FF-The Gods Must b Crazy-Note on page 7..please re

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya ppl!!!

My account has self destructed, along with my previous posts. I'll be updating here from now on...The intro, Chapters 1 n 2 are lost...but I guess something is better than nothing...so here'z part 3...for all who are regular readers, hopefully u remember the track of the story...for the new readers...I dunno, even I can't remember it properly now..please try it out anyhow...is all I can say...

Thank u for all ur commentz, n likez!!! Hope diz one is as good as u hoped!!!! Do lemme kno!!!!😊😊


~Index~

~~Brief intro to the story by lola123(Love u for doing that!!🤗) --- Pg 3

~~Chapters 3 & 4 --- Pg 1

~~Chapter 5 --- Pg 4

***CHAPTER 3***

Vedant Singh sat ramrod straight in the chair, and even though 4 people had their eyes focussed on him, he looked resolutely at the wall ahead of him.

Arjun- Vedant, it would be easier if you just told us everything, rather than us telling you.

Ved looked up at his face, and then spoke in a low tone "About what?"

Rathod- About your father's and Alisha Patel's deaths.

Ved- How would I know about their deaths?? That's why you are investigating right?

Arjun- Interesting thing is Ved, you didn't ask us who Alisha is. Aren't you curious?

Ved- I..I assumed it's the second victim...

Rathod- Or...it could be because she's your girlfriend, and you knew all along that the 2nd body was hers.

Ved turned to him, his eyes wide open in shock. "How...I mean..."

Shree- We know what you mean, we know you both were in a relationship and somehow Jagan sir came into the picture.

Ved started fidgeting in his chair, and he wiped the sweat off his face.

Mira- Perhaps...were the two of them...having an affair??

Ved stood up in rage, his chair fell backward. "NO!!!!! Don't you dare make allegations against my father!!!!!"

Arjun- Sit down Ved

He pushed him down onto the chair. Ved sat, exhaling heavily in his anger.

Mira- He wasn't having an affair, we know. Jagan sir was a respectable gentleman, and a dignified officer. However his death, has got something to do with you and Alisha.

Ved- How can you be so sure about that?

Rathod showed him the pictures from the laptop. "Alisha sent these pictures, of your father and her meeting to you. Why?? Was she trying to blackmail you??"

Ved didn't say anything, and sat clenching and unclenching his fists.

Arjun- Or perhaps she was blackmailing your father???

Shree- or you thought they really were having a relationship behind your back, and killed them both in a fit of anger???

Ved-Enough!!!!! How can you even say I killed my father??? He was my father!!!!!MY FATHER!!!!

Rathod leaned closer to him "Then tell us the truth, now."

Ved sighed and his shoulders slumped. He closed his eyes for a minute, and began to speak. "I met Alisha at a friend's engagement party, about 3 months ago. She talked to me casually, and we discovered that we had a few distant acquaintances. She said she was new in town, and that she was an artist, trying to find a place to exhibit her works. She seemed charming, and was quite pretty, so we went on a few dates. I saw that she was desperate for an opening, so I looked at some of her works, and found that they were not so bad. I decided to help her out..."

Arjun- You recommended her name anonymously to the gallery

Ved- Yes...Because the gallery is majorly managed by our family trust, I have that privilege...I thought I would do her this one favour...she was very thankful and said she was lucky that we had such a coincidental meeting at that party...

Rathod- Only, your father found out about what you had done. And he was not happy..

Ved- He said just because I liked her, I was misusing my rights in the gallery...That I didn't even know anything about her...We had a big argument...we had only recently begun to patch up, we always had a cold war going on between us...with regards to my choices, my work...but recently, things were better between us...that's when this fight occurred...I was angry...he was trying to impose his opinions and his likes on me again...I told him to leave me and Alisha alone, I was just giving her a chance...

He was quiet for a moment. "Around this time, the relation between me and Alisha began to get strained. We were still seeing each other, but I wasn't feeling that same amount of attraction I had felt for her in the beginning. She was beginning to get more demanding, sometimes she would ask for large sums of money from me, saying it was an emergency, and that she would return it as soon as she could. When this went on for a few times, I refused to lend her any more money, unless she told me why exactly she wanted it. That's when I saw her for what she was. She turned into someone completely different. She started to threaten me, if I didn't give her the money she wanted, she would defame me saying I had slept with her, and then left her. She had the photos of the both of us taken at various places to prove it, and she would even go the papers she said."

