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ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Great parts..
Excited for the next too...!
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badolin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: lola123
Awesome dear...I loved it...
I remember the story briefly...so if u want me to post a brief summary...let me know:)

Could you really??😛 That wud be absolutely great!!!!😊😊 So nice of you to suggest that!!!😳😊😊

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ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

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super awesome...the way she handels that DJ was like so cool😃😃...poor guy galat bandi se panga liya😛
n the last scene...awww😳😳
continue soon plz😃

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844858

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Posted: 12 years ago

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You're welcome dear...though forgive me if i mess some part of the story...I remember the story plot but I hope I don't mix it up with the other story plots...
BRIEF UPDATE OF PREVIOUS PARTS OF THE STORY
So here it is..
So the story starts with the etf getting a call from the commissioner about getting a new etf member for them as they seem to be burdened after Riya's death.All are against it as they can't see Riya getting replaced but the commissioner is adamant.Meanwhile they get a case where in a police officer has been found dead in an art gallery which was burned...there is a body of another girl found dead in the gallery...but she hasn't been identified because of the severe burns on her face and body...another girl who was seen near the gallery was admitted in the hospital.As she was seen near the gallery around the time for the death...This makes her a suspect and hence they go to the hospital to interrogate her...on asking the nurse they come to know her name is Meera...the etf enter her hospital room where she is sleeping...Meera suddenly wakes up...The etf ask her name...to which she replies Samaira.They look at her curiously and tell her that the nurse had told them that her name was Meera...Samaira answers by saying that her name is Samaira but her friends call her Mira as her namez too long but when she told the nurse,she took it to be Meera. The etf members are not convinced but Arjun confitms it by checking her Id card. Now they ask her about the case...She is shocked that they are suspecting her! Then the etf tell her that she was seen near the gallery and also Shree on checking had found out that her sim card was only a day old and she had made only one call...to The Commissioner. Mira explains that she was just taking a walk...which supruses the members as it was late in the night and question her to whuch she replies that she has isomnia...and so took a walk and the gallery wasn't far from her flat...but when on the road she got hit by an automobile and hurt herself and was admitted in the hospital.About the cell...she informs she was living abroad and had only come ysday and so she bought a new sim card. She also says that when she had looked into the gallery,the man was already dead because even though the fire was spreading,his body showed no movement. As they are talking the commissioner comes in and is taken aback to see Mira. He is even more shocked when the etf informs them that she is their suspect. The Commissioner clears the air and says that she is the etf member that he he had told them about earlier.All are shocked and visibly irritated. The commissioner also informs them that she has been a consistent topper and is a gol medallist in research. The members are highly pissed and not in the least ready to welcome a new etf member and specially not her and they aren't even hesistant in showing it to her...
CONTINUED IN NEXT POST>>>

Edited by lola123 - 12 years ago

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844858

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Then Mira asks the nurse about the payment of the room...she asks if they would accept card as she is short on cash and says that if they don't accept card then Shree will pay for her.Shree is shocked but Mira justs smirks at him..then the nurse tells her that they accept card so she playfully tells shree that she dosen't need his offer...all are shocked by her behaviour.Shree is irritated and Arjun and Rathore don't see how a girl like her can be an etf officer.
So the next day she is discharged.All the members make her unwanted but it really dosen't affect her.She has a conversation with the commissioner which shows that they know each other well. The commissioner asks her if she was having troubles with insomnia still...she agrees...then the commissioner goes on to say that he appointed her in the etf as...Mira completes his sentence and says that he appointed her in the etf as its a very small group and u have yo socialize and back up each other...she says that she knows that he wants her to make friends but she is okay living life the way she does...the commissioner replies saying that she must forget about what happened..Its been nine years and start letting people in.Mira says she can't forget it!'Someone died becoz of me'!
She reaches the etf dressed like a college girl...she's put on green sneakers and her bag has umpteen no. Of charms which make a loud sound when she walks...All are shocked to see her dressed like this.Again Arjun and Rathore are urritated by her casuality and think she is not fit for etf.She is late too
She first tells them about what she saw...The fact that he seemed to be dead already coz he wasn't moving despite the fire.She also informs them that she didn't see any girl's body.Arjun comments on this saying that from the angle she was looking..she wouldn't have been able to
see her body...Mira agrees.
Then the etf go to the hospital to meet the dr.about the reports of the bodies(THIS SCENE MOST PROBABLY OF YSDAY WHEN MIRA IS ADMITTED IN THE HOSPITAL...sorry don't remember clearly...)
The doctor informs them that both the victims were dead before the fire. The other victim is identified as Ms.Alisha,an artist. She says that The inspector was killed by hit on the head while the victim was strangled slowly.Hearing this Mira tries to understand how Alisha was strangled and so turns towards Arjun with her hands near her neck but he glares at her so she catches poor Shree again:D...she strangles him and then understanding it says that strangling someone infront of your eyes slowly to see that person dying...shows that it was a crime of passion...all others agree and are a bit impressed.
In the office...something she does make Shree and Chottu remember Riya and they are highly irritated and say that they will never accept her..She hears them and says that she didn't know Riya but from she has heard it seems that they cared for her alot!She understands that and asks them to understand one thing...She is here to replace their research specialist and not Riya...she is aware of the difference b/w the two things and hope they too understand this...when Arjun and Samaira go in one car..she is intrigued by the bandage on his hand and asks him about it...he just ignores her.She says,' Atleat say its none of ur business or that you don't want to talk about it.' He replies with a 'it's none of ur business' he exclaims'how rude!'
Then after some time Arjun comments that she shouldn't dress like that.Mira replies saying that if his stuff is none of her business so is hers!
Arjun just says that he needs to tell her that as he is her senior coz he won't be shocked if they someday lose a criminal because of her.She is annoyed and just replies by saying that would her dressing like curtain make criminals come running to her.Arjun is tongue tied..
Reaching the policeman's house they meet his family.The wife is cooperative and tells that they can ask all they want.She tells them that she was very hurt as being a policeman's wife she was always prepared for his death but always for causes like fighting for his country n what he believed in...not like this!
She tells them that he had received a call before leaving and he had been a bit tensed amd left hurridely. The etf talk about Alisha and sort of imply that her husband was having an affair with her.This infuriates their son Ved who shouts at them and leaves. The wife explains that he had a strained realtion with his father because of his choice of becoming a photographer but they had recently started bonding and so his father's death was hard for him to take.
Mira notices one of photos taken by Ved.She observes it clearly.
Later Arjun and Riya go to Alisha's house where Arjun smartly observes that even though she was supossed to be an artist...she had no paints or brushes or any art material
They find photos of Alsiha...on analyzing Mira concludes that those puctures were taken by Ved as the lighting and angle in both the pictures were similar...all agree with her...

Edited by lola123 - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey i lv ur story pls dont said n plz pm me plz plz
u righting is owsome

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844858

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Phhewww...written!!
I couldn't remember certain things...I hope I haven't messed it all up:)

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abhi_arshilover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Loved the updates. Loved mira-rathode-arjun scene. I loved it when she said don't fire me to rathode and the way she handled that dj! Please cont soon. and pm me whenever u update.

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Safina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

i just love this ff

please update soon

and please add me to ur pm list

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badolin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: lola123
Phhewww...written!!
I couldn't remember certain things...I hope I haven't messed it all up:)

thank u thank u so much!!!!!!! I know diz wasn't easy,n u put so much of effort into it,i really appreciate diz az im sure anyone readin diz ff iz!!!!

Thank u so much darlin'!!!!!:-D:-D

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