Ariya : pyaar hua chori chori ( CH3 PG12+note 18 ) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61


Nice updation ramisa...
precap gvs excitement...Sure Arjun vil save Riya...
Update soon & thanks 4 PM...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: SaraJose



Nice updation ramisa...
precap gvs excitement...Sure Arjun vil save Riya...
Update soon & thanks 4 PM...




ur welcome sara
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Amazing update saba /...

Shree-chotu k jokes awesum

Ariya hug wow

Want to know yeh bhoot ka chakkar ...

Thanks for d PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
very nice yaar...good concept..liked it very much pls continue fast...😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you for a light hearted aur serious sort of update. Love shree and chotu :-D please update soon xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
** NOTE **


hey friends we are extermly sorry for the the late update,
due to some work we could not update this,sorry for the late and
form now we will regularly update this SS.

IMPORTANT
one thing i want to tell u guys pravallika aka (prava55663)is joining this SS,
Ou Trio! me,prava and rami together write this SS.

and from now it will be regular updates,
once again we are extremely sorry for the late,
if any body wants pm send request to me or prava
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Hey friends we are back with next chapter, extremely sorry for the late,
hope u guys enjoy reading this part.welcome to ss prava dear,i am glad u r part of this ss

PRECAP-

Everyone were enjoying their day, Rathord's phone buzzes and shree taps the call and they go that bungalow and they get locked in that bungalow and after trapping in the house weird things were happening to all of them. They all here somebody saying something, Riya and Shweta were hell scared.

CHAPTER-3

Arjun, Rathord, Shree, Chotu searches throughout the house, so as to know from where the sounds were actually coming from. All 4 of them go in a different direction to search.

Riya and Shweta were in hall, suddenly they hear some strange sound from store room. Shweta says Riya tum yahi rook na mai dek ke aati hoon and saying so, she goes to store room. As soon as she goes inside, she immediately switches on the lights. The room was completely dusty with web and the room, was not at all cleaned since ages. She manages to go ahead, and then suddenly the door gets closed the lights get switched off. And there was minimal light in the room and then she was a skeleton and she started to scream out of her voice, and faints due to shock.

Here Riya was worried and she too walks towards storeroom. But she sees that door was closed. She tries to open but she couldn't, she was calling Shweta. But there was no reply. Ria was scared.

She calls everyone. All of them come rushing there, and asks what happened she narrates everything. Chotu tries to open the door, he pushes the door and tries to unlock it. He pushes the door hard and finally manages to open the door. Arjun and Rathord look at Chotu. All of them enter the room Rathord sees shweta and goes near her, and takes her in his arm. He carried her till the hall, and he placed her on sofa. Riya pani lavo jaldi he said.

Riya was about to go to kitchen but Arjun stops him and says tum ruko Riya mai lata hoo. A small and cute smile appears on Riya's face. Arjun goes and brings a glass of water and gives it to Rathord.

Rathord sprinkles some water on Shweta's face, and she slowly opens her eyes and sees rathord in fornt of her. She immediately hugs him and starts sobbing loudly.

He tries to console her and asks her what happened, she says maine uss store room skeleton deki hai. Arjun and shree immediately get inside the storeroom and checks the room and somewhere at the corner, they find skeleton. It was a radium skeleton and in the dark had the effect due to which Shweta was scared, he brings it out and shows to her and says ye to ek radium skeleton hai Shweta, she sees it and feel relaxed.

Suddenly they heard landline ringing Arjun, Rathord, Shree and Chotu run towards the phone to pick it up. Arjun pick it up but it was dead. Here Shweta was taking rest on sofa, and Riya was standing in hall.

Suddenly Arjun comes and pushes her Riya fell on floor and arjun was lying top of her. There was a momentary eye lock. Suddenly they here a big sound, all of them turn to it. The chandelier falls down, at the place where riya was standing a second ago. Arjun gets ups and gives hand to riya and asks her are u ok riya. She just nodes her head, and her eyes becomes teary.

Rathord says ye kaise gira hai, aur ye sab kya ho raha hai iss ghar mai, kuch to hai iss ghar mai, jo humhe nazar nahi aa raha hai Arjun says haa Rathord tum sahi keha rahe ho, vakai kuch to hai jo humse choot raha hai...

Chotu says to shree yaar Shree mujhe to zoron ki bhook lagi hai. Shree says aisa situation mai tumhe bhook kaise lagi rahi hai yaar. Chotu says bhook ko kya pata hai ye sab. Arjun and Rothord heard their conversation and said, chalo deko kitchen mai kuch to hai kya khane ke liye...

Shree and Chotu both went to kitchen, both of them enter kitchen. They find some parcels on kitchen counter and they took them to check what was inside that. They bring it to hall and said sir ye deko kisne humhe khane ka parcel bheja hai, all are shocked with that.

Riya and Shweta says kahi ye sab kuch bhoot to nahi kar raha hai na, par bhoot khana kuyn dega, lagta hai khana de ke hume marne ka irada hai. Rathord hear's this and says tum dono todi der ke liye chup karo ye sab, ye koi bhoot nahi kara hai, kuch to hai iss ghar mai, jo humhe nazar nahi aaraha hai...

They opens food packet and eat it, after eating it Riya says kahi iss mai posion to nahi hai na, Shree shouts kya keha rahi ho.

Ab ya khana hamari pet mein hai, Arjun say tum kuch bi soch ti ho Riya, agar koi humhe marna chahta hai to kab ka maar diya hota, iss tarah nahi marega.

Rathord says haa u r right Rawte par koun hai vo, chalo itana sab kuch ho gaya hai ab so jate hai, Shree says sir par kaha soyenge. Rathord says itna sara room hai na sone ke liye. Shweta and Riya shouts kya, nahi ...hum sab ek saat nahi so sakte hai kya, Arjun says ok and they all sleep in hall.

Next morning, everyone woke up hearing a sound. It was echoing in whole palace.

JALDI UTT JAVO AAJ BI KUCH THRILLING KARNA HAI TUM LOGO KO,
AB AISA DAR GAYE TO TO AAP SAB...


saying this person starts laughing loudly, they all are confused and get up and searches again but all go in vain. Suddenly they found a letter on dining table...


sorry guys we have to stop here only and u guys keep guessing what is there in that letter😆

PRECAP-
past of riya and shweta…


Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
hey...loved the concept!!!

so all ETF members locked in a bungalow!!
wow...nice!
vo bungalow me bhi Ariya and rathod-shweta are romancing..haha...love them!
oohhh...blood..scary...
and that voice!!

really...loved it!
update soon!!
and do PM me!😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
rea
edited
it was awesome
had to read all parts in one go.
Love both jodis...
The story is so gud..
Update soon
thanks for pm
Edited by samiya.059 - 12 years ago

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