SS- Angry Birds part-5 pg16 (pms later)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey all...i am here again to bore you all with my writing🤢

the idea is awesome which was given to me by my friend sweetdoc. i hope i live up to her expectations.😳 here is a bit of intro..

ARJUN SURYAKAANT RAWTE(31)

He is still'kuvaara'😳 he has not married becoz he loves his job too much and he is always engrossed in his work. he thinks his life is his work.His best friend is rathore. both of them are ETF chief officers. arjun is very introvert he doesn't make friends so easily. his mother keeps telling him to marry but he thinks marriage means lots of problem so he always neglects his mother's requests. another reason for him not marrying is the fact that his parent's marriage was not a success. he hates his father. he lives with his mother.

SULEKHA RAWTE

she is arjun's mother. she is very jolly. she loves to live her life to the fullest. she has no regrets for her divorce as she thinks that it was better to live alone with her son than to face that tee-totaler everyday. she is a typical gossip woman. she is always after arjun to make him get married but in vain.

she is self-dependent,she works as a teacher.

RIYA MUKHARJEE(28)

she is a very happy-go-lucky girl. she loves her mom and dad a lot. she likes challenging boys. she is new to ETF now. her biggest enemy is arjun. they both are always fighting with each other. riya is very pure at heart.she has maintained herself very well, nobody can say that her age is above 25. it took a lot of time for her to become an ETF officer so she could not marry. now her mother is searching for a good husband for her. riya has a very positive view towards marriage. she is just waiting for the right one.

BASHABI MUKHARJEE

she is riya's mom. she is exactly like arjun's mom. she loves chatting with friends shopping and gossiping. she loves her husband and daughter a lot. she is riya's childhood best friend also. she is searching for a good husband for riya. she is very eager to get her married.

The other characters are the same, shree, rathore(he is not angry or anything at arjun, he is his best friend) and chotu.

(the main concept is that how will these angry birds 😡 turn into love birds ...!😳)

hey all i know some of you want me to start the SS as soon as possible but its not possible for me to handle 2 FFs and 1SS at the same time😭. so i will be starting this SS a little later, when i come to the end of one of my FFs or...if you all really want me to start this...then the other FFs will be updated at gaps of 2-3 days...plzz tell me which option do you prefer...! and tell me how's the concept...all credit for concept goes to my dear friend sweetdoc😳.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX

PART-1 Pg2
PART-2 Pg5
PART-3 Pg9
PART-4 Pg12
PART-5 Pg16
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya do update...its quite interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is very different and interesting...plzz update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds very interesting and loved your plot, angry birds to love birds😳...
do start this one, and you decide the best way to proceed since i know it is very tiring to write the SS and FFs.
anything you decide, i'll wait👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yupppiiieee

Love u a lot rimmss!!!!
The intro part is awsum

Characters are defined perfectllly..
U r totally gonna rock thiss ss babe...i know :):):)

Nd abt updatin...do whats feasible to u :):)
Coz sunshine nd lovely hatred r super rockinn...give them full tym if u want :):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice intro rimjhim..
about post do as you feel comfortable..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice plzz update soon
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this sounds so admirable😳
would love to see how their mothers would end up bringing them together and what role would they play in the story later on😉
and this is quite refreshing as well😃
continue soon dear 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi all...i know you all must be thinking-"kitna pakaati hai ye apne FFs se...abb SS bhi leke aa gayi"😆 but don't worry my updates of this SS will be small...and ye topic bada mast hai but i donno mai kitna accha likh paaongi...so here i go!

Part-1

(she was getting late and the traffic was stopping her from reaching ETF office on time. She hated to be late. Her driver pressed the horns number of times but the traffic was not moving at all. It was enough. She got down from her car and ran. She was running and walking to reach the office. She saw a car going in the same direction. She followed it and tried to stop it by coming infront of it. The car stopped as riya stood just infront of the car. She was panting)

(a very handsome man stepped out of the car and looked at her in anger)

Arjun- what the hell…..marna hai toh meri hi gaadi mili thi?

Riya- no….vo actually…..

Arjun- muhe tumhaari safaai nahi chahiye…..hato saamne se aur dobaara ye naatak matt karna…samjhi ya samjhaaon?

Riya- how dare you talk to me like that???? Mai bataa rahi hoon ki maine kyu roka aapko, but aap ho ki sunna hi nahi chahte.

