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salta

@salta

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Arjun and Riya both are out in a club for an investigation…….. Few guys look at riya and pass comments on her, she ignores but Arjun get close to her, holding her tightly by waist and giving his angry look to the guys😉………… Riya objects this very much. Then Arjun leaves her and look around and suddenly a sexy girl with high heels was about to fall, when Arjun quickly grabs her and then eyelock😉……..

Arjun: Are you okay….??? Tumhe chot to nahin lagi na…..

Girl: Aapke hote huye mujhe chot kaise lag sakti hai…….. aur vaise lagi to hai, aur vo bhi aapki vajah se…

Arjun: Meri vajah se……!! vo kaise, maine to aapko girne se bachaya…..

Girl: Aapne mujhe girne se bachaya……. Par aapke killer looks se to koi bhi ladki ghayal ho jayegi😊….. you know what itna handsome hona, phi raise killer looks….. aap kya girls ko heart attack dena chahte hain…..

Arjun:* a bit confused but sees that riya is fuming with anger😡, so continues* Thanks for the compliment… but you too are too hot…. Mujhe aapko ye advice deni chahiye ki itna jyada perfect hona bhi achha nahin hota😊……. Anyway would you like to have a dance….(held out his hand)

She gives her hand in his hand and both starts dancing …….. Arjun has held her by waist and quite close….when riya's patience ends and she went up to them, looked with anger and snatched arjun's hand from the girl's and said.. "Sir aap yahan clue dhoondne aaye the, girlfriend nahin"😆…..Arjun protested, then Riya clutches his collar tightly and led him out of the club😆.

Arjun and Rathore closed in a single room😳…

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Faisa

@Faayey

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Thanks Mahi i loved the opening of Barbabos

and Megha awesome post😉

Rathode: This is all your fault..i cant believe you dragged me into all this mess!!

Arjun: My fault? this is all YOUR fault, hadn't you made Riya upset she wouldn't have locked us both here.

*Flashback*

Riya: You to are the worst people i have ever me..how dare you speak to my dad about my wedding..i just believe it..i thought you were my friends

Rathode: We are your friends but you have to think about your future too

Arjun: besides you're a woman..after all how long are going to work here, i mean sooner or later you will have to go

Riya: (becomes really angry slaps Arjun and shouts back) HOW DARE YOU ARJUN RAWTE!! how dare you stereotype me just because im a woman! if i choose not to get married then it has nothing to do you..if i ever hear anyone of you discussing my personal life with anyone i will kill you both..i mean it

Riya (leaves both men choose to sit down): How dare they..just wait and watch what i'll do to them.

Riya quietly tip toes back to the room and closed the heavy metal door and closes it with the combination codes. Both men realize they're trapped and shout at Riya " Riya if you dont open this door right now i will fire you" She stands behind the door thinking to herself if I open the door now they will fire me and i open it after having my part of the fun they'll still fire me HAHAHAHA lets see how long till they beg for my forgiveness

*Flashback ends*

Arjun bangs on the door and shouts for Shree and Chotu but no one hears them

Rathode: theres no point we might aswell say sorry and she might open the door then, am i right

Arjun: Hmm okay.." Look Riya im really sorry for i what i said..i shouldn't have spoken to you like that Im really sorry..now can please open this door..i really need to use the toilet"

Riya *LAUGHS* : Okay since you've said sorry i'll let you go this time..but only if you don't fire me

Rathode: we wont fire you.promise

She opens the door with a huge grin on her face😃

Next scene: ETF team in a safari and chotu is stuck between hundreds of Elephants

OR: Arjun, Shree and Riya lost in the jungle

Edited by Faayey - 13 years ago

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

faayey...that was awesome...🤣 megha ...brillilant i loved it...😆

shubi,haruhi ...liked ur parts alot...👍🏼

okay now im gonna continue with the jungle track...😉

arjun trying to burn the the wood pieces so they can have some light...suddenly he hears a scream...

arjun: what was that...that's riya's voice...😳

shree who was navigating the way using his iphone started shivering ...riii where r u??

they run towards her...

shree: what happened rii??

arjun: riya kia hua? u ok?😕

riya: this stupid jungle...i hate this mud...my new 4 inch heel...nooo it's all broken...😡

arjun...😲😡 if u dont walk silently now...im gonna break the other one also...😡

shree...😆 u really wanna save the other one??🤣

riya: yes i do...so that i can beat that akdu up...😈

arjun: tm ne kuch kaha riya??☢️

riya: no SIR...😳

after a while they reach a cottage...shree...yippee we reached somewhere finally...😉

shree remembered he dropped his iphone on the way...he goes to get it back n ask riya-arjun to go inside the cottage.(giving a wink at riya)...❤️

situation: arju -riya in cottage alone...☺️

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salta

@salta

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Wow mushi….you just killed it….awesome…..okay now I'm continuing it…

Arjun: *Entering the cottage, and noticing riya's expressions* Riya…….tum andar aane ke liye bhi koi muhurt nikalwaogi kya…….??

