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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
awesome post 😊
loved riya and the other characters..
please update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks to all of u guys fr ur support and liking my post.. Here's the new update for u.. And there will be a track u will have nt view before.. So wait and enjoy..


CHAPTER : 4 continued...

Arjun was shocked to see riya's condition.. Somewhere in him snapped seeing her almost fainted in his arms.. Suddely a flashback of roshini comes infront of his eyes.. He is feeling same pain again as he felt when roshni died.. Tears gathered in his eyes..

Arjun : riya.. Riya.. Speak something damn it plzzz.. Riya..
After hearing arjun's voice she say..
Riya : bomb.. Bomb here..
And after saying this she slowly closed her eyes and fainted..
Evryone get shocked..
Rathore : jaldi chalo yaha se.. Vo log jaa chuke hai.. Come on.. Quick..
Arjun hold riya in his arms and evacuated the place.. Rathod was driving, while chotu on passengers seat. Arjun, shree and riya on back seat of SUV..
Suddely arjun felt something wet.. He smell.. It was blood.. Riya's wound was bleeding badly.. As her shirt was black so they were unable to watch that earlier.. Arjun quickly tied his hanky on riya's arm.. Suddenly rathod applied breaks too forcefully that riya's head fall down but arjun hold her..
Shree : sorry sir. Me pakadta hun riya ko..
Arjun nodded..
Arjun : rathod kaise drive kar rahe ho.. Theek se chalao..
Rathod : hume riya ko jaldi hospital le jana padega..
Shree : but sir yaha se sabse nearest hospital 12 km. door hai..
Suddenly shree founded a sign of injection on riya's arm..
Shree : sir yeh dekhiye Ri ke hath pe injection ka nishan..
He then checked and confirmed..
Shree : sir she is drugged..
Rathod : hume ise jaldi se aarti ke ghr le jana chahiye, vo bhi drug specialist hai.. Shree jaldi call karo unhe aur har baat btao. Pucho ki kya vo case handel kar payengi..
Shree immidiately called.. She said she can bt be quick.. Meanwhile Sneha called rathod tell her all wat happened and told to reach at aarti's house.. Arjun was lost in his deep thoughts bt this tym not of roshni... But riya.. Yes.. Riya was in his mind.. He was guilty of leaving her alone.. Not able to protect her..
Suddely again rathod phone rings.. It was riya calling.. Rathod shocked.
Rathod : riya calling..??
Arjun comes out from his thoughts..
Arjun : rathod phone speaker pe dalo..
Rathore do that..
Other side was riyaan calling rathod as he was told by riya to do so..
Riyaan : hello rathod sir.. Its me riyaan, riyaan khan.
Rathod : riyaan..??.. U..? Tumhare pass riya ka phone kaise..??
Riyaan : sir vo mai us factory me gaya tha.. Riya di ne mjhe bachaya.. Bt unhe bhot chot lagi hai.. Plzz unhe bachaiye.. Kaisi hai vo..?
Rathod : riya humare sath hi hai.. Tum kaha ho..??
Riyaan : mai aari aunty ke ghr hun.
Rathod : okk wahi rehna him aa rahe hai..
Rathod again concentrated on driving.. But again he braked too forcefully and riya was about to fall.. Arjun catch her and hold her in his arms and rested her head on his chest.. Arjun in full angry yelled at rathod..
Arjun : yeh kaise gadi chala rahe ho..? Lagta hai tum driving bhul gaye ho rathod tumhe driving school ki zarurat hai ..
Rathod understands arjun's angey and was happy inside tht arjun was changing fr riya now.. As he was informed by sneha about all happenings.. So he was too a cupid..
He now drive carefully and reached aarti's house.. Arjun hod riya in his arms and aarti and sneha opened the door.. Sneha was crying seeing riya in this worst condition so rathod supported her..
Aarti instructed arjun to carry riya in room.. Arjun put her on bed.. Aarti start her treatment..
Arjun come out heart broken seeing riya in a corpse state..
Suddenly riyaan come running to rathod and tell him that he has made the video of wat all happened..
Rathod inform shree to show it in laptop.. They al see how bravely riya fighted wth the goons.. But their eyes get moist ssing riya being tourtered and drugged..
Arjun clenched his jaw and fists whe he saw riya being slapped and when the man twists her wounded hand she winced in pan... They all heard about the bomb blast at the airport.. Rathod informed to be alert.. And signal all.. They decided to stay there only wth riya.. After seeing video eveyone was proud of her and her bravery.. She was too smart to record everything..
Arjun comes and stand near balcony.. And lost in deep thoughts memeories he spend wth riya..

