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Posted: 12 years ago
Shmara are getting cuter, update by update..
Precap is interesting..
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very lovely update rimss..shree&samara very romantic..samara bhaiya..shree scared&der laugh wid shy..realy very nice..precap..our cute ariya mr&mrs..very excited..plz update soon...im realy a silent reader of ur FF..But cant keep herself away frm appreciating ur work dear..realy such a fantanstic work...plz update soon...wow!mr&mrs...ariya...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ariyaroxx

Very lovely update rimss..shree&samara very romantic..samara bhaiya..shree scared&der laugh wid shy..realy very nice..precap..our cute ariya mr&mrs..very excited..plz update soon...im realy a silent reader of ur FF..But cant keep herself away frm appreciating ur work dear..realy such a fantanstic work...plz update soon...wow!mr&mrs...ariya...

OMG😃😃 thankyou soo much for lyking my work!!!! u were a silent reader of my FF?? u really like my work so much!!!!???? oh god!!!😳 how sweet of u dear...!!!!!! i hv no words to express my feelings!!!! THANKYOU SOOO MUCH😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ur welcum dear...i realy luv ur update...plz update soon dear...realy u roxx...
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Posted: 12 years ago

here is the next part...thanks for ur comments...i love to read them, please never forget to comment...i need ur comments to get motivated to write the next part.!

Part-9

Riya- mai ready hoon….but….arjun sir..

Arjun- mai bhi ready hoon. Kab jaana hai.

Natasha- aap log kal humaare ghar aa jayiega…mrs Mehta ne mr and mrs singh ko kabhi nahi dekha hai,vo toh unke real names bhi nahi jaanti, toh unhe kuch pata nahi chalega agar aap log thoda traditional banke aaoge!

Arjun- we promise unhe kuch pata nahi chalega! Aap baaki ki details samara ko de dijiye, hum log kal se kaam shuru karr denge.!

(Natasha gives the details and goes)

Rathore(addressing the team)- toh team, ye case thoda secret hai, media ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki hum iss case ko handle karr rahe hain, poori duniya ye sochti hai ki Mr.mehta ki maut natural death thi…toh isiliye hume media se ye investigation chupaani hai!

Riya- sir Mr Mehta ki death 2 hafte pehle hui hai, unke friends Mr.Atul ka kehna tha ki mr Mehta normally baat karr rahe the, but achanak unhe paseena aane laga aur vo behosh ho gaye. Mr atul ke saath vaha mr kabir bhi the, un dono ne ambulance ko bulaya. Ambulance ke vaha pahuchte-pahuchte mr Mehta marr chuke the. Doctors ne reason extream low blood pressure bataaya.

Arjun- theek hai. hum log pehle unke ghar chalenge. Mai aur riya vaha cameras fit karr denge aur shree and samara monitoring karenge!

Samara- mai iske saath monitoring room me akele??😲

Rathore- tumhe koi problem hai kya sam?

Sam- nahi bhaiya….kuch nahi…

(shree gives a 'shut-up'😡 look to samara)

Arjun- mai tumhe ghar chod deta hoon riya,kal subah 6 baje sab yaha milenge, hume acche se disguise hoke jaana hoga….is that clear?

All- yes!

(ariya on the way back home)

Riya- sir, agar aapko mere husband banne ka mann nahi hai toh aap…

Arjun- riya…..tum meri dost ho na! toh dobaara ye matt sochna ki mujhe tumse koi problem hai.

Riya- sir…aap kitna badal gaye hain.

Arjun- haan riya…pata nahi kaise, but mujhe tumhaari baato se zindagi ko naye tarah se dekhne ki iccha hui hai….ek baar phir se mai apni zindagi jeena chahta hoon..!

Riya- that's great sir. Mera ghar aa gaya.

(riya gets down and arjun too)

Riya- sir aap andar nahi aayenge?

Arjun- riya….its 2 am now…itni raat me mai…

Riya- sir…hum log friends hai na! toh aap dobaara ye matt sochna ki aap itni raat ko mere ghar aaoge toh mujhe problem hogi.