Riya: Sir…… you mean to say ki hum aaj yahan rukenge..?? I mean can't we look for a better, hygienic, clean place……..

Arjun: Oh… you are right miss riya… after all miss riya to yahan vacations ke liye aayi hain… hai na… or nahin nahin… ab agar jungle mein car kharab ho jaaye to uske liye princess riya ke liye luxurious cottages ka intzaam hona chahiye…..right….

Riya: *mumbling to herself, but Arjun hears it, she doesn't know*O God!!! I just gave a suggestion and ye akdu sadu raute kitna lamba lecture de raha hai….

Arjun: Tumne kuch kaha………

Riya: jahan aap ho vahan koi aur bol sakta hai kya(in a low voice)… NO SIR…. Main kya bolungi…

Arjun: Tumhare liye achha bhi yahi hai kit um chup hi raho…

Arjun looks around the cottage, while riya is examining the cleanest corner… Suddenly Riya notices something on her feet, which turns out to be a centipede…. And she screamed very loudly……

Arjun: Ab kya ho gaya??

Riya:*almost shivering, eyes popped out with fear…* Si…Si….Sir…cen..cent……cent…

Arjun*comes closer and then observes a centipede on her leg, as he came to her she hugs him tightly, clutching his collar* relax…. Riya relax wait a minute * he removed that centipede, and as his hands touched her bare skin, she felt a sensation, her eyes closed automatically and held Arjun more comfortably, more close to her*….Riya… ho gaya, ho gaya….*as he detached from the hug, looked at her innocent face with closed eyes and tears which were rolling down in fear, and smiled at her…*

Arjun and Riya helping rathore for his proposal to his girlfriend…

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elle..

@elle..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

centipide ne to kamal kr dia megha...

k now my turn

riya-sir..i m tellin u...old is gold...goin down on knees is the best way

arjun-nahi rathore...ye bahut old fashion ho gya h..u need to do sumthin new

riya-sir ye tareeka chahe kitna b purana ho...ladkian iske liye aaj b marti h

rathore-tum dono muje confuse kr rhe ho..maine tumhe apni madad ke liye bulaya tha...tum to mujhe confuse kr rhe ho

riya-ok sir...sorry...now end of discussion..knees wala idea done h

arjun-nahi rathore...aise bewkuf idea nahi try kroge tum

riya-rathore sir...inka bas chale to ye to ak 47 leke propose kre rose ki jagah..ab aap hi dekh lijiye aapko kiski baat maan ni h :P:P

next:::: riya leaving etf nd goin abroad...arjun's last chance to say love u

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Lizzie Mathew

@-Lizzie-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Sorry was busy with exams... Lemme try now :DDD (for sweetdoc)

Shree: Ri are you sure that what you are doing is right????

Riya: Yes shree. My parent want me to get married to Ansh and i cant say no to them... What reason do i have to reject the proposal???

Shree: Will you be able to forget him???

Riya: It wont be easy and im not sure whether it is possible or not!! But ts my problem... He only loves Roshni.. I have no place in his heart... When i told him i was going he didnt say anything like I'll miss you or atleast the team will miss u... I dont wish to be a burden on him...

Chotu(crying): I'll miss u Ri!!!! If i have to choose between my love and you it will be always you. Dont forget that

Riya(hugging shree and chotu): i'll miss u too guys... u guys will always be my best buddies!!!

Arjun(watching this from a distance had tears in his eyes...He felt that a knife was piercing his heart...his which had started to beat again because of riya... He watched her taking a cab to the airport)

Arjun: Why do all the people i love leave me???? Everything's over now.. He started crying just like the way he did when Roshni left him

he turned and saw Rathore

Rathore: Its not late yet... There's still time for her flight... When you lost Roshni you didnt have a choice but this time you still have hope... Dont let her go Raute.. She's the only reason that keeps your heart alive..

Before Rathore could even finish his statement arjun started running.. Towards his love, following his heart ,towards his destiny

He reached the airport and just in time stopped Riya who was boarding her flight...

Riya:Sir..aap???

Arjun:ssshhh(keeping a finger on her lips) Today only i will speak and you will listen... What did you think that you will be free from me?

Listen carefully Riya Mukherjee because i'll only say it once I LOVE U.

Riya(crying): Sir i have waited for this moment for a long time... But i dont know what to say.. I guess i have to think abt it(laughing)

Arjun: So what do you say... do you want to go marry some other idiot or stay here and become Mrs. Riya Arjun Raute??? Im telling you the second choice is very good.. But it is upto you..

Riya: I guess i dont have a choice but only on one condition!!! From today onwards i'll be your boss for lifetime!! samjhe ya samjhaon???

Next scene: A new member joins ETF who is immediately attracted to Riya and follows her everywhere during investigation making Arjun very irritated...

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elle..