After one hour..

Aarti come out..
Aarti : it was very complicated.. Bt thank god use hosh aa gaya.. She is too brave..
All rushed in her room.. She was still in little fainted condition..
Arjun rushed to her room to see her.. All were surprised wth his action..
Rathod : riya ab kaisi ho tum..?
Sneha : haan kaisi hai tu ri.. Aur kya zarurat thi itna risk lene ki.. Pagal tjhe kuch ho jata to..??
Riya : sunny me bilkul theek hun.. Tu pareshan mat ho.. Rathod sir vo.. Vo terrorist airport par..
Rathod : hume ptat chal gaya riya.. Humne video dkh li.. U r very brave officer.. We r proud of u riya..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
we all proud riya...

awesome-st update i like when u add arjun's condition after seeing riya ...


i love ariya so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Thanks di for ur lovely comments..

CHAPTER : 4 continues...

Riya : thank u sir.. Sir yeh ek plane ki ticket ki recipt hai jo mjhe unke pass se mili thi ladte tym..

Rathod : good job riya.. Tumne hamara kam aasan kar diya pehle video se aur ab is recipt se..

Riya : sir actually jab unhone mjhe drug kiya to mjhe doubt tha ki mai sab kuch btane ke liye zinda reh bhi paungi ya nhi bas isliye i did this..
Hearing this every musscle of arjun's body tightened.. Even thought of loosing her was painfull for him now.. He was unable to understand this change in him now..

Sneha : shut up.. Ek thappad padega agar dubara aise bola to..

Shree : haan.. How dare u.. Humari frnd ke bare mai aise bolne ki..

Riya(smilingly): okk guys.. I m sorry.. Mai ab theek hun tum itne senti kyu ho rahe ho..

Aarti : riya needs rest toh plzz aap sab bahr jaaiye..

Sneha : mai Ri ke pass hi rukungi..

After wathching riya fine arjun was also in relief now.. So hw went out; but before going he turn and looked at riya wth moist eyes.. As if his eyes were explaining his evey emotion inside his heart.. Those emotions which he is not able to say in words.. Somewhere riya understand and blink her eyes to assure him tht she is fine.. Sneha was witnessing all this.. So she choose to keep a mum..

Arjun went out and sit on dining table chair.. While chotu and shree on sofa and rathod on couch..

Rathod : shree sare airport ke cameras ko apne laptop se connect karo.

Shree : yes sir..

Rathod : hume kal subha sabse pehle airport jana hoga.. Bt full planning ke sath.. Wo log 9:00 bje wali flight ke tym attack kar sakte hai..

Arjun : hume undercover jana hoga rathod.. Tabhi pakad payenge unhe..

Rathod : haan raute tum sahi keh rahe ho.. Chalo lets take little rest now..

Everyone takes a nap.. Arjun also sleep unknowingly..
After some time.. Suddely arjun feels someone around him.. So he suddenly points gun..

Riya : relax sir.. Its me riya.. Paani peeine ayi hun..
She tries to sit on chair beside arjun but she was still having dizziness.. Suddenly arjun holds her and made her to sit..

Arjun : ab tum kaisi ho riya..?

Riya : mai bilkul theek hun sir..

Arjun : sorry.. Mjhe tumhe aise akele nhi chodna chahiye tha.. Meri vajah se..

Riya (cuts his line..) : aapki vajah se kuch nhi hua sir.. Plzz dnt be sorry.. Aap to mjhe kuch hone nhi dena chahte the isiliye mjhe vaha rukne ko kaha tha sir i knw..

