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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Just Ossam
Love ur FF
Different concept.
thx for PM
plz update asap
love to read mre.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Here is another short update. Love you for those too wonderful comments.

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"Why?"

Arjun cursed aloud for the umpteenth time.

Why Riya, Arjun thought, why did you do this to me. I had asked you to stay away from me from the time I met you again. You should have listened to me. No one ever leaves everything that was dear to them without a good reason. If I left everything behind me it was because it was needed. I was at peace after so many years, but then you came along. Why? I did all this for Maya. But now?...

In his hurry to leave the office premises as fast as possible he did not notice shree standing in front of him.

"Sir?", called shree, waving his hands in front of Arjun's face.

"What?", snapped Arjun breaking out from his trance.

"Sir, Rathore sir is waiting for you. He want to go to some kind of office before leaving for Kerala. Chottu is already in the car. Rathore sir asked me to come and call you Riya.", Shree stopped for taking a deep breath. Seeing arjun snap at him all he wanted was to get away from him. "By the way", he continued looking around, "where is Riya, sir?

"Up in the office. Go and get her fast. I will go to the car."

Seeing Shree run upstairs, Arjun muttered, "Always sticking to Riya." He stopped and then said aloud, "Whatever. It is not my problem."

But something kept on nagging at his mind. But it is, the voice finally took shape, it is you problem. Riya was the girl who proposed you for the first time. She was the one who waited by the shed after school to talk to you secretly before going back home. She was the one who used to pray for you instead of praying for herself, before exams. She was you first love!

"No it doesn't matter anymore!"

Saying so Arjun opened the door of the car and sat down on the passenger seat.





"Where is Riya and Shree?", asked Rathore.

"They are coming. They will be here soon. Don't worry, they are not our children.", replied Arjun, sarcasm dripping from his words.

Rathore was taken aback for a moment. Arjun had had stopped behaving like this for about a year. But what must have happened now? He turned to face arjun and began to ask, but suddenly his phone rang.

"Shree? Why is he calling me?", asked a surprised Rathore. He took the call, but had accidently also pressed the speaker mode button. "What is it..."

"Sir, please come up fast. And ask chottu to start the car. Riya is hurt."

"What? What happened?", asked Rathore, hoping that it must have been a small wound. But Arjun could sense the agitation in shree's voice. He had already started to open the door when shree shouted through the phone, "She seemed to have hit her head on the desk. She is bleeding profusely and is unconscious. Please co..."

Arjun did not hear the rest of Shree's words as he had already started running towards the office.



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"We can't say that she is out of danger.", said the doctor.

Rathore, shree and chottu were huddled around the doctor who had just come out of the ICU.
"The wound is pretty deep. But that is not the problem. Her body seems to be rejecting all the medicines. It is not just the fall, officers, she also seem to have gone through a mental shock. I consulted with our phsychatrist. He said that it must have been a shock revived. An after effect of something that had happened earlier. We are triying to contact their family docto. I will let you know"

"Thank you doctor.", Rathore said, and three moved away to give space for the doctor to leave. "Shree,", he said, "you and chottu should go to her home and try to get some information."

"Yes sir.", they walked out, but not before giving a glance to Arjun.

For the past 8 hours Arjun had been standing in the same position. With his hand on the glass partition that showed Riya's face to the world outside. He had ran like a mad man to the etf office. One look at the bleeding Riya something had took over him. He had took her in her arms and ran towards the car. If Riya had been able to see his eyes then, she would have been too happy. Aditya Varma was there instead of Arjun Raute.

"Arjun", said Rathore gently, placing a reassuring hand on Arjun's shoulder.

"Samar", he turned around as if in shock and then suddenly hugged him. "Why do I do this to everyone, Samar? All she had ever wanted was the old Aditya to come back in me. But what did I do? I showed her an alien Aditya, whom she never knew."

Rathore continued to hold him, but he was also in shock. Arjun was Aditya. But how?