@elle..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Thnnks lizzie...i love airpot wali love stories...u made it so nyc
K..lemme try now
Etf members sitin in d confrence room...riya shree chotu givin each other glances regarding the person sittin wid them..questionin who iss he
Arjun as usual doesnt care

Rathorr-ok team...ek imp baat...aaj se humare etf mei ek naya member kaam krega. Mr.shaleen malhotra 😃
Shaleen make urself easy with d members..i will just come said rathore nd went outside

Shaleen-so hello members...i m shaleen malhotra
🐷

Chotu-hello sir i am chandrakkant
Shree-hello sir i m shreekant sen(m not sure of their full names)
Riya-hello sir..i m riya mukherjee
Shaleen-hello guyz...i hope we can now solve cases more fastly as m here
Riya-ofcourse sir...its an honor

Arjun(st)-huh..gappe marenge to ho gya case solve

Shaleen-by d way miss.mukherjee..u r an exampple for our new gen..ek ladki hoke cop..m impressed

Riya-thats so nyc of u sir...thank u...muje to aisa lagta tha ki log ladkion ko kamzor smjte h(meanwhile givin a glare to arjun)

Shaleen-ofcourse not...mai aise faltu chizo mei vishwaas nhi rkhta...i salute u
Riya-thank u sir..thats lyk biggest compliment of my lyf (while passin her infectious smile)

Arjun(irritated nd st)bas...is riya se gappe marwalo..isme to numbr one h...aur ye shaleen..ye b kitna has has ke baat kr rha h...khair muje kya
His thots are interuppted by shaleen
Shaleen-kyu arjun...sahi kaha na maine riya ke baare mei

Arjun(in his usual tone)-kal case ke lie nikalna h..behtar hoga ki tum file study krlo bajaye riya se gappe marne kew
Shaleen-oh come on arjun..jaanta hu tumhe bachpan se..kaam ke elava kuch ni sujta...par thodi der to i can have d pleasure of takin wid this young pretty lady

Arjun(st)-huh...ye shaleen flirt krne se baaz ni aaega..huh..khair muje kya..kre jo b..acha h..mera dimaag kam khaegi riya...lekin!!!..mai ye kya soch rha hu..ye ladki muje pagal kr degi

Next:::Riya tells arjun abt her pregnancy..plz make it naughty :p

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Lizzie Mathew

@-Lizzie-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Good one...

*in the hospital*

Doctor: Congrats RIYA!!!! You are going to become a mother...

Riya: What omg...omg... Me a mother... Doctor this is the best news i've ever heard.. Thank u so much

she runs out of the room and bumps into arjun

Arjun: Riya what happened???? Why were you running??? What did the doctor say?? Are you ok?? DId she give you any medicines?? Why arent you saying anything???

Riya: hoho Arjun, please relax. Nothing's wrong.. It's just that...

Arjun: Its just what???

Riya: Its just that you are promoted!!!!

Arjun: What???? Promoted??? Wow its so good to hear that... But what happened why did rathore resign??? Anyways omg i will be the chief of ETF now.. Too good man... But tell me what did the doctor say??

Riya: Shut up... I meant that you are going to be a Papa... buddhu kahika...Kitna unromantic hai...

Arjun: Kya???????? Mein papa??? Omg this is really good news... Mera ek beti hoga jo mujhe papa bulaogi!!!

Riya: Nahi beta.. lekhin tumhare tara akkudu nahi meri jaise bilkul pyaara!!!! Ha looks tho uske papa ke chalega!!!

She was cut short by a kiss from arjun

Riya: hmm on second thoughts he shouldn't look like you... otherwise he will drive other girls crazy just like me...

Next scene: i dont know if this is a good idea but i would love to see the current lead's situations reversed... what i mean is that riya is the one who lost her lover and arjun falling for her...

if not then a rain scene between ariya!!!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Gud one lizzie_angel...
Both topics u gave were gud... But being a rainlover i chose that..:

Riya and Arjun are the last to leave ETF office... Arjun notices that his car tyre has a puncture and Riya offers him a ride. On the way it starts raining. Riya just stops the car and gets out to get wet. Arjun after 5 min irritated comes up to her.

Arjun: yeh kya kar rahi ho, Riya??
Riya: sorry sir.. I forgot u... Actually rain mein i forget everything especially worries... :p
Arjun: u mean i am a tension a problem for you..
Riya: i meant the worry regarding to drop u home... U can take my car home.. I'll walk back home...
Arjun: baarish mein...
Riya: yes i love rain
Arjun: u mean getting wet in rain... This is so stupid
Riya: if u only get wet yes... If u feel and enjoy the rain then it is the best feeling ever.. But people don't know how to do that
Arjun: so teach me...
Riya: apke liye toh mushqil h...
Arjun: i can try...
Riya: just stretch ur arms..: look up at the sky... Forget urself... Just think that rain is the best thing...

Riya does that and Arjun follows her.. First time in life he forgets everything...

Next scene: arjun jealous of riya and shree