Arjun- And what did you say?

Ved- I was seeing her for the monster she was. I completely lost my head when I saw that all she had done was use me, right from the beginning. She was a scheming, conniving crook, and I wasn't going to bow down to her. I told her to go do whatever she wanted, I didn't care, but I wouldn't pay her any money. Her month with the exhibit was up, so she would have to leave soon anyway. I stopped meeting her after that day.

Mira- So you broke up with her...when??

Ved- about a week ago...

Arjun- and then what happened?

Ved- She kept calling me, but I didn't take any of her calls. She even came to some of my shoots, but I had security make her leave.

Rathod- Was Jagan sir aware that you two had broken up?

Ved- No...I..I didn't tell him...I was still angry about the way he had accused me...I didn't think of telling him...it would be almost like proving him right...

Arjun- But he was right.

Ved- I'm sorry?

Shree- Jagan sir was right when he said you didn't know her. He was a policeman, and he had an instinct about Alisha. We recovered the files from his laptop. It shows he had run some background on her, and he discovered quite a bit about her.

Ved- What do you mean?

Mira- well, for starters the fact that she wasn't even an artist. Well not the painting type anyway...

Ved- What!!!!

Arjun- She was a con artist. Her meeting you at that party, was no coincidence. She and her associate planned it all out and purposely initiated contact with you.

Ved- Con artist??? Alisha???

Rathod- All the evidence that Jagan sir has collected proves the fact. The two of them have struck at many places before, and they thought that they could swindle quite a bit of money out of you, by pretending to be in love with you.

Arjun- Only, things didn't work out as planned, when you broke off with her and then refused to be blackmailed. On top of that, Jagan sir had unearthed all these info about them. He met with her a couple of times, to warn her off you. He was giving her a chance to back off, he didn't want you to think you had been taken in by her, fooled by her. He thought you were still seeing her.

Ved looked like he had seen a ghost "I didn't know he was looking into her background so seriously..."

Rathod- Yes, and her partner photographed them together. And she sent these pics to you.

Arjun- Which she used to blackmail you again. She threatened to spread the rumour that they were having an affair didn't she?

Ved nodded slowly "I didn't care about any scandal or whatever she told people about me. But Baba wasn't like that. If any such allegation were put upon him...the effect it would have...on his career...on my family...I couldn't let that happen...So when she asked me to meet her at the gallery in the night, I decided to go..."

Mira- Only, she got greedy, and called jagan sir as well. She thought he would be willing to pay more to avoid a scandal. Her call list shows she called you before she called him. When he told her he would meet her, she sent you a text saying the meeting was off.

Ved- I didn't know then, that the call Baba got was from her. I just thought that it wasn't like her to put off the meeting, especially when I said I was ready to meet her. She was getting her money, and she was putting me off. I thought something was wrong, so I decided to go the gallery anyway.

Arjun- Go on. Your father got there before you didn't he?

Ved- Yes...I was too...too late..when I got there, he was lying there, blood pooled around the side of his head. She stood there, just staring at him, like it didn't even matter...I tried to wake him up, but I knew...I knew it was useless...He was dead...and she had killed him!!!! She killed my baba!!!!!

Rathod- You turned on her.

Ved- I felt like the world had ended!!! I wanted to just kill her, right then, right there...She tried to run, saying it wasn't her who killed him...but I knew!!!! She had murdered my father!!!!I killed her!!!!I killed her for murdering my father!!!! I strangled her, watched her struggle, and watched her wicked and greedy life getting over in front of my eyes!!!! I KILLED HER!!!!!

