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Posted: 12 years ago
here is the next part...i was so overwhelmed by ur comments really😳 please keep commenting to motivate me..! this part is ariyalicious!

(arjun and riya were trying their best to act as husband and wife, but arjun was very eager to solve the case as soon as possible)

(ariya on the lunch table)

(arjun notices that all the food items are served on the long table and each person has to serve the items on his/her own. Natasha used to serve for mrs mehta and used to take her food to her room as she was ill. Rest all had to take the food by themselves. Even the servants used to take food from the same pots after mr Mehta and her mother had finished. So there was no chance of poisoning, because poisoning one; would mean poisoning all.)

(at night arjun went to the library without letting anyone know)

(he searched the library and searched but found nothing but a chocolate box which was kept at the side table near the chair on which mr Mehta used to sit. Arjun analyzed the box well, the lid of the box was pink while the whole box was blue. This was a great clue for arjun. Why would a chocolate box have a totally different colored lid? He opened the lid and saw that all the chocolates had been eaten up. He then searched in the dustbin and saw another chocolate box and guess what- the lid of that box was blue while the whole was pink. Arjun immediately guessed that somebody had done something wrong with the chocolate box)

Arjun(to himself)- kisi ne toh chocolate box ke saath adla badli ki hai!

(he heard someone coming in, he hid behind the door of the library. The door opened and a sweet smell of rose came in before the person. The person was riya. Arjun pulled her towards him, and closed the library door. )

Arjun- riya…tum yaha kya karr rahi ho?

Riya- sir, mai bhi toh investigation…

(arjun kept his finger on riya's lips)

Arjun- shhh…..koi aa raha hai….

(arjun pulled riya close to him and enclosed her in his arms and moved to the back of a cupboard. The library door opened and meena entered. Riya was about to speak but arjun pushed her against the wall and pushed his hand on riya's lips.)

Arjun- shhh riya….

(they were very close now, their nose touching and arjun could feel her soft breathing which had increased in rate due to the closeness. Arjun held her in that position with his hand on her bare waist and another on her lips (and riya was pushed against the wall) for few minutes till meena was in the library. Arjun saw riya's sweet face which was turning red now☺️. Her beautiful eyes, her hairs playing on her face and all those things did something in arjun which amazed him. Meena left the library)

(arjun was lost in riya)

Riya-hmmm

(arjun removed his hands from her mouth but still he was holding her tightly against the wall)

Riya- sir….sir meena chali gayi!

Arjun- haan…kya?

Riya- sir meena chali gayi.

(arjun quickly leaves riya and moves away)

Arjun- tumhe yaha nahi aana tha riya.

Riya- sorry sir.mai bass yaha cameras fit karne aayi thi.

Arjun- ok..chalo jaao! Lagaa lo cameras. Mai room me jaa raha hoon.

(arjun goes and riya puts the cameras.)

(that night at about 11 pm)

(arjun was still working on his laptop. Riya was reading a novel on the bed.)

Riya- sir, aap kab soyenge?

Arjun- tum so jaao! Mai sofa pe so jaaonga..

Riya- but mujhe light band karni hai sir…

Arjun- accha karr lo, mai desk ki light on karr loonga aur desk pe hi baith jaaonga.

Riya- ok sir.

(arjun goes to the desk, sits on the chair with his lappy and puts on the table lamp)

(riya switched off the other lights)

(at about 3 am riya gets up to drink water and she sees that arjun is asleep on the sofa but he has a tensed expression on his face)

(riya drinks water and goes to arjun with a blanket. She puts the blanket and caresses his forehead. Her movement of hands was like ironing arjun's crushed forehead. His tensed face was no longer there, he had a sweet smile on his face. He held riya's hand in his sleep. )

Arjun- please…mere paas hi raho na!

Riya- ok….s(she was abt to say sir, but she knew that arjun was thinking she was roshni ) theek hai arjun! Mai yahi hoon.

