Ariya SS: Jab tak hai Jaan..(Epilogue) 29/10 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hiddenpearl

Hugs...for writing this ss...
s its really sad tat riya character is going to end..but still little hope and waiting for the coming episode...and awesome update buddy...i know here in this ss...she is safe..waiting to read what arjun is going to do now...thanks for the pm...and update soon...@>--@>--@>--



Thanks hun.. I know its difficult not to, but try not to assume things.. You never know what's in store for us.. Lets keep our fingers crossed! Wish for the best and be prepared for the worst! All in all, the show must and will go on! We at IF-Arjun will make sure of it!! 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: tani23

Love u avantika 😊...


for such a beautiful title ...waiting for D movie

...

OMG i dun have nything to say now..

for d first tym my hands are shivering while typing...

It was just awesum...

it brought tears in n unemotional person like me ...Luvd it

i had goosebumps while reading d part

i hope she gets saved in d Show also




Yupp.. me waiting for the movie too.. The trailer looks really promising!!

Well, thanks for those words.. I'm glad you could relate to it.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dee86

Did I ever tell you that you're a wonderful writer? Cos you are. The way you draw people into your stories is just brilliant. I love this story too; this first chapter, especially Arjun's reaction was so touching! I can't but hope that the story onscreen will be half as good as this. Will be waiting to read the rest!! Thanks for writing this...

p.s. I share your feeling reg Riya's exit. Why the hell are they tampering with such a lovely character? As if Sana leaving wasn't bad enough, they go and write off Riya?? Sorry, but if this isn't moronic, then I don't know what is. Hope Riya is saved somehow. *fingers crossed*


Thanks a ton dearie.. Let's hope we do get something similar to this plot on the show.. I mean, leaving aside the Sana quit/ Riya dead angle; I am kinda looking fwd to the team members' reactions..

I am sort of done cribbing, coz you know there's really no point in us blowing off steam over it.. I have no clue why someone from the PH isn't coming out clean with it! It's really high time they do it! Unless, they really want to keep us hanging by a fine thread until Sat..

They may not be sure themselves, but a simple yes or no to our question shouldn't be that difficult I guess..

Anyway, thanks fr reading and commenting.. Working on the next one.. Should be up by tomo morning! 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm so annoyed with the PH right now! All I want to know is if Riya is safe or not; surely, that's not too much to ask! Nothing I can do, unfortunately. Thanks to writers like you, I'm able to keep my sanity to an extent. Absolutely @ looking forward to the team's reactions.

Yay @ tomorrow. Will be waiting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hey Avantika!
It was awesome!! A much needed one!
The pain in Arjun's eyes everything.
Its very beautifully written! :D
I hope Riya is saved in the show nd Yes..I hope Sana also doesn't quits!
Update the next part soon :)

-Sneha <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Hey Avantika,
You know what... as you said I really cried reading this,
My heart felt Arjun and Riya's pain...
But as you promised that the ending will be happy, I am lookign forward to the next update now...
Pls update soon and thanks for the PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey avni...loved it...n really tears r dripping down my eyes...
i can't see riya being dead ( i know it wont be in ur SS but im not sure about the show)😭
anyways the way u described arjun-riya-rathore's feelings was really touching...the way riya asked shree to give the letters to their owners... riya not letting go off arjun's shirt n arjun riya's hand...😭😭 made me emotional...
the last part rathore not being able to again separate arjun from his life...
update soon...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE! update soon and plz pm x
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
very nice waiting for an update!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Please update soon. It looks fab so far.

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