Ved started sobbing. Chottu came in and spoke "Sir, we have arrested Udit, her so called fiance, he was trying to leave for Ahmedabad by train. He's her partner, and he has already confessed to killing Jagan sir. Alisha was waiting for Jagan sir at the gallery and he was hiding out in the store room. When Jagan sir came and said he wouldn't be paying any money, but that he had enough evidence to put them away, they panicked. He said they couldn't risk letting him leave, he picked up a hammer from the store room and came in from behind sir, and hit him. He didn't even know there was another person other than Alisha there. They knew that they had killed him. Udit left Alisha there, he was going to go get a car to take the body someplace else. But by the time, he got back, the place was ablaze...So he made a run for it."

Mira- You set fire to the gallery, didn't you Ved?

Ved- yes...from the store room I found the can...I poured it all around...set fire...left by the back door...I don't even remember doing all that now...all I could see in front of my eyes was baba's body...

Arjun- So, it was Udit who killed Jagan sir?

Chottu- Yes sir...he had heard the news, and didn't want to be blamed for two deaths, so he readily confessed to one murder.

Rathod- And if he hadn't we would have just assumed Alisha was the 2nd murderer...But it turns out she didn't kill anyone at all. You were wrong Vedant.

Ved wiped away the tears that were still flowing down his face. "It doesn't matter. Even if she didn't deliver that blow, she might as well as have murdered him...And me too...I'm responsible too, if only I hadn't met her...It's my fault"

Arjun- It's not your fault for meeting her Vedant...but if you had let go of your anger and your ego, to tell your father the truth, about what had happened between you and Alisha, then you and him, you could have worked it out, and perhaps...he would have been alive...In that, it's your fault...

Rathod- And no matter what, taking a person's life, cannot be justified. Even your father would have agreed to that.

Ved was letting the tears flow once again, as he was escorted out by Chottu.

Shree- His father was looking out for him, and he was trying to look out for his father...but in the end, this is how things turned out.

Arjun- The smallest of things, sometimes they matter Shree. They might change your life forever.

Mira heard him say that, and she stiffened. The smallest of things... She ran her thumb through her bracelets, and thought to herself. Yes, they were what mattered. They were what changed your life forever. And when that happened, you couldn't turn back time, no matter how much you wished you could.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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What exactly happened to you account 😕

I searched for you and your ff but i got an error msg 😕

Anywayz welcome back 🤗

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Finally the mystery unfolded... 😃

Very well written! 👍🏼

waiting for mira's past to be revealed!

Good update!

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*** CHAPTER 4***


Rathod and Arjun walked into the office next morning, to the sounds of Shree and Chottu chatting. They seemed to be arguing about some new gadget that Shree was planning on getting. As they walked by the couch, Rathod stopped, and took 2 steps back. Arjun had meanwhile not made those 2 steps forward, and now they both stood staring down at her.

Mira was lying contently on the couch, hands half crossed over her chest, her face peaceful. She was longer than the sofa, so her feet, with their brilliant green sneakers were slightly perched higher over the armrest.

Rathod- Is she...is she actually sleeping in my office?

Shree- Sir...yes sir...She said she was going to catch up on some sleep since...

Rathod- Is she out of her mind???!!She's sleeping when she should be working!!! What the hell is wrong with her!!!!

Arjun stared down at her in disdain. She was worse than an irresponsible teenager

Chottu- Sir, actually, she finished all the reports already.

Rathod- Kya? Saare ke saare?

Shree- Hanh sir...think she was at it all night, see...she brought it in this morning...

He handed Rathod the files, which he skimmed through. They were right, it was all done. He and Arjun just had to review and sign it.

Chottu- she handed these in, and said she was going to take a nap, as there was nothing to do anyway...so...

Rathod silenced him with a look, but didn't say anything further. He wanted to reprimand her, but wasn't sure if he should, given that she had finished her work, and that the couch was put there, to take breaks.

Arjun took the files from Rathod, and flipped through the pages. He carefully looked through it, trying to find at least a tiny error. He patiently looked through, his face getting grimmer, as he couldn't find any fault. Then suddenly, his eyebrows perked up. He closed the file and looked down at the sleeping form. "This report has errors Rathod"

Rathod frowned "What?" He half snatched the file back and began thumbing through it rapidly.

Arjun- Mira.

They all saw that she didn't as so much as stir.

