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Awesome update... Chhotu is so funny...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
Great part ..
Enjoyed reading ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 5-
gr8 update
shaurya's answers were so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww...awesome story...shaurya is so cute...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Saloni is completely lost it ...lost in him, hota hai...hota hai yesa hi hota hai, ekki medicine hai CONFESSION,ab jaldi sae confess kardo.
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nic3
update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6 Here Saloni goes to her & open her cupboard & take one snap frm her cloths , tht she used to hide frm her son. She wips her tears & starting talking to his snap. " Kyu , kyu kiya tumne aisa , hamne ne kuch jayda nahi maanga tha tumse tumhare pyar ke alva , phir bhi tumne mujhse itna bada dhoka kyu diya??? Kitna khush thi mai us din , jab mai jaan gayi thi , ki mai Maa banene wali hue. Sabse pehe le mai vo baat tumse share karna chahti thi , tumhari chehere ki khushi dekhna chahti thi. Par tumne sab kharab kar diya. Maine kabhi socha bhi nahi Sameer Rathore ki tum aise mera dil tod doge. Apne bhai se zooth bole maine sirf tumhare liye , sach chupathi rahi mai unse, shyad usi baat ki saza mil rahi hai aaj mujhe , us devata saman insaan ko dukh diya maine.Apne iss halat ki zimmedar mai khud hue .. "
She remeberd tht time whn she meets Sameer again. She comes frm a clg trip , its 10:00pm nw. so she dn't get any auto , due to bus strike , she have to walk. Suddenely raining starts . She goes to shelter & stand thr. Aftersomtime 2-3 persons also come thr . Suddenely someone cal her , She look back 7 found him. Ys thy meet agin. bth smiles @ each other.
Saloni : Aap yaha , is time ? ( Actually she is so happy to meet him again.)
Rathore : Ha , vo mai ghar jaa raha tha, par tum yaha kaise?
Saloni : Vo meri clg ki trip thi , mai bhi abhi ghar hi jaa rahi thi.
Rathore : ohh . k.. par aaj to bus ki strike hai , aur itni lte tumhe yaha auto bhi nahi milegi.
Saloni : ha , isiliye paidal jaa rahi thi.
Rathore : No way , mai tumhe iss wqut akale jane ki permission nahi de sakta , mai tumhe ghar chod dunga.
Saloni : Jee ,,, jee nahi mai chali jaaungi..
Rathore : ( goes near to her & whispers in very low voice so only Saloni can hear tht. ) Daro mat mai kuch nahi karunga , i promise.. (& turn around to see to check rain.)
Saloni : ( Blushes hard . She look @ him . he wear grey tshirt wit white track pant. He completely wet .. He constantaly wips his face , due to ths his skin turn red. He look so cute na.. Saloni stop it.. control urself. She warnd to herself)
After somtime rain stooped. bth also leave frm thr. Suddenely Rathore sneezes. " God Bless You." Rathore look @ Saloni & smiles to her.
R : I need Tea badly ..
S : ha , par mujhe nahi chayie ..
R: Par kyu ?
S : i want ice-cream.
R : ( touch her forehead & neck ) Bukhaar to nahi hai , kahi tumne kuch galat kha to nahi liya ns.
S : Aaa , bilkul nahi , mai hamesha kuch ulta karti hue , plz chalo na mujhe ice-cream khani hai ..
R : No , ab kuch seedha karte hai .. Kahi chal kar chai peete hai , aur phir mai tumhe drop kar dunga.
S : Par ... ice-
R : ( Cut her) Abhi nahi , tum kitni bhig chuki ho , sardi lag jaaygi.
S : Acha thik hai. Par aap mujhe baad mai leke jaayenge.
R : Ha baba leke jaaunga , tumhe tumhari ice-cream khane ke liye. To ab ghar chale?
S : ha chaiye..
Thy reach home. Rathore is abt to go , bt Saloni stops him.
S : Kaha jaa rahe hai , chai nahi peeni?