Arjun- riya tumhe nahi, lekin tumhaare neighbors ko problem jaroor hogi!

Riya- but sir..

Arjun- bye riya….good night.

(he gets into the car and goes)

Riya(thinking)- beta riya, arjun sir ko apne ghar yuhi bulaana itna bhi aasaan nahi hai!

(she goes back home)

(next morning the ETF members meet at the office.)

Riya- mujhe toh kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki mai kaise married woman dikhoon…!

(arjun enters the room wearing a black suit, riya is lost in him)

Samara- oh gawdd!!! Arjun sir..aapne maar daala aaj toh!!!😳☺️

Rathore- samara……arjun ko pareshaan matt karo.!

Arjun- rehne do rathore, samara ki toh aadat hai, haan agar tumhe jalan ho rahi ho toh alag baat hai..!

Rathore- mujhe jalan kyu hogi? Vo meri behen hai, uske liye sabse jyaada gud looking insaan mai hi hoon iss duniya me..hai na samara…?

Samara- no comments.!

Rathore- samara?????

Samara- bhaiya….aap jaante hain ki hume arjun sir kitne pasand hai!

Rathore- iska matlab tum apne bhai ko bhool jaogi?

Samara- no comments bhai..aap bakwaas matt karo…abhi case pe dhyaan do…ladai hum log ghar chalke karr lenge.

Riya- koi mujhe batao mai kya karoo?

Samara- mai hoon na..chaliye mai aapko tayyar karti hoon.

(samara takes riya to a room and after few minutes comes Mrs Riya singh, dressed in a beautiful white saree with red embroidery and red border. She is wearing matching accessories and has kept her hairs open. She is wearing a mangalsutra and her 'maang' is filled with deep red 'sindoor')

(arjun is staring at her, he is lost in her beauty. He forgets the world and goes to riya)

Arjun- bohot acchi lag rahi ho riya!😊

(all others are giving each other OMG😲 looks)

Riya(blushing)- thankyou sir😳.

(now arjun and riya goes to the big house of Mehtas. They enter the main door and is greeted by Natasha and another maid meena)

Natasha- welcome….chaliye, pehle Mehta madam se mil leejiye.

(they go up the stairs to meet mr mehta's mother)

Mrs Mehta- Namastey!...aapka safar kaisa tha?

Riya- theek tha aunty jee…! Namastey!

(riya and arjun touches her feet)

Mrs Mehta- sada khush raho!! Bhagwaan tumhaari Jodi salamat rakhe!

Arjun- hume dukh hai jo kuch bhi aapke bete ke saath hua!

Mrs Mehta- mera toh jeene ka sahara tha vo!! (strts crying)

Meena- accha mam, abb hum mehmaano ko unka kamra dikha de?

Mrs Mehta- haan.

(meena shows arjun and ria their room)

(arjun closes the door)

Arjun- riya, library yaha bajoo me hi hai, hume library me jaake check karna hoga!

Riya- sir abhi? Abhi nahi…varna yaha ke naukaro ko shak ho jayega….aur agar kisi ne mrs Mehta ko bata diya toh problem ho jayegi!

Arjun- theek hai, toh hum log thodi der tak yahi kamre me rehte hain.

Riya- mai saamaan unpack karr leti hoon.!

(riya is unpacking the things.)

Arjun- mai zara ek minute aaya.

(arjun can't control his eagerness so he goes to the library. There he notices the chair on which mr Mehta used to sit. There were no marks of violence. Even the doctors had said that there were no marks on violence on the body. He couldn't find anything in the library. He comes out and sees meena over there).

Meena- sir..aapko kuch chahiye tha?

Arjun- n-n-nahi!...mai bass yuhi….

Meena- koi kaam ho toh mujhe bula leejiyega!

(arjun goes back to his room door but he overhears the servants talking)

Meena(to manoj)- mujhe toh lagta hai kuch gadbad hai….ye dono toh pati-patni lagte hi nahi hai! kuch kaala hai daal me!