Arjun called louder "Samaira!!!" Shree nudged her arm softly from one end. The bandage on her forehead peeked out from beneath her side bangs as she slightly shifted in her sleep and then settled back with a sleepy sigh. Her hair also moved to reveal that she had 2 earphones plugged into either ear. No wonder she couldn't hear. Arjun was royally pissed, while Rathore closed the file perplexed and looked down at her.

Arjun- Shree!!! Utao isse!!

As Shree stepped forward to shake her awake, Rathod stopped him. He steeped around the couch, onto the other side. Her gun was on her hip holster and as she had turned, it was exposed to anyone's reach. Rathod slowly and quietly put forward his hand, to pull out her gun. His hand had barely touched it, when her left hand caught his in a swift move. Her right hand came around equally fast, and she grabbed the gun and jumped over the couch, letting go of his hand, and pointing the gun at him with both hands. It took her a second to register who she was pointing her gun at. She pulled down her earphones, and looked around. Shree and Chottu had their mouths open, Arjun folded his arms across his chest and stared at the scene, jaw set.

Rathod looked at her, face expressionless. She slowly lowered her hand, and presented her gun to Rathod, placed on both palms. Her hands stretched forward, as if it was an offering, she bent her head, and said in the softest whisper. "Please don't fire me..."

Rathod felt the corners of his mouth twitching, but he saw that Arjun was giving him an incredulous glare. So he cleared his throat and said "Holster your weapon. I guess I should give you credit for not letting someone get to it, even in your sleep. However, if I find you sleeping during office hours again, I will have you transferred to a desk job in the lab."

As Mira put her gun back, she looked at him, with a shocked 'You wouldn't' look. Rathod saw that and replied "I would." Mira quickly apologized.

Mira- I am sorry sir, it won't happen again...

Arjun- Hanh, waise bhi...you've so many other mistakes you have to try out, so repeating the same one again could be boring for you.

Mira looked at him, hoping the urge to throw the entire couch on his head wasn't reflecting on her face. No, she hoped it was. Even if she couldn't do it, at least he should see she how badly she wanted to.

Rathod- Enough Rawte...you were saying there's some error in the report... Mira- That's not possible.

Arjun- Really? Over confidence is not an admirable trait.

Mira- Confidence is. I am confident that there isn't any mistake in the report. I take my work seriously Sir.

Arjun- Yes, we just saw how serious.

Rathod- Rawte. Baat par aao. Even I didn't find anything wrong, what is it?

Arjun smirked- I'm surprised you didn't Rathod. It's your name, she spelt it wrong.

Mira- What?

Rathod- What??

Arjun opened the file and pointed to a line. ACP Sameer Daamsingh Rathore. Mira squinted.

Arjun- Rathore, not Rathod.

Rathod- That. It's not such an issue Rawte...my name is spelt both ways in some of the official documents...

Arjun- But in the ETF files, it's Rathod. Which means...

Chottu- Which means...

Arjun handed the file to her."Change it. It's all over the documents. Change it all. And the new report should be done before today afternoon. We need to submit it before 2 pm."

Mira stared at him in disbelief, as he looked at her from head to foot, then walked away. Rathod gave up and finally said "Change it Mira..." as he too walked to the conference room.

Mira clutched the report in one hand, and muttered under her breath "Inka naam Arjun Suryakant Rawte nahi, Arjun Curtainrod Rawte, rakhna chahiye tha"

Shree- Kya??

Mira- Nahi...kuch nahi..

Chottu- Arrey Mira, we thought that today would be the end for you. As it is Arjun sir is irritated with you, upar se you pull a gun on Rathod sir?? Kya yaar...aaj kiske muh dekh ke nikal gayi?

Mira huffed out a stream of air. "At least Rathod sir didn't kill me. If it was Arjun sir, I would already be in some dusty lab by now."

Shree- I wonder why he's so irritated with you...

Mira suddenly remembered the once over he had given her. Was he finding fault in her attire again? She was dressed in more subdued tones today. A black crepe jacket over a white shirt, and blue jeans.

Mira- Guys, do I look like a drape?

Chottu- A grape?

Mira- No, a...

Shree- Why do you want to look like a grape?

Chottu- Yeah, you look quite nice. Your clothes are trendy.

Shree- And you have an awesome fashion sense!

