Ariya SS: Jab tak hai Jaan..(Epilogue) 29/10

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

OMG this is such a splendidly written story. Read all the parts together. Seriously all the emotions were so eloquent! Superb job.

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

wow this is a brilliant ending of this beautiful SS..

throughout the part I had smiles on my face

Ariya bond is protrayed beautifully.

this makes me to keep Ariya alive in my heart even after Riya is no more..

i will be waiting for your next FF/SS/OS

thank you.

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

just one word " wow "

loved it yarr marvelous story ...

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Priya SINGH

@FLOREY

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

hi mohhabatgirl , its tina from many days i mfollwing ur strs almost every(sry for not cmnting😊

coz of net issue). then i read fanna n i was emntly touched n my heart started remorsing

.then i opened jab tak hai jaan i read half part of chap 1 n was on a verge of crying

so i discontinued it bcoz i cant tolerate the pain .but i abain opened the page read that the ending is ahappy 1. so i got happy and decided 2 read but i saw that the chapters r not coming anymore

. i could c only comments an title. i tried many times but alas ... plz do smthng