R : Nahi mai ghar jaakar bana dunga..
S : ( pouted her face ) Kyu aap ko kya laga ki mai chai mai mila dungi..
R : ( smiles @ her ) Nahi par vo Arjun
S : Ha jaanti hue ki vo ghar pe nahi hai , Pune gaye hai , 2 din ke baad aaynge . Aur kuch...
R : Ha jaanta hue , par ...
S : ( goes near to him & tell him ) Dariye mat mauka dekh kar mai kuch nahi karungi aap ke saath..
And wit tht bth starteing to smile.
Rathore park his bike & followed Saloni. Saloni goes her room & chanes into her nightwear. Afterthat she goes to kitchen & prepare chai for bth. She wiping her wet hair. & goes to hall , where Rathore seats , he continue sneezing.
S : Hey Bhagu , aap ko to sardi lag gyi , aap bhi na.. ( She goes to near him & start to dry his hair .)
R : ( Taken aback ) vo mai ...
S : Chup chaap rahiye aap , bahut jaada baat karte hai aap. Aap jaayie aur jakar kapde badal dijiye.
R : Kya ? nahi mai ...
S : maine aap ki baat man li , to aap ko meri baat manani hogi . Mai aap ko bhai ke kade deti hue , aap vo pehen lijiye , aur ha ab kuch bhi mat bolna . chai taiyyar ho rahi hai.
R : Tumse baatone mai koi jeet nahi sakta..
Rathore chanes into Arjun's cloths. Bth enjy tea. Rathore is abt to leave . Whn Saloni start her bombarding on him
S : Dheere jana , ghar pehunch kar mujhe cal kar dijyega , Aur ha kuch garam pehenkar so jaayei.. varna thand lag jaayegi aur ... Rathore : Ha mai pehunchkar cal karndunga tumhe ... S : Ha thik hai , par kaise aap ke to mera no bhi nahi..
R : Shukr hai yaad to aaya , varna agali baar mujhe daat deti ki maine cal kyu nahi kiya.
Thy exchange thr no. Rathore leaves frm thr. Saloni also eats somthing & keep her bed ready , whn she notices her phn receive a msg. She read tht msg & smiles . "To jannb ghar pehunch gaye. " & reply msg.
Here Rathore abt to close his eyes , whn he heard tht his cell rings , he smiles to himself. & reads msg. "Oho ye ladki bhi na gud night . kal milte hai '" & closes his eyes.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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finally u updated\ was waitng ofr tihs update since long
to short update
want a longer one plzzz
btw it was aweosme loved rathore saloni scenes a lot
plz cont sooonn
cant wait for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7
Saloni remeberd tht day whn she tell Sona abt him. Sona is also happy for her frnd. Sona ask her , sevearl things abt Sameer.
Sona : To kuch baat aage badi ki nahi.
Saloni : Tu pagal hai kya? Mai aise kaise jaake use kuch bhi bol du?
Sona : To tu kya jindagi bhar use chai hi pilati rehegi?😊
Saloni : Shut up Sona , mujhe bada dar lag raha hai , aur yaha tujhe majak such raha hai..
Sona : ( Laughing loudly ) Ha ha dekho dekho Ye zansi ki rani bhi darti hai kisi se, My dear agar aise darti rahi na , to tera kuch nahi hoga , koi aur uda ke leke jaayegi use , aur tu tata bye bye karte rehena. .
Saloni : ( her eyes filled wit tears ) (She bcome silent )
Sona : (Sona look @ her) Are tu ro kyu rahi hai , tu theek to hai na. Im sry Saloni , mai to bas aise hi majak kar rahi thi , tu jaake use bol de , dekh vo bhi maan jaayega.. (& wipe her eyes wit hands)
Saloni : Par Sona vo nahi maana to , usne naa keh diya to , mai kya karungi? Phir to vo mujhse kabhi baat bhi nahi karega.