Mira sighed "I guess I'm still not curtain enough..."

Chottu and Shree exchanged puzzled looks. Mira pulled out her laptop to change the report. Within 10 mins, she put down the new file for their review.

Rathod- So fast? Good work.

Mira smiled. Arjun suspiciously took up the file and looked through it. She had indeed changed it. He looked at her with a raised eyebrow.

Arjun- How did you do it so quickly? Shree and Chottu helped you out didn't they?

Mira gave him an annoyed look. "Sir. There is something called Find & Replace in Microsoft Word. It takes under a minute to change all the Rathores to Rathods. It's not rocket science sir...Or...did you perhaps think I was going to type up the entire thing again? I am not that stupid sir, they did give me a gold medal after all"

She gave him a wide sarcastic smile and walked towards her chair. Rathod was immensely amused. He hadn't heard what she had said, no one did, she had whispered to him, but seeing Arjun at a loss of words, was not a usual sight for any of them. So he couldn't even bring himself to scold shree and Chottu as they tried hard to suppress their giggles. Still amused at the anger and irritation on Arjun's face, he answered the phone when it rang.

Within 25 minutes, they pulled up outside Club Mute, a hip new disco/club in the middle of the city. There was no one outside the club, except for 2 constables. It opened only at 5.30 every evening, up until 4 am in the morning, and the parties here were the talk of town. But now, a body had been found inside, and they had work to do.

The 5 of them walked inside the double doors, and into a foyer. There were no windows anywhere, and the light was all from overhead lamps and lights. A small group of people stood inside the main hall, whose one end was occupied with a long bar, with a number of bottles on the shelf and the counter. Lounge chairs, and other furniture occupied other parts, with an area left around the centre for the DJ and the dancing. This was where about 5 or 6 people stood, talking among themselves. 2 constables stood in front of the bar, behind which the body was found.

Mira stepped forward in front of the others, while they stood back in the foyer to talk to the inspector. As she started to walk towards the bar, a man came upto her from the group. He surveyed her, and smile. She looked at him questioningly.

"Hi, I'm Rishi. I'm the DJ here."

Mira smiled- I see. Mm...Good for you?

Rishi- You know what? You're hot.

Arjun heard that, and glanced up at the two of them. So did the others.

Mira- Thank you, I'll take that as a compliment.

Rishi smiled back- Can I get you a drink? The bar seems to be guarded, apparently there's a dead guy behind the bar. But I think I can arrange a drink for both of us, to get to know each other, Miss...

Arjun started to step forward, his temper rising, when she spoke."Samaira Sharma. Thank you, but I don't drink. And especially..." She pulled out her id, and showed it to him. "Not on duty"

Rishi looked at the id carefully, and whistled. "Wow, you're a cop!!! I thought you were one of the VIP clubbies, here before the others...anyway...I'm sorry...but, I guess, it's good...I don't mind being questioned by a dashing young officer, so ask away!!!"

He grinned at her flirtatiously, and she smiled back. "That's great. In that case, we'll question you right away. Chottu!"

Chottu came up to her, and she introduced him "This is Chottu, one of our most dashing officers. Chottu, this is Rishi, the DJ. And he's super cooperative, so why don't you ask him about whatever you want to know. I'm sure he would be happy to help!!"

Chottu- Fantastic!!

She smiled charmingly at the DJ, who looked at her as if he had been slapped. Chottu grinned at her, as did Shree, while Rathore turned back to the inspector with a smile. Arjun looked away and stood there for a minute, before going to take a look at the body. Shree and Mira followed.

Arjun sent the constables away, and stood looking at the body. Rathod joined him, and after a few seconds, they left to talk to the gathered people. After Shree took a few snaps of the body, Mira turned the body over with his help, as it was face down. The man appeared to be in his 30s, and looked to be completely out of place here. He wore a cheap cotton shirt, which had worn out with a hundred washes. His pants were frayed at the ends, and had stains here and there.

Mira looked at those closely. It could be blood stains.

Shree- Mira, I'll just go take some photos of the other areas as well..you can manage here na?