Manoj- chalo chalke chupke se dekhte hain ki room me kya baate ho rahi hai…

(arjun quickly goes to the room. Riya was standing infront of the cupboard)

(arjun goes and hugs her from the back.riya is shocked but she doesn't utter a word, arjun holds her on her bare stomach which gives her chills☺️)

(arjun notices that meena and manoj are watching them. He moves his lips near riya's ears which makes riya blush like anything.☺️ )

Arjun- (whispering)- riya yaha ke naukar hum par shak karr rahe hain, vo hume dekh rahe hain…

Arjun- (so that the servants can hear)- Oh dear…tum mujhse itna naaraz kyu ho? Common abb toh gussa chod do!

(he hugs her even more tightly and them he turns her around and pulls her close to him. They can hear their heartbeats, they are hesitating but they have to do it.)

Arjun- mujhe maaf karr do! Please dear….

Manoj- yaar bhaago yaha se. ye log sahi me pati-patni hi hain…tum bhi na meena!

Meena- uff! Rehne do!

(they go)

(arjun goes away from riya at once)

(riya is still blushing, she just can't control her feelings)

Arjun- I am sorry riya.

Riya- its ok sir…

(meanwhile in the monitoring room)

Shree- yaar…ye arjun sir ne abhi tak cameras set nahi kiye hain..

Samara- riya is so lucky…use toh arjun sir ke saath kitna time spend karne mil raha hoga!

Shree- tum bhi na!

Samara- shree….jab tak cameras nai set hote, tab tak ek game khele?

Shree- bacchi ho kya?

Samara- please!!!!

Shree- ok!

Samara- apni ankhe band karna and jo cheez sabse pele dikhe use bataana.!

(shree closes his eyes)

Shree- mujhe ek gadget dikha jisse iss duniya…

Samara- accha theek hai-theek hai..mai samajh gayi!...abb ankh band karo and jo insaan sabse pehle dikhe, mere kuch bolne parr ,uska naam batao

Shree(closes his eyes)-ok bolo.

Samara- cute

Shree- riya

Samara- arrogant

Shree- tum

Samara- boring

Shree- tum

Samara- rude

Shree- tum

Samara-haww…! Gande! Next is…uhmm lovely

Shree- chotu

Samara- motherly

Shree-mmmotherly…….!!!(getting emotional)

(he doesn't open his eyes but a tear roll down his cheek )😭

Shree- maine kabhi maa ko nahi dekha, kabhi nahi! Main nahi jaanta maa ka pyaar kya hota hai….

(samara feels sorry for him, shree's eyes are still closed and tears are falling down. Samara goes and wipes out the tears and kisses shree on his cheek.)

Samara- you are so cute!shree..!

(she goes out of the room and shree opens his eyes In shock😳😲)

PRECAP:- (samara playing the same game with arjun on phone)

Samara- sir jab me koi word boloon toh ankhe band karna and batana kaun dikha..honestly.

Arjun- ok

Samara- (after few questions)- most beautiful person

(arjun closes his eyes and he sees riya. He is shocked)

Arjun- riya….(still in shock as to why he saw riya not roshni)

Samara- love

(arjun closes his eyes and again sees ariya hug. He gets shocked and cuts the call without answering)

how was it???? tell me!!!! what else do you all want to see?? give me some suggestions plzz!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ...



kya yaar wo naukar jara aur thodi der waha khade rahte to unka kya jata ... ariya thoda aur romace karate...fake hi sahi lekin romance to karate...hayeee mein to puri tarhase sharma gayi

ky yaar itna heart touching update hai... shree ka itna sad past hai...i hope ki uska future samara ke saath only happy happy hoga...

ye byt the mein bhi ye game try karungi...tumhe ye idea kaha se mila kya tumne ye game khela hai kya...😉
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved the way he hugged her
shree nd samara were cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was such an awsum update...naukaro ne to kamaal kr diya..isi bahane hame kuch aheem ahem moments mile...shamara are the cutest..just love them more after each update...
Continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm loved it
was a very funny and romantic update😊
Poor Riya😳
N arjun just wow
N your precap sounds very very interesting😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thx for asap update.
vry nyc update.
shmara is cute
Rathod & Sam fight is reaaly cute..
Ariya is d best..

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