Arjun : okk.. Bt apna khayal rakho..

Riya : sir kal ke baare me kya plannings hai..??

Arjun : kal ke bare me kal sochenge riya.. Abhi to tumhe rest karna chahiye.. See tum theek se chal bhi nhi paa rhi ho.. Tumhe aise nhi aana chahiye tha..

Riya : sir vo sab thak chuke the isliye maine kisi ko neend me disturb karna sahi nhi samjha.. Bt galti se aap ki neend disturb kar di.. Sorry..

Arjun : dnt be.. I m fine.. Chalo mai tumhe tumhare room tak chod deta hun..

Riya : its fine sir.. Mai chali jaungi..

Arjun : haan vo to maine dkh hi liya.. Tum thk se chal nhi paa rhi ho, chai pe baith nhi paa rhi ho lekin superwoman banna mat chodna.. Hamesha zid karti ho..

Riya is ammused.. As arjun never show this kind of care + anger fr her ever.. So she dont dare to speak anything else..

Riya : okk sir.

Arjun helped her to go in room and then come back on chair..

At 6:00 a.m.

Rathod : everyone ready team..??

Everyone : yes sir..

Riya comes out wth sneha..
Shree and chotu hugged her..

Rathod : riya.. How r u now beta..??

Riya : i m fine sir..
Riya never see somuch emotions fr her in rathod's eyes.. He called her beta.. She was so happy.. She knw he always care fr team bt this was special..

Rathod : riya tum sirf sneha ki best frnd-cum- sister ya sirf ETF ki officer nhi ho.. Mere liye u r like my small little sister.. Tumhe kal aise dkhke mai bhot dar gaya tha..

Riya : sir plzz aise pareshan mat hoiye.. Varna mjhe lagege maine aap sab ko bevajah pareshan kar diya..

Rathore come and put his hand on riya's head and give her a side hug..

Rathod : okk nhi kahunga.. Bt ab tum rest karo.. Hume airport jana hai.. Mai tumhe bhi le jata.. Bt ek to vo terrorist tumhe pehchante hai aur dusra tumhari tabiyat abhi puri tarah thk nhi hai so tum yahi ruko.. Hum case khatam hone ke baad aate hai.. Sneha tumhare pass hi hai.. Sneha take care of my sister..

Sneha : okk ji.. I will..
All smiles now.. And arjun too have a light smile watching all this..

They all goes to airport.. All went to waiting area and spread out..

Shree was sitting holding laptop and playing game bt he was keeping eye on eveyone.. Same is wth other 3 too..

Arjun : rathod vo dkho vaha ticket counter ke pass..

Shree : yes sir uski nose pe plaster hai.. Riya ka solid punch pada tha na..

Rathod : team surround them.. Wo sab sath hai..

Team goes there take out there gun and points at them..

Arjun : put ur hands up..
2 of them do.. Bt one runs.. Shree chases him and rathod , arjun and chottu hold 2 of them..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Awesome story. Welcome to Arjun forum

Edited:

I didn't know you had wrote more BTW I loved all the chapters. And please don't get me wrong. It would be nice if you just mentioned the real writers. As you know its not easy to write takes allt of time to put it down. And it feels really bad that they are other people who has done this work. It would be mice if just mention them. I don't mean anything bad hope you understand what I mean. I am sorey if I habe hurted you.

But I love yuour Story 😊 👍🏼
Edited by KreyaArshiLover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
wow...ariya romance this is best

jis tarah se arjun ne riya ko sambhala...i think he is falling in love ...but still he don't know

but today i love rathore...he is my sweet heart...love him lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: KreyaArshiLover

Awesome story. Welcome to Arjun forum

Edited:

I didn't know you had wrote more BTW I loved all the chapters. And please don't get me wrong. It would be nice if you just mentioned the real writers. As you know its not easy to write takes allt of time to put it down. And it feels really bad that they are other people who has done this work. It would be mice if just mention them. I don't mean anything bad hope you understand what I mean. I am sorey if I habe hurted you.