Arjun- nahi sunna mujhe kuch bhi…..apni bakwaas band karo and get lost.

(arjun sat in the car the drove away)

Riya- huh! What attitude!!! Mr khadoos..!😡

(the whole office was in a mess. Everybody was busy with their works and nobody was paying attention to the crap around the rooms. Bits of paper,old documents,etc.etc. all were lying here and there.)

(suddenly a girl entered the main door and the every1 went silent. The receptionist stood up. Every1 was staring at the girl. She was wearing a red top with tight jeans,carrying a handbag and she had made a pony and was wearing goggles. The girl was riya. she went to the receptionist)
riya-(taking out her goggle)- hi…I am riya….riya mukharjee…today is my first day…

Receptionist(showing her the way to the office room)- there …..

Riya(smiles😊)- thnku.

(every1 was looking at her with awe but she was looking at every1 with disgust. They all were looking mad and everywhere she could see only papers and works. She finally entered the office room and saw rathore who was sitting on the chief chair, arjun was standing and looking at the board and thinking about the case. Shree and chotu were talking about something sitting on the chairs.)

(as soon as she entered)

Riya- can I come in?

(every1 looked at her, even arjun turned to look at her and for a fraction of a second his heart said-wow but then he thought- ye paagal ladki yaha bhi????.)

Rathore- y-yess…

Arjun(interrupting rathore)- of course you can come in, the door is open, you CAN definitely come in…..but you MAY not come in…!

Rathore-what is this arjun…bechaari ka pehla din hai…use aaj se hi manners sikhaane lage?

Arjun- ye sab use pehle se hi seekh ke aana tha.

Riya(rolling her eyes)- ok….MAY I come in sir?

Arjun- huh! Yes, you may.

(riya entered thinking- khadoos kahi ka yaha bhi aa gaya🤔)

(rathore shake hands with riya)

Rathore- welcome riya, I am you chief sameer rathore

Riya- hello…

Rathore-(pointing to arjun) he is ACP arjun.(riya makes an irritable face and says hello sir😒).(rathore points to shree and chotu)- he is shree our technical expert and chotu our commando.

Riya- hello shree..hi chotu….

Rathore- and team, ye hai miss riya mukharjee….aaj se ye humaare saath as research specialist kaam karegi.

All- hello ….welcome….(arjun just rolls his eyes)

Rathore- please sit down riya.

(riya went to sit on a chair)

Arjun- ruk jao….vo meri chair hai….😡

Riya- oh…toh yaha sab ki chairs pe naam likha rehta hai…

Arjun- mai hamesha vahi baithta hoon….samjhi ya samjhaoon?

Rathore- plzz riya, tum uske baajoo vaali chair pe baith jao…vaha arjun baithta hai😕.

(riya sits on the next chair.)

Rathore- toh team, I hope aap log riya ko ek accha welcome denge. Now, lets discuss about the case…..arjun tum baith jao.

(arjun sits on his chair next to riya and takes his pen in his hand and rolls it)

Riya(thinking)- kaisa khadoos insaan hai! uff god mai iske saath ek second bhi nahi reh sakti…😕.

Arjun(thinking)- pata nahi kaha-kaha se aa jaate hain...kisi bhi raah chalti ladki ko ETF me bhej diya…nonsense🤔.

(rathore discussed something about the case and then he gave every1 a break. Riya went to take coffee and just when she was turning back with her cup she banged into arjun and the coffee fell on his shirt,down the neck.)

Arjun- ah!!!!!!😲

(he was furious😡. The coffee was so hot,and it destroyed his fav shirt)

Arjun- what the hell is this miss mukharjee?😡

Riya- I am sorry sir…😲.but meri koi galti nahi thi..aap mere peeche kyu khade the…!??😔

Arjun- mai tumhaare peeche nahi, tum mere aage khadi thi.!!! Samjhi ya samjhaaon??😡

Riya- ye kya samjhi ya samjhaaon-samjhi ya samjhaaon laga rakha hai aapne????? Chup nahi reh sakte aap?😡

Arjun(going close to her)- ye koi tareeka hota hai apne se senior officers se baat karne ka?😡

Riya-(going close to him)- mujhe tareeka sikhaane se pehle khud ladkiyo se baat karne ka tareeke seekh ke aaiye! Samjhe??? Ya……

that is it guys...plzz tell me kaisa laga??? plzz plzz plzzz comment and like (if u liked it)😳

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