SS: The Guilt (Discontinued NOTE at page 42)! - Page 3

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Yay!! So u've followed suit! Welcome to the writer's club dear.. Trust me when I say, that it was too good for a first piece of fiction! 👏👏

hey avantika...thank u dear...😳

Coming to the update, Awww... Poor doll, she couldn't shoot! 😲 And obviously they're concerned for her.. I loved the way u've portrayed Rathore and Arjun's emotions. They know she's an integral part of the team, yet they're helpless..

thanks again ..yes she is an important part of the team...but it's for her betterment.

So, thanks for the PM! 😊 And congratulations on the SS.. I wish you many more to come.. 😊 Please PM me when u update next; would love to read more of this.. 😊

sure i will 😳

Originally posted by: Divya.n.t

Riya nahin jayegi kyun ki Arjun usse jane nahin dega😳

Riya is like a breath of fresh air in the ETF team...She is surely important.

Nice choice of theme👍🏼

continue to pm me.😉

Originally posted by: priya00147

loved the entire part!!!
poor riya have to return to research desk!!!no!!!!!
please pm when you update..

and get well soon dear 😊

Originally posted by: Sabina_Ansari

It was so very good.
Riya wont go to research desk m sure thy'llgive her lst chnce n she will prove herself...
Add me to ur pm list nd update soon...

Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Finallly u decide to write...welcome to writer's world dear
O no...no riya...my deepest fear regarding riya have been depicted here.. but pllz plz no...she cant go backkk
U have written so awsumly..conngo...sachi mei serial wali feel a ri.thi
Jaldi jaldi update the next part :):)

Originally posted by: funkylicious

finally you wrote...well done mushi... awww kya plot hai...awesome awesome🤗 continue soon

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Are you sure this is your first time writing? Or is it just your first time writing a SS? Well either way I thought it was really good. Wish it was a bit longer though cuz I'm curious to see what Riya will do now. I really wanna see Riya step up her game and prove them both wrong. Can't wait for the next update =)

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

please update soon and
send me pm

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Really nice start..continue soon,!

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Wonderful start to your very first SS Mushi, you are doing a great job. Continue soon.