But I love yuour Story 😊 👍🏼


Hey dear.. firstly welcome to the Forum..
I did read Part 1 of your story a few days back, when u had posted it.. Really liked the way it started.. and the Character sketches and everything..
But there's something I've noticed, and would like to bring it to your notice as well..

Most of your parts seem very similar to some ongoing FF's and SS's on this forum.. I found them really familiar, and so I re-read them.. And yes, they indeed look like they've been copy-pasted with a few changes here and there..

I need to tell you that Plagiarism in any form is not allowed on India-Forums.. Here's a post by Naina, one of our DT's..


Borrowing ideas from other's stories doesn't mean you can actually take the entire plot from there and use it for your own work..

Since you're new here, maybe you aren't aware of these things. Maybe u didn't do it on purpose.. I understand and so also give u the benefit of doubt, dear..

But do keep in mind.. And also, in such cases, the Moderators generally take required action.. I guess, I'll leave that to the Mods, DT and the original writers..

Also, I am a writer on this forum too, and I understand that it can be really difficult to pen down a story.. But I guess, u do need to realise that it takes a lot of efforts to come up with an idea, then draft it down and finally present it to the audience.. Hence, it is not fair to simply combine all works and make up your own!

I do get the idea, maybe you really didn't know about all this stuff and hence, this incident took place..

But do interact with the original writers and see if they permit you to use their work. If they do, you remember to always add in your own contributions to the story.. Only, then it'll be your own..

I don't intend to sound rude or poke my nose around in other people's business; but I wouldn't want something of this sort to happen to me.. Hence I thought of notifying you..

Hope you take it in the right spirit.. And well, we'll all be looking forward to more stuff from you..

Regards,
Avantika.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Thanks avantika di.. Seroiusly i was unknown about the facts u told me.. Well thanks about all.. I will take care of it now..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
STORY CONTINUED...
Arjun beat the crap out of him...

Now they all reach aart's house and take sneha and riya.. Suddenly rathod's phone buzzed.. After some time he informed..
Rathod : guys we need to go to ETF office.. Commisoner is waiting for us..
They all went to office had meeting..
Rathod : raute tum riya aur shree ko ghr chod do. Mai sneha aur chotu ko drop kar deta hun..
Suddely riya's phone rang and all her face colour become pale.. Arjun notices all and become worried in sudden change of her.. Riya picked up..
Riya : hello papa..
Papa : riya kaha hai tu beta.. Itni der se kyu uthaya phone..?
Riya : kuch nhi papa vo bas abhi nikle hai office se.. Bas ghar jane wali hun..
Papa : acha .. Phr hume airport se pick karle..
Riya : wat..?? Aaappp llooogg yyaahhhaa aaayyee hhaaii.. Mumbai mai..??
(Riya is shocked.. )
papa : haan beta.. Tujhse milne.. Jaldi aaja..tujhe surprise dene.. Ek aur surprise bhi hai.. Hum teeno Maccau ja rahe hai holiday ke liye..
Riya : ji papa .. Aati hun..
After the call finishes...
Riya : shit man.. Papa muma ko bhi aabhi ana tha.. Inke surprises kisi din meri jaan lekke rahenge.. Ufff...
Rathod : kya hua riya any problm..??
Sneha : haan ri.. Kya hua..??
Riya : arey yar papa muma yaha hai mumbi mai. Airport par mera wait kar rahe hai..
Sneha : toh yeh to achi baat hai..
Riya : ohh really.. Ab unko jab yeh mere hath ki chot dikhegi to hazar question puchenge. And phir unki extra care aur vo gharelu medicines..yucckkk...ewww... And unhone Maccau ke liye trip plan ki hai mere, apne and mom ke liye..
Arjun smiles a little on her childish anctics...
Sneha : offo pagal ladki..
Riya : rathod sir plzz aap logo me se koi bhi mere parents ko yeh drug aur knife wali baat mat btaiyega.. Vo faltu mai pareshan ho jayenge.. Plz sir..
Rathod : okk.. Humme se koi nhi btayega.. Ab jao aur unhe pick up karo..
Riya : okk sir..
They all went to their destinations..
Arjun, riya and shree went to pick up riya's parents..
Riya : papa mumma...
She hugged them both..
Arjun silently watches the family time of riya.. She looks so happy to meet her parents..
She introduces her parents to arjun as they alredy know shree but not arjun..
Riya : sir this is my dad Mr. M.k. Shrama, and my muma Mrs. Sanjana Sharma
arjun : namaste..
Papa + mumma : namaste beta..
Shree : namte aunty uncle..
Both : arey shree.. Namste.. Kaise ho..?
Shree : mai to mast hun uncle aap dono..??
Both : hum bhi..
Riya's parents suddenly notices her bandage..
Papa : riya yeh chot.. Kaise lagi..?? Kab lagi..??
Muma : haan humne to abhi dkha.. Zarur teri hi galti hogi.. Jab dkho girti padti rehti hai.. Dhyan to pta nhi kha hota hai.. Najane kya hoga tera..??
Riya : arey guys i m fine... Ab ghar chale yaa airport par hi raat bitani hai..?? Sir aur shree ko bhi der ho rhi hai.. Mjhe to ghar jaa ke bhi daat sakte ho..
They all went to home..
At riya's house.. She was enjoying wth her parents and also thir cute carefull scoldings..
Here arjun was haapy too after seeing riya happy.. A smile was creeping his thoughts after reminding the past evets...
Next day..
At 8:00 a.m.
Riya : papa aap mjhe office drop kar doge..??
Papa : haan beta sure..
Riya : okk mai ready hoke aati hun.
After breakfast they left for office..
At office..
Riya : Thanks papa.. Shaam ko milte hai..
Papa : okk bye beta.. Jaldi aana aaj teri maa ne sare teri pasand ka khana banaya hai...
Riya : haan papa.. Bye..
She went to office and her father drove off...
At evening 7:00 riya's phone beep up.. She got a mms..
She played it and wat she saw nezxt shaken her whole world.. Seeing riya so shocked whole team run to her..
Shree : ri .. Riya.. Kya hua yar..??
Bt she did not responded...
Arjun quickly grab her phone and played the mms...
It was some old place.. Riya's parents were tied in robes and beaten badly... They were wincing in pain.. They saw a man then..
Man : tune hamare bhaiyo ko pakadwaya naa.. Dkh ab tere maa baap ko kaise tadpa ke marenge hum... Baccha sakti hai to aaja..is pate par..
Suddenly riya got up to go.. Arjun hold her hand..
Arjun : riya kaha ja rahi ho..?
Riya : sir mjhe jane dijiye mjhe mere papa aur maa ko bachana hai.. Plzz..
Arjun : hum sab chal rahe hai tumhare sath..
They reach the place.. Bt it was calm there.. That calmness was the one after the storm.. And when the reach inside it was horrible.. Riya's parents were lyong down on floor.. Fully wet in blood.. They were very badly tortured and they shot dead.. Everyone was stunned... Shocked... Riya rush to her father ..
Riya : paap... Paapa... Plzz uthiye naa.. Hume ghar jana hai papa..
Then she goes to her mother...
Riya : maa... Mummaaa... Plzz uthiye na.. Aaj toh aap mera favourite kaha banane wali thi.. Dkhiye mai aa gai.. Plzz uthiye... Sir.. Rathod sir, arjun sir, shree, chotu, sneha.. Dkho na.. Yeh uth nhi rahe...
Papa.. Mjhe dar lag raha hai plzz uthiye.. Varna mai naraz hojaungi aap se.. Phir aap mjhe is baar mana nhi paoge.. Plzz uthiye naa aap dono... Pllzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Hey frnds.. I think i have hurt the feelings of some of the forum members unknowingly.. Soorry guys from bottom of my heart.. I m really sad fr offending u.. Bt plzz dont stop writting bcoz i m gr8 fan of ur writing.. I m inspired by u ppl only.. So plzz forgive me..and dnt take me in wrong sense guys.. Hope u will understand my guilt and forive me.. Plzz rply frnds plzz...

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