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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
ok now im giving it a try...dont throw chappals at me if any one of u doesn't like it...😆
he closed the door leaving behind a bunch of his friends laughing n wishing him all the best while others were just remarking "aj bhabi ko qabu mein kr le zindagi bhar aish krega, warna roye gaa umar bhar" 🤣🤣
he breathed deeply n was having a casual look at his newly decorated room when suddenly he froze at the sight in front of him 😲...there she was sitting on the bed...her gaze lowered...her face glowing with the light of the candles placed on the table in front of the bed...she was looking like an angel...he couldn't take his eyes off her ...finally realizing that it's been long time he has been standing here staring at his beautiful wife, he straightened his sherwani n started moving towards her...❤️
it has been 3 hours since they have been home n after performing all the rituals, being teased be the friends now they were finally alone to spend this golden moment of their life together, with each other.☺️
riya was extremely tired now but the gaze she felt moments ago of the man standing against the door...that did the magic, her anxiety rose again, the feeling of being mrs.arjun suryakant rawte send shivers down her spine, she wanted to just shout out loud that how much she loved being here sitting on this bed, waiting for her arjun (yes he was HERS n only HERS now)❤️ ...her heart beat pulsating as he was approaching near the bed...she was holding onto her duppatta as tightly as she could...arjun , who was now about to sit on he bed, noticed it. he gently sat near her...confused as from where he should start the conversation...the day that he had waited for arrived n he was now sitting with HIS riya, his LOVE, his LIFE...☺️❤️
he cleared his throat n after thinking for a second broke the silence.
arjun: Mrs. arjun rawte!! welcome to my life 😃 (saying this he held riya's hand, kissed her palm where his initials ASR were written in between the mehndi ... riya was blushing, she raised her eyes looked at arjun n then lowered her gaze again, blushing even harder...☺️☺️
arjun still mesmerizied by her beauty had a smile on his face...he then placed her hand back, took out a locette n came closer to riya, making her breath faster, he tied it around her neck still keeping his face close to her so that he can feel her breath...☺️
then he moved back n asked riya to make herself comfortable before they resume the talk. riya felt relieved ...she stood up n went near the dressing table...sat on the stool ...arjun who was noticing her moment by moment was a bit surprised at this awkward behaviour but then smiled seeing riya getting glances of him from the mirror secretly...😆
riya was about to take off her bangles when suddenly arjun held her arm...he sat near a shocked riya...n asked...: may i jaan?
riya who seemed stunned nodded her head giving him the approval...while that JAAN still ecoing in her ears...😳
he started taking of the bangles, kissing her arms each time he took 3,4 bangles out of her hand...☺️ riya looking at him with loving eyes, but as soon as arjun looked at her she shifted her gaze in embarrasement...😆😉 making arjun laugh...🤣😆 then arjun removed her duppatta from her head, placed it on the sofa n turned back...he then held riya from the waist making her collide with his chest...☺️❤️ from his other hand, he took the pin out of her hair making them open ...n a few locks falling on her face...he slowly removed em from her face cuddling her cheeks n making her bush again...☺️ ...then he kissed on her forehead n removed the mang tika ...then he slowly kissed both her eyes...riya then looked at him...they shared an eye lock for a few moments...n then arjun's hand started moving from her waist to the dori of her choli...riya felt this sensuous touch n moved arjun away by slightly elbowing him...😆 ...she ran, turned back n said : itni asani se nai mr.rawte...(winking at him)😉
arjun(giving a smirk ): run as much as u can jaan...mein pakar lunga tmhe...😈❤️
saying this he ran after her... with her mag tika still in his hand...😆

next: if some one wanna continue it then plz do...😉
or else riya plans a surprise birthday party for arjun with shree n chotu's help but her surprise reminds arjun of roshni ...arjun scolds riya so bad but then realizes his mistake n an ariya confesssion (in arjun style) alone near the beach...☺️

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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Awesssummm mushhhiii.loved it
Gonna continje wid nxt scenario soonn...
So romantic
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
mushi.. i must say.. that was the best stanza i have EVER read in my life👏👏👏..
Welcome to my life <<< gawddd you blew my mind away with this😉..has to be the BEST dialogue EVER...⭐️👍🏼
to be honest.. i re-read it like hundred times😆.. gurl you are so apt at writing romance😉 .. do write more 😳.. puhlizzz... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
K now lemme try

*sikandar has been captured nd killed a year ago
*arjun nd riya have become kind of frnds now...andar se to us se b jyada
So here we go

Shree-ree are u sure ye sai plan h?
Chotu-ya ree. Muje aissa kyu lag rha h kuch galat hone wala h
Riya-are dont worry guyz its perfect plan for sir..its his bday...nd its out duty to make it special

Arjun enters d room..its dark...he switch on d light..and
.**SURPRISE***HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U...HAPPY BIRTHDAY ARJUN SIR...GOD BLESS U""
shrer riya nd chotu sang in unison
Arjun-thank you guyz..
Riya-sir its tym to cut d cake...chotu cake laao
Chotu brings up d trolley...uncovrrs the cake..
Arjun looks at d cake nd stood there paralysed..


