Ariya : pyaar hua chori chori ( CH3 PG12+note 18 )

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow! that was interesting! please update soon! i can't wait to know what is going to happen! i am so excited to read the next update!

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Wow saba and shruti...this is awesome,...

Hey pls send pm na...i really want to know what will happen next...this is so interesting...

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Ramisa (Saba)

@Devilicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hey friends sry for the late update i was busy,read it and comment it .plz for the late friends ...

RECAP

all the etf members were doing masti in,suddenly rathod phone rings,they had a nem cas,in big banglow,they all go their,they stuck in that banglow,all the door were closed.

CHAPTER 2

After triying so many times they come downstaries,they all sit on sofa.

Rathod- ye sab humhe pasane keliye tha,aur ye sab darwaza kaise band huve

Rathod takes to phone to call but his phone was missing,he says other team members to cheak the phone,but unfortunatlly their phone was also lost

Damn it rathod yells

shweta says ab hum kya karenge,aur is banglow se kaise bahar jayange

Rathod say tum fikar mat karo shweta hum kuch na kuch karenga:-)

Shree and chotu were giggaling by seeing rathod

shree says to chotu dekha chotu rathod sir ko shweta ki kitani fikar hai

Chotu says haa vo to hai kuyn ki,vo usski gf jo hai

Shree says rathod sir apani feeling kab bathayenge usko,aur ye dekho arjun sir riya ko kaise dek rahe hai

Arjun heard this and he turns to shree whith his famous angry look,shree and chotu both of them shut their mouth

Suddenly light goes of,it was so dark.

Rathod- ab ye current kuyn chali gayi,ab hum candles kaha dundage

Riya says sir may be candles kicten mai honga

Rathod says to tum aur shweta jake lake aavo jaldi

Riya and shweta goes to kicten slowly,and starts searcing but suddenly door closes,they both come to the door and starts banging and starts screaming

Other four member r shocked y they r screaming,they go their and sees the door was closed

Chotu tries to open the door but the door was to strong so the efferts go in vain.

After some time lights get on,riya and shweta sees kitchen and get scared and starts shouting

Arjun- kya huva chila kuyn rahe ho tum dono

Door opens by itself,riya and shweta comes out,riya directly goes to arjun and hugs him,but shweta goes to rathod and stands in forunt of him crying,rathod cant sees her crying,so he hugs her and says kuch nahi hoga mai hoo na

Both the couples break the hug and goes to kitchen,all r shocked to
see

Kitchen was full of blood,arjun says ye blood kaha se aaya hai,tab to nahi ta to ab,kuch to chut raha hai,he smells the blood and says ye nakali blood hai

Shree- par sir ye aaya kaha se,kahi bhoot to nahi kiya na sir

Arjun says ye koi bhoot nahi hai par kuch to hai humhe nazar nahi aaraha,tum sab log banglow cheak kar aur tum dono yahi sofa mai baito

They all go and searches the whole banglow but that go in vain,they all coming back to hall.

They all come back to hall and sits on sofa,suddenly they hears a sound

TUM LOG KUCH BI KARLO PAR YAHA SE BHAHAR NAHI JAPAYENGA

they all searches for the voice that nothing they found

Riya and shweta says ye zaroor bhoot ka kaam hi hai,they hold each other hands tightly

hey friends this is a small update,
next chapter will be big update,
sry for late,

PRECAP

riya is in danger
shweta is missing

Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago

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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

hey that was awesome...

nakli blood tha...😛

hope they get out of bungalow soon...

in such a scary situation ...these ETF people are romancing LOL..😆

lagta hai unhe mazaa aarahe hai...

Precap is scary again...

hope they both are safe...

Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Amazing update saba /...

Shree-chotu k jokes awesum

Ariya hug wow

Want to know yeh bhoot ka chakkar ...

Thanks for d PM

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: prava55663
hey that was awesome...

nakli blood tha...😛

hope they get out of bungalow soon...
in such a scary situation ...these ETF people are romancing LOL..😆

lagta hai unhe mazaa aarahe hai...

Precap is scary again...
hope they both are safe...

prava dear

mazaa to aayega na

vo log ek banglow mai na

all the time cant be in case

so they r romaning😆

Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Nyc update...chotu se bi gate nhi khula..!!ariya hug automatically n rathod cannt saw shewta crying so he hug shweta..!!!precap sounds interesting..!!

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Ramisa (Saba)

@Devilicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

prava dear
mazaa to aayega na
vo log ek banglow mai na
all the time cant be in case
so they r romaning😆

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guys ramance to hona chahiye na thore bohat aur wo bhi banglow mein it's a new thinking 😆

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diva

@rockz.diva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

omg i loved it ramii :p
rathod ji is sooo concernd for shweta awww :p
i wsh ye bunglow se kbhi bahar na aye 🤣
omg scary kitchen me phas gye aww :p
riya ne arjun ko hug ki eham eham
i cant wait nn riya in danger seriously awww arjun bachayega naa
waitng waitngg