Sona : Are oo meri tragady queen , yaha baith ke kuch sochne ne se to acha hai ki jaake bol de use sabkuch. Aur ha ab par var kuch nahi.
Saloni : K . mai try karti hue.
Saloni goes to her home. She is vry tense nw. She dn't knw wht to do. She is vry disturbed , Tht eveing Saloni goes to mandir .
" Hey Bappa ab aap hi mujhe rasta dikha do , samaz nahi aa rahi aa ki mai kya karu , Use jake bol du , nahi , par nahi bolungi na mai ghut ghut kar mar jaaungi. Kaise kehungi use , Meri to peheli hi baari hai , aap kuch madad kar lo meri , Are aap aise kya dekh rahe hai meri tarh , mai kya koi pagal hue . nahi , ... ( She put her finger in her mouth & unknowlingly bite tht ) Ouch ... ha mai to sach mai pagal ho gyi hue.. Par ab aap hi bata do mai kya kehungi unse , kya sochnege vo mere bare mai , agar unke dil aisa kuch nahi hua to , Chup baith Saloni , uske dil mai bhi vahi hai , varna vo thodi hi tere itna sab kuch karta. (She remerbered , thr lunch , ice-cream party , thr meeting in rain ) she felt relif. Bt again her mind tell her 'ye sabkuch to koi bhi kisi ke saath kar sakta hai ." Oh oo ab mai kya karu? "
Suddenely she hears a voice . ." Kya baat hai aaj Bhagwan ko kyu tang kar rahi ho ? "
Saloni turned around & find Rathore standing thr.
S: Aap yaha , is wqut?
R : Ha , mai to yaha darshan karne aaya tha , par lagta hai ki shyad tum yaha zhagda karne aaye thi.
S : ha .. na.. nahi to..
R : Vaise zhagda khamtm ho gya ya abhi bhi kuch baaki hai ..,
S : Aapne kuch suna to nahi na..
R : nahi , par mujhe lagta hai ki suna na chayie tha.
S : ( Sighs in a relif )
R : To ab chale ?
S : Kaha ?
R : Kahi tumhara irrda yaha raatbhar rukne ka to nahi hai na..
S : Nahi nahi.. Chaliye.
Thy bth takes prasad frm Pandit. & turn around , again thy do prnam to bappa. Thy leave mandir primese , whn Sona who also come thr to temple saw bth , she observes Rathore , " Hmm he is so handsme , Saloni ki to lotterey hi lag gyi. " Saloni's gaze fell on her , Sona give 👍🏼 to her.
Rathore talking somthing to Saloni bt tod she unable to listen anything. Saloni starts hihcupping very badly . Rathore bring water bottle to her. Saloni drinks d water fastly & give d bottle to Rathore, he also drinks d water. while Saloni takes a deep breath & tel him , Sameer , I Luv U . " & look @ him. Rathod just throw water out of his mouth.
R : Saloni ..
S : Nahi Sameer , aaj mujhe baat karne do , plz ..
R : K . par yaha nahi. chalo mere saath.
Thy goes to his house, he lived alone thr.
R : Ha ab bolo , kya keh rahi thi tum?
S : Mai vo , vo mai , maine vo ...
R : ( Cup her face & tel her ) Close ur eyes , & take a deep breath , say wht u want ...
S : (Do ths wht he said , & said , "I Luv U Sameer , mai nahi jaanti ki aap mujhse pyar karte ho ya nahi , par mai aapse bahut pyar karti hue , sacchi itna pyar to maine kabhi kisi se nahi kiya , mai khud hi hairan hue , ki pta nahi ye sab kasie ho gya , Shyad aaj ke baad aap mujhse baat bhi nahi karnge , mujhe dekhna bhi pasand na kare. Par tabhi bhi mai apne dil ko nahi rok paaungi , aisa nahi hai ki maine apne aap ko rokene ki koshish nahi ki , bahut ki par fail ho gayi. Mai nahi jaanti ki aapka ans kya hoga , shyad na hoga , ha na hi hoga , mai aap ki tarha gori to nahi hue , jyada khubsurat to nahi hue , baki ladkiyon ki tarah vo chote chote kapde to nahi pehenti , par itna jarur jaanti hue ,ki mai aap ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hue , kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti hue . mai sirf aapko khush rakhna chahti hue , bas.. mere baja se aapko koi dukh ye mujhe manjoor nahi , mujhe aapke pyar ke alva aur kuch bhi nahi chayie aap se. " Wit tht she open her eyes & looke @ Sameer who standing thr calmly . She felt her heart is so heavy , she get up frm chair whr she seat , & try to go bt Sameer Rathore hold her hand ,
R : Apna ans sune bina hi chali jaayogi ...