*******FLASHBACK********
Arjun-Roshni ye kya h?
Roshni-cake h acp raute
Arjun-i knoe par ek tumne cake ke naam pe mera dialogue "SAMJE YA SAMJHAU" hi banwa dia
Roshni-ab kya karu. Mai chahti thi cake ki shapr kuch special ho...so aapke dialogue ko hi cake ki shape de di

*******FLASHBACK ENDS******
Riya-sir...sir..kya hua cake katiye
Arjun with anger filled red eyes-ye cake ka idea kiska tha?? 😡
Riya-mera sir..kyu kya hua..aapko...
Before she could finish...arjun spat away d cake on d ground
Riya,shree nd chotu stood there in shock
Arjun(in rage)-maine tumse kitni baar kaha h door rho mujse.. tumhe meri lyf mei interfer krne ki koi zarurat nahi h..smji tum
Clean up dis mess...nd come for briefing
Bd he stormed out of the riya
Riya was left behind in tears 😭


NEXT::CONTINUE WID REALISATION AND BEACH CONFESSION PART AS MUSHI SUGGESTED
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Awesssummm mushhhiii.loved it
Gonna continje wid nxt scenario soonn...
So romantic

aww thanks sweety ...😳 i didn't knew that i can write this...😆 sure will continue...but after finishing the scene that u started ...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: _mahi_

mushi.. i must say.. that was the best stanza i have EVER read in my life👏👏👏..

Welcome to my life <<< gawddd you blew my mind away with this😉..has to be the BEST dialogue EVER...⭐️👍🏼
to be honest.. i re-read it like hundred times😆.. gurl you are so apt at writing romance😉 .. do write more 😳.. puhlizzz... 😳

hey thnx mahi...😆 i myself didn't knew i could actually write something like this...i guess my hidden talent...🤣
woah im flattered n yup willl surely complete the left part for U n shubhi (sweetdoc)
but first i have to complete the part that sweetdoc left ...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Arjun entered the conference room fuming with anger. rathore saw his red face n asked...:rawte, kia hua?😕
arjun: case discuss karein rathore...hum already bohat late ho chuke hain...☢️
rathore raising his now gave arjun the details of the case.
meanwhile shree n chotu came out of the shock tehy just received, n turned around to look at a numbless riya, who was leaning against the wall staring at the open door, tears flowing out of her beautiful eyes...😭 shree looked at chotu n went ahead to put a hand on riya's shoulder but before that riya said: im fine shree, u guys go ahead im just coming in a moment. shree-chotu surprised at this calm answer coming from riya but they knew that this was not the right time to talk about this matter n they marched towards the conference room after giving a final glance at riya who was now wiping her tears n preparing to clean the room.
they walked inside the room to see an angry rathore n an angrier arjun staring at them...
rathore: where is riya?
shree: sir she is just coming in 2 minutes.
rathore: that's the height of non-seriousness, do u three need VIP invitations to reach on time??😡 now sit down.
there in the other room, riya was cleaning the room as fast as she could while tears still dripping from her hazel eyes..😭 in 2 minutes she was doen with the cleaning n then she washed her face, straightened her hair n went inside the conference room...where she was greeted by an angry rathore...
rathore: here comes ms.riya mukherjee...our VIP research specialist...ooh come on plz sit on this chair, we were waiting for ur arrival to start the case discussion...😡😡😡
riya who was standing there looking at the floor like a 2 year old who is being scolded by her principle...said: soo...soorrr...sorry sir wo mein...
rathore: ENOUGH!! just sit down, dont waste my time...
riya sat on the chair next to shree n infront of arjun...her head still bent down ...rathore started the briefing ...
n just then arjun glanced at riya ...a tear escaped her left eye but she just wiped it before anyone can notice it...arjun froze for a second...he just realized what he had done a few minutes ago...
he cursed himself n said: not again...why did i scold her that badly??
during the whole briefing riya was just looking at her diary, writing every detail that rathore told them n occasionally wiping a tear or two that fell on the pages of the diary...
arjun who was noticing all this just couldn't take it any more... he was fuming with anger n this time his anger was not for riya but for himself...he hurt her again ...but this one was a brutal one...all she did was arrange a surprise party for him , just to make him happy but what he did...insulted her...from their first meet till now this is what he has been doing time n time again...but riya being the great RIYA MUKHERJEE always smiled back at every anger/insult that came her way...
so why was she crying so much today...this question raised an unrest in him n he wanted an answer...
the breiefing ended n rathore asked them all to reach the crime spot in 2 groups...luckily he took shree n chotu with him n told arjun- riya to go to a witnesses's house n record her statement before reaching the crime scene...
arjun found this perfect but riya was uncomfortable with this but she had no other option...
both sat in the car...arjun looked at riya who was looking at her diary n sometimes outside the window...
he stopped the car near the sea-side n riya still in her own world didn't realize that the car just stopped...
suddenly arjun opened the door n held riya's hand n made her comeout of her thoughts n also out of the car...riya was shocked n she knew that arjun will again scold her so she was preparing herself for the bombardment gain coming her way...😭
arjun closed the door of the car n pushed riya against it holding her from shoulders...
arjun: what the hell do u think of urself??? why do u always have to do such things that make me angry???? no matter how much i try to be nice to u always make me loose my temper with ur stupid antics...😡😡
riya who was looking at arjun now just welled up n tears started running through her eyes...n within few minutes he began sobbing so bad that arjun had to loosen his grip n all his anger went flying away...😕 he looked at riya speechless n she just fell on her knees n cried even harder...arjun just bet down n put his arms around her n hugged her ...riya rested her head against his chest n kept on crying making arjun tighten his grip ...😳
finally she spoke up: what do i think of myself...u tell me what u think i am??? a door mat or a decoration piece...that u can just treat me the way u want...all this while u haven't missed evne one chance to degrade me my skills n most importantly my emotions...u said u try to be nice with me...to tell u the truth mr. rawte im the one who should be telling u that no matter how hard i try to make u happy no matter how much i care for u , u can never n i mean it never give me any respect or even a little smile to start it off...u have always brought tears in my eyes...what did i do wrong?? just brought a cake for u na??? so what?? u have the right to kill me for this...?? come on just do it once n for all...im tired of this...u have no right to hurt me ACP arjun suryakanth rawte...u have no right on ME...u dont mean anything to me...😭
the last line was a final blow to arjun...he was there dumbstruck...fuming with rage n anger n with an unknown emotion...he just can't believe riya told him that he has no right over her...
arjun: i have no right over u???? how dare u say that RIYA MUKHERJEE???😡😡 (he pushed her against the car's door n came so close to her that she can feel his breath...) mujeh koi haq nahin hai tm pe?? mujhe haq hai tum pe, tmse judi har ek cheez pe, jitna haz mujeh hai tm pe utna to tumhe khud ko bhi nahin hai...suna tm ne...❤️ pyar krat hun mein tpagal pane ki had tak...meri sansein chalti hian sirf aur sirf tmhari wajah se...aur tm keh rahi ho k mera tmm pe koi haq nahin hai...😡
saying this he placed his lips on hers ...riya who sat there munbly was brought to reality by that sensation on her lips...she placed her hands on his shoulders n kissed him back ...n then they took the kiss to a whole new level...☺️ while arjun hands moving on riya's back...😉☺️
next: some one hacks shree account ...leaving the whole ETF shocked...when they find out the culprit is a girl who was shree's school friend n loved him since then...😆 ETF try to hook them up...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Wow mushi that was amazing. U should write some os n ss on ariya. Pls dear write more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice..wil give a try..
Arjun: Shree tumhare laptop on karo aur jaldi se case ke sari data ki print out nikalo..hum yeh data ki zaroorat hogi..

