GOTW!! thank u note at pg.13!!

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elle..

@elle..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Jealous arun...m loving it
So lemme continue

Riya-ye kya tareeka hai sir?..mai waha rohan se baat kr rhi thi aur ap mujr aise kheench laye...wat wud he b thinkin

Arjun-muje koi fark ni padta vo kya soch rha hoga...nd tum dono baat kr rhe the..really?

Riya-aap kehna kya chahte h?

Arjun-vo tumse fliirt kr rha tha...samj ni aata kya bewkuf ladki...
Riya-nai sir aisa kuch nahi h...aur agar h bhi to aapko kya

Arjun pulling her ciose nd saying
""Riya statistics ke hisaab se agar ladka kisi ladki ko kisi aur ke saath dekhe...aur use fark pade...to iska matlab samjhe ya samjhau!!!""

Next::riya nd arjun fightin over the gender of their cumin baby

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Baby fight!

Good selection sweet doc.
Riya stood glaring at Arjun, one hand on her protruded belly , another pointing at Arjun.
Riya- Listen Mr. Arjun Suryakanth Raute, I am the mother and I know better, we are going to have a son!
Arjun - I am the father and I say we will be blessed with a princess.
Riya - A prince!
Arjun - Princess.
Riya- Arjun meine kaha na beta hoga, my instincts say so.
Arjun- Your instincts never worked well Riya *gives a smug smile*
Riya *fuming now*- It's going to be a boy and mein mere bete ke liye naam chunne waali hun, if you want join.
Arjun- Beti hain and I've already chosen,Muskaan *smiles fondly*
Riya - Yuvraj and it's a boy
Arjun- Muskaan
Riya - Yuvraj.
Arjun suddenly smiled naughtily and started walking towards Riya.
Riya - Chup kyun *she sees the look on Arjun's face*,Arjun yeh kya.
Arjun slowly backed her upto the wall being careful with her belly.
Arjun *seductively* - How about a deal, iss baar tum mujhe princess dhe dho aur hum prince ke liye preparation shuru karein, samjhe ya samjhaun!
Riya melts under his passionate gaze and hides her head in his chest to hide her blush.

Next- Rathod and Arjun in a shop to buy b'day present for Riya.

Edited by FeistySoul - 13 years ago

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Lizzie Mathew

@-Lizzie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Rathode: Riya ki b'day agle hafte aur vo hamare team ki e special member hai... Humein use ek gift dena chahiye???

Arjun: Lekhin humein gift kya karna hai????

Rathode: Pata nahi... par use bahut pasand aana chahiye...

Arjun: Use pasand aana chahiye????? Ek kaam karte hai... hum use ek tissue box gift karte kyunki woh itni cleanliness freak hai.. toh use bahut accha lagega...(he is saying this very sincerely)

Rathode: hadh hai yaar insensitivity ka...Tissu box gift karenge... mujhe lagta hai ki tum paagal hogaya...

Arjun: tho aap decide kariye ki uski sabse achi kya lagti hai...mein jaa raha hu

(he leaves)

Rathode: Ek hai jo use sabsi achi lagti hai... par tum abhi nahi samjhoge Arjun...

Next scene:Arjun,rathode,shree and riya VS chotu in a hand wrestling match

Edited by lizzie_angel - 13 years ago

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Mahi

@_mahi_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Starts with Shree asking Chotu of the secret behind his well-toned body.😆

Shree - Yaar Chotu, tell me what you do all day that you got so strong muscles.. I look like a newborn baby in front of you *with a sad and disappointed face*😔

Chotu - *happy to hear good words about him*🤪 Yes Yes Bachu. I should better start giving you some kind of training. And you shouldn't go to Rathod or Arjun sir for this as they aren't as strong as me. 😎

Shree- yeah maybe they aren't as well built as you are but you know they are quite strong.😃

Chotu - Go on shree. There is no way even you 4 can beat me together. I am enough for 10 people.😲

Riya - oh really? Wanna give it a try?😉 Lets have an arm wrestling. Rathod, Shree, Riya and Arjun vs. Chotu. Allright?😃

Everyone stared at her in shock.😲 Rathod and Shree were in but Arjun ignored the whole thing.🤔

It was Rathod first, then Shree and then Riya against Chotu. 👏 They were first winning but when Chotu stopped playing around and became serious, they started to lose the game. 😕

Riya looked at Arjun and he saw expectation in her eyes. 🤔When he didn't move, Riya stopped looking at him and focused on the game.

They were about to lose when Arjun put his hand on top of Riya's😳 and Chotu lost within the matter of few seconds.🥳

... and his hand was still on top of hers.😳

Scenario:: Shree asking Riya if she is falling for Arjun.

Edited by _mahi_ - 13 years ago

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Faisa

@Faayey

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Riya's sitting in the office mumbling to herself when Shree comes and scare her

Shree: hmm this is happening a lot nowadays

Riya: you idiot dont ever scare me like that ever again, vaise what are you talking about?

Shree: this * points his finger at her* you keep talking to your self about him quite a lot

Riya: who's him

Shree: oh please atleast don't lie to your self...you know who..the love of you life

Riya: *looks worried* Shree if you dont tell me who it is i will break your teeth

Chotu enters

Chotu: Arjun, who else

Riya (stands there shocked): what that arrogant know it all who never says thank you...pleaseee

Shree; oh come on Riya, if not us alteast dont lie to your self, we've al seen the way you orientate your self around, like magnet...face it Riya you've got it bad

Chotu: Riya not everyones perfect but your heart fell in love with..its all God's doing *both Shree and Chotu laugh*

Riya (sits down): hmm you're right he is handsome, brave and gorgeous and definitely knows how to use a gun...but i can never tell him guys, you know what happened to his wife

Shree: he doesnt have to find out he already does, turn around

Riya spins around and sees the love of her life standing there

They both confess their love to each other and theres a happy ending

Next scene: ETF team are on holiday in Barbados where they all go for surfing

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Mahi

@_mahi_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Faayey, I must say, it was heart-touching😳

ETF team had been offered to visit Barbados for 2 weeks since they had been doing a lot of work recently and were successful in solving critical underworld cases.👏

All 5 ETFians reached Barbados. Shree Chotu and Riya were super excited😃 as they had never been outside the country for a vacation since they had joined ETF. Rathod was a little on a cheerful side too😛 as it was something that he really loved but Arjun. Lets not talk about it.🤔

All were