S : (Turn around & look @ him )
R : (Goes near to her ) Tumhe kya lagta hai ki mera ans kya hoga? Tum jaanti bhi mai khud dar raha tha tumse ye baat karne ke liye , ki mai tumse tumse kitna pyar karta hue , (Saloni lift her gaze & look @ him astonishdley) Ha Saloni jab maine yumhe peheli baar dekha tha na , tabhi tum mujhe pasand aa gyi thi , mai hamseha socha raha ki pta nahi hame kabhi milnge ya nahi. Lekin hame phir mile , tumhare ghar pe , tumhe vaha dekhkar mai khush bhi tha , aur hairan bhi tha. Mai socha bhi nahi tha ki tum Arjun ki behen ho sakti ho . maine bhi bahut koshish ki thi tumse dur jane ki , par nahi kar paya . Tum me kuch hai , jo mujhe har wqut tumhari tarah khecchta hai , tumhare paas aakar , tumhe dekh kar hi mai khush hta hue . Aur rahi baat tumhari khubsurti ki to , to tum bahut khubsurat ho , tumhe khubsurat lagne ke liye kisi cheezon ki zarurat nahi padti , tum to naturalyy ki bahut khubsurat ho . Aur ha rahi baat mere sukh - dukh ki , to tum mere saath ho to har din khushiyon hogi hamari zindagi mai , dukh bhi aayega na to vo sukh mai badal jaayega . "
Wit tht thy bth started crying & bent down nw thr foreheads touches to each other. Thy crying holding each other face for somtime. after tht thy hug each other . satisfaction sees on thr faces completly.
Here Rathore & Arjun , riya & Shaurya goes to DAV School.
Shaurya sees his school & ask Rathore , "Pa hum yaha kyu aaye hai ? "
Before Rathore could ans Arjun ans him , " Beta hame aap ke Principal se milne aaye hai . "
Shurya : To aap jaayie mai aur Pa nahi aaynge
Riya : Kyu ?
Sahurya : Kyu ki vo pricipal bade bre karte hai ..
Rathore & Arjun smile @ his ans.
Riya : K . theek hai .. thy goes frm thr.
thy inform principal tht thy want to meet him. Within five seconds Principal call thm
In Princi's Room : -
P : Jee kahiye mai kya madad kar sakta hue aap ki ?
Arjun : Showed him Shurya's id card , tht he got frm his bag ) JHame is bacche ke bare mai jane na hai .
P : (Take ths card frm Arjun's hand & carefully oberves it ) Ha ye baccha hamari hi school mai padta hai.
Riya : Ji jante hai .. Actually hame iski kuch personal info chayie thi.
P : Ooo i see ( he cal Peoun & ordered him to bring thr admission book.
Arjun & Riya waiting thr , Prnici ask thm for tea r coffee , bt thy refuse him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*editedawww di Honestly this is the cutest OS I ever read love Rathore and Saloni's relation... Chap 6 abhi read kiya... cant wait to read nxt part wait tumne upar hi post kiya... Leaving to read that😉 Chap 7 was so cute... loved their confession😳 Hayeee how cute and romantic☺️
Vaise manuu di this is not fair u left the Chap in between itself.. please update soon
I'm dying to read more please please please😃
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago

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