(arjun smiled)

(riya sat near the sofa and arjun was holding her hand.)

(next morning)

(arjun opened his eyes and saw that nobody was there in the room. He got up from the sofa and searched for riya. he saw riya coming out of the bathroom, fresh like a newly blossomed rose. She was drying her wet hairs, she was wearing a yellow saree and her face was still wet. She went to the dressing table. Arjun was just staring her.)

(riya put on her accessories and then she wore the mangalsutra and put the sindoor. Arjun was smiling looking at her. He was lost again.)

(riya was tying the back lace of her blouse(her blouse was that open back one in which you have the laces I donno what it is called) when she got a scratch from her bangle. It started bleeding.)

Riya- aah!!

(arjun stood up at once and went to riya.)

Arjun- riya, are u alright?

Riya- sir bangle se cut ho gaya hai peeth me…

(arjun looked back, her bare skin had a small cut but it was bleeding and riya was tensed. Arjun opened a drawer and took out a cream. He applied the cream on the wound. Riya closed her eyes when she felt arjun's touch. She turned crimson red)

Arjun- abb theek ho jayega..don't worry!

Riya- ok sir..thanks..!

(arjun gets a call from samara)

Arjun- haan samara bolo.

Sam- sir, aapke cameras sahi fit ho gaye hain….we are monitoring everything.

Arjun- thanks….

Sam- sir ek game kheloon?

Arjun- baccho jaisi baate matt karo!

Sam- please sir….please…please…..please….

Arjun- ok! Ok! Kya?

Samara-aap apni ankhe band karna, phir mai jo bhi boloongi uske baad apke dimaag me sabse pehle jiska chehra dikhe uska name batanaana…

Arjun- ok.

Sam- good

Arjun- koi nahi!

Sam- sweet

Arjun- koi nahi!

Sam- rude

Arjun- god

Sam- cruel

Arjun- god

Sam- beautiful

Arjun- riya (remembering her appearance this morning and he is shocked himself.)

Sam- ok!!! Love?

(arjun again sees riya, her smile, her laughter. And arjun is shocked and depressed. He doesn't answer and cuts the call)

PRECAP:- arjun(to himself)- ye nahi ho sakta…..mujhe…mujhe riya se door jaana hoga! Iss case ke baad mai riya se door chala jaoonga! Mai ek aur zindagi barbaad nahi karr sakta….mai ek aur baar kisi se pyaar nahi karr sakta.! Nahi!

(arjun turns back and sees riya standing there)

this is it frnds...do tell me how it was...and plzz tell me what all u wanna see!

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one! Oh! So now he's going to distance himself from her? Someone please hit their heads together and knock sense into them..
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏Awesome yaar! enjoying your work so much...precap is very interesting... please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear..
Arjun and Riya's scenes are getting hotter with each update😳
please continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
are maza aa gya!!!
ariya moments were simply awesome 😊
samara ka game mast tha..nikal gya dil ka baat 😉
arjun door ni ja sakta 😕
waiting for precap..thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice move samara... she made arjun play the game and go into thinking mode abt his feelings... interesting! now he is going to be denial of feelings... hope that one day he admits it and get together with riya... can't wait for that to happen... please update soon! loved the updates a lot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...lovely update. But precap make me sad..Arjunshould'nt do that...thats not fair to both...
Well lets see...
Btw loving ur story...
Thnx fr Pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice rimss dear...library wala romantic scene..luved it..beautifully written..riya in wet hair&arjun staring at her..OMG!dat was ma dream scene..precap sounds interesting..riya overhears arjun..gud..plz update soon..waitinggg...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thar was indeed an ariyalicious update. M imaginin d scenr where he was apllying medicine on her back...ufff ..sensual
Nd arjun dont distance urslf frm riya...2nd chnce kismatwalo ko milta h
Update asap
Awsum part
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved ariya moments pls update soon

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