Shree: yes sir..he turn on his laptop and while still the work in not yet completed he bangs the table and says oohh shit...

Ria: kya hua shree..

Shree: arjun sir mere system ko kisine hack kiya he sir..

Arjun: sare data hai ya errase hua hai..

Shree: sir kuch data missing hai sir..

Arjun: kissne kiya shree...kya yeh pata hai?

shree: sir IP address pata chal gayi hai sir...bahut jald hi patachal gayega ki kisne kiya hai...

Riya: shree yeh achanak tumhare laptop ko kyun hack kiya...kya kisi criminal ka haath hai...

Shree : bahut jald hi patachal gayega...sir computer ki location pata chal gayi sir..

Arjun: to kiska intezar chale...

Everybody reach there...its a beautiful building...They all take their gun in hand and enter the house..

Shree sees photo of his school friend neelam..
Shree: sir yeh ghar to neelam ka hai...hope she is fine..

Neelam enters there and everybody shocked...

Shree: neelu tune yeh sab kiya...

Neelam: Haan to kya mujhe arrest karoge..

Arjun: yes tumne galti ki hai...Ab saza to hogi, samjhe ya samjhayun

Neelma: Sir...maine bas sharat mein yeh sab kiya...

Shree: tumne kitne files erase ki hai..

Neelam: mera hero tum to usse asani se ricover kar sakte ho na..

Shree haan per phir bhi...

Neelam sorry shree...

Shree:ok kaise ho..kab aayi?

Neelam: bas agayi tumhare peeche peeche...you know na i love ...
All are shocked...

Shree..ahem ahem..

Arjun: tum log baate karo hum chalte hai...

Arjun and ria leave them...

Next Scenario: Riya in park with shree and chotu and some kids playing the blindfold game..They join them and start to play...Arjun also enters and sees them play..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Wow mushi that was amazing. U should write some os n ss on ariya. Pls dear write more.

😆😳 thanku so much dear...😃 actually im abit busy with my uni n besides i didn't knew till now that i can write such stuff...😆😆 so sure will give it a try some time next week...😛😳 but thanks for the encouragement...😳

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