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Phew! over. I know that I did not open up the mystery of change of identities. But I will surely do so soon. In the meantime continue to like and comment. They are the best.
Edited by Hermione1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesooom dear

kya baat hai...ye to ek jhatka sa laga hoga rathore ko...arjun is rahul... riya's rahul...wow

lovely update...i really want to know who is maya?

good work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
ow it's really good...like it...emotional side of arjun...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
heyyy awsome part plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome update dear, but it was too short😳
wanted more and more, becoming greedy now😆
Please update veryvery soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Arjun is jealous of Shree and Riya... It is so obvious

Hope Riya gets fyn soon

So finally Rathore sir got to know abt the truth

Really excited to know more abt Arjun and Riya story



Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
This is the last update of the week. Next would be on Monday or Tuesday. I was going to post this on Monday, but I could'nt stop myself, thanks to your wonderful comments.

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"Stay here Ri. Don't go anywhere. When we talk about your crush to Aditya, you should be here. He will be impressed", said Gauri for the 100th time.

A gruop of girls are standing in the assembly ground of a school. The object of their interest is a group of boys standing on the first floor of the school building. Two of the girls from the group were having a small talk.

"I won't stay here Gauri. Whenever I see him my knees start to tremble. And my any eyes lock, I...I start to melt, into a kind of molten state."

"Ri! If you had the guts to have a crush on your senior, that too in school for about 3 years, then you ought to have the guts to say your feelings aloud."

"I am sorry Gauri. I will wait at the entrance of the school. If you are adamant on telling Aditya about my crush, then wait here. When he comes down, tell him everything. If his reply is a no then listen to it yourself. Tell him that there is no need to tell it to me."

"And if his reply is a yes? Shall I ask him to come and talk to you?"

"There is no need to take any trouble. I am sure that his reply is going to be no."

Gauri started to retort, but stopped when the group of girls called out loud, "He is coming down Gauri!" Gauri walked fast towards the foot of the staircase with the other girls and Riya ran away from there.





15 MINUTES LATER
SCHOOL ENTRANCE

Where are the girls, thought Riya. I hope that a big problem has not been created. Maybe I should go inside and check it out. But, wait. What if Aditya is still there. What if they are waiting for me. What if he wants to say a no directly to me. No,no. I won't go inside.

"But, where are they?", saying this Riya spun around to face the school gate. Suddently she froze in her tracks. Aditya was coming towards her. All the previous times, she used to gaze at him without wavering. But today she did not look at him. All she saw was his eyes. Those eyes were doing something striking. They were searching for something. Or someone.

Or maybe me, thought Riya.

Riya, the girl who was not scared of even the most strict teachers, the girl who tried to give courage to her friends, started trembling. Her mouth went dry. The only thing she could think of was to hide somewhere, or maybe run. Her scare rose when she realised that there was no one in the premises. The area where her school was established was silent and devoid of all living things after the last bell at school rang. Finally making up her mind to escape, she started walking away.

Suddenly the most unexpected happened. She felt a warm hand enclose her own and spin her around. She darted her eyes upwards to look at the person who was holding her. In front of her was the person she had dreamed of for the last 3 years. She shut her eyes closed. She couild feel herself giving away, when a voice whispered in her ears, "My reply is yes."

She felt the hand leaving her and suddenly opened her eyes. There was no one in front of her except her friends who were clapping loud, with a wide smile on their face.

Riya felt a blush spreading through her face and whispered, "Adi..





...tya!..."

The nurses rushed towards the figure lying on the hospital bed. Realising that she was having a disturbed they gave her another dose of painkillers.

Outside the ICU, Arjun closed his eyes to let a lone tear fall. He whispered, looking at the unconscious figure on the bed, more like a promise to himself.

"I am here Riya. Your Aditya is here."
Edited by Hermione1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
I am sorry for not sending the pm. My pm is not apparently working.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awsome😳 simply lvd it plzz continue

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