thinking. In addition, on his clothes, I found minute traces of heroin.

Rathod- So at some point, before or after his death, he was in contact with the drug.

Mira- Yes sir, sufficient quantities to indicate that.

Arjun- Since the bike was stolen from Lataur Gali, we should start looking for our dead body's identity there.

Rathod- But even then Rawte, the area is big. It'll take us quite some time to go about and ask everyone if they recognize him.

Arjun- Not if we look for just the butchers in the area.

Rathod- That's a good plan Rawte. Team!! Let's go!!!

Edited by badolin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah silly me!!! reserved diz one by mistake!!! Sorry!!!😛😊
Edited by badolin - 12 years ago
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Yay!
Finally you updated... i was badly waiting for my fav ff writer to update 🤗

Getting to the story!
Hmm interesting case, a butcher found dead in a disco! :-?
Loved arjun-mira ladaii 🤣
Lawl she is getting on his nerves day by day
I could imagine his expressions while reading, that dude is seriously pissed off 😆
I like mira's character
She's cute, intelligent and i liked the way she complimented the club owner : D
Alien killed the guy? Lol shree!
Nice update! 👍🏼
Edited by Sinner.gurl - 12 years ago
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Awesome update. Loved it. Loved mira-arjun scenes. The case is getting more and more interesting. Please cont as soon as possible. Thanks for pm.
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ALIENS??? seriously shree??😆
Loved Mira and Arjun's fight...
seriously she may need life insurance.. soon...
was waiting for your update..
pls pm next time...😳
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Hey ...
Awesome update ...
Omg I can seriously imagine arjun annoyed by Mira and the way you described his exasperate ness was fab ...
Mira is literally getting on his nerves ... But undoubtedly she is smart ...
N who is J ???
I'm eagerly waiting for the next update ... :)
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Awesome update! Interesting. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update. (:
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Originally posted by: badolin



thank u thank u so much!!!!!!! I know diz wasn't easy,n u put so much of effort into it,i really appreciate diz az im sure anyone readin diz ff iz!!!!

Thank u so much darlin'!!!!!:-D:-D


Awww 😳 You're welcome dear 🤗 I guess the reason I remembered the story so well is coz the story is fantabulous!!
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Nice update wating for the next n thanks for pm

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