Mira nodded. She snapped her gloves on, and set about examining the body. She examined the stains, it looked like dried blood. She checked his hands and feet. On his right forearm, she found a puncture wound, like he had been injected. Other than that, she found no other indications. She emptied his pockets, but the only things in there were a set of keys, and a piece of paper in which the name & address of the club was scribbled. Nothing else to identify the body. There seemed to be nothing more to do. She was about to get up, when she noticed a button was loose on the shirt. That itself was not strange, but as she looked closer, she was surprised. She unbuttoned his shirt quickly, to find that the vest he was wearing was covered in blood smears. A lot of them, and from the varying shades, she surmised, some older than the others. She lifted up the vest, but there were no wounds on his torso. Or anywhere else. Mira was confused. There were no injuries on his body to cause this amount of blood, and there was no blood around the body either. She sprayed luminal around the area of the body and put on the glasses. No blood. Then she saw that a bit of the spray had fallen on his fingertips. Positive indication of blood. This meant that he had washed off blood recently. Whose blood? She put away the glasses and reagents. At any rate, this didn't look like a natural death, or a suicide. But she couldn't explain the blood. She saw a small shard on his vest, about 2 centimetres long, and a whitish color. She carefully put it into an evidence bag and started to check if anything else was caught on his vest or clothes.

All of a sudden, a man staggered in from the back entrance, which was on one side of the bar. Mira was sitting down the far corner of the bar, her back to him. The man staggered towards the bar, as everyone watched, trying to grab a bottle off the counter. Only he seemed to be drunk, and couldn't even stand properly. He missed grabbing any bottle, instead his hand struck three of them, and they fell, causing the remaining 10 or so bottles, and a stack of wine glasses to fall as well. They all rolled towards the inside of the bar, where Mira was crouched. Those who could see her behind the bar, watched in horror, as they realised the bottles were going to fall on her head. She heard a clinking and looked up, but couldn't see what was happening, the counter was far too high from where she was crouched. Everyone was too far away to help. Rathod, Shree and Chottu didn't even realise what was happening, before Shree remembered that Mira was behind the counter.

Shree called out "Mira!! watch out!!!", and before she could react, she felt someone cover her in an embrace and shove her out of harm's way. As the bottles, and the glasses fell with a deafening crash and broke into a million pieces, her heart beat quickened as she realised what had just happened. She looked at the shattered glass in horror, and involuntarily shuddered at how close she had been to that. The hands around her, which had saved her, tried to calm her, as he felt her trembling. "You're not hurt, are you?", he asked in his familiar gruff tone.

That was when she realised, whose arms she was in...

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Edited by badolin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unfortunately i wasnt here, so missed your first two chapters
But a very well written chapter 3, with the suspense and crime plot
Please continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sinner.gurl

What exactly happened to you account 😕

I searched for you and your ff but i got an error msg 😕

Anywayz welcome back 🤗

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Finally the mystery unfolded... 😃

Very well written! 👍🏼

waiting for mira's past to be revealed!

Good update!


Bhagwan jane!! I went mental, it wasn't letting me post even after opening a new account...😕 The mods all tried to help, but it was just super weird...I had almost given up and decided to raise ducks in my free time, when all of a sudden it got resolved n I could post...Mysteriez of life I guezz🤔


Thanx for d commentz!! keep reading!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another update! 😃

Just tell me how do you manage to find such colorful dialogues 🤣

Arjun Curtainrod Rawte, 🤣

And mira sleeping in the office..lol hilarious could imagine arjun and rathore's reaction!

Arjun pointing out silly mistakes like a kid. 😆

Aur kya band bajaya us dj ka 🤣

Arjun saved her...awww!

These lines made me Lol!

you've so many other mistakes you have to try out, so repeating the same one again could be boring for you. 🤣

Sir. There is something called Find & Replace in Microsoft Word. It takes under a minute to change all the Rathods to Rathores. It's not rocket science sir. 🤣


My stomach still hurts! 🤣
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Nice updates... its Arjun who saved her rite... i knew it... continue soon...
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Awesome dear...I loved it...
I remember the story briefly...so if u want me to post a brief summary...let me know:)
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feel bad 4 u! don't worry dear everything will be alright! wonderful update!👏
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Hey ...That was fab ...i loved it ...

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