Ariya SS: Der Lagi Lekin.. Chap 4- LAST (05/11)

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wonderful update, loved how you brought out their emotions and pain at losing their loved ones. Now there is shared pain that will bring them closer, but I am sure they still have long way to go.

Thanks for the PM.

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Hooria

@hooriaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Amazing Update Loved It
Arjun Rawte Had Admired Riya Mukherjee For The First Time In 12 Months! Beautifully Written
The Story Finally Unfolding How Arya Have Witnessed Their Really Close One Being Killed Infront Of Them Yet The Effect On Both Of Them Is Different Arjun Vents It All Out By Lashing Out On Others Even Family Or Riya Where As Riya Keeps It All Within Her An Hides It All Behind Her Smile
Amazing They Are Falling For Each Other
Gun Shot??? Suspense
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thanksz x

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Mahi

@_mahi_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

that was a SUPERB update dear👏 you have magic in your hands yaar😳 very beautifully written.. hatz off to your imagination😛

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

After watching the last two episodes, I'm totally in lluve with them!! Reading this story with that mindset is bliss :D Rawte!!! Soft and hard together! Just love him!

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Biggest Disadvantage of being in ETF! Ur Romance is always disturbed :P

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -vrshn-
Biggest Disadvantage of being in ETF! Ur Romance is always disturbed :P

😆 I second that one!!

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Rukhsar ahmed

@honeey95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

cant wait for chapter 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

hey wow just read it...coz this excitement was killing me...😆
n i loved it...the emotional turmoil that these two have faced was well-written n did feel their pain..
riya's past had made her this way...her fear of shooting some one...
really felt bad for her..but im glad she moved on hid her tears behind her smile...that's a very big thing to do..😳arjun was surprised rather shocked seeing her like this...n i can completely understand why he had shown all that on n off mode concern for riya...he can't betray roshni... poor soul...
the line summed it all up
That was the moment; they realized that they both realized the cure to their heartaches!
👏👏👏
now u know why i missed u n ur writing so much...u don't have to make it mushy...i like it simple yet touching...👍🏼
update soon dear..😊

👏

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

excellent update! poor arjun and riya! arjun is confused abt his feelings and he also want to control himself from getting close to riya... riya on the other hand is confused abt the way arjun reacts... he keeps changing his emotions... love the way arjun was there was her when she was telling her past abt her father's death! glad that arjun could now understand the reason behind her fear of gun... nice update... really loved it a lot! and lastly there was a gun shot...? hope nothing happen to arjun or riya! please update soon! can't wait to read the next update... really excited!

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

awesome update dear
Arjun is running away from riya n try to avoid her and poor riya she didn't understand... Hope arjun will be fine
Thanx 4 d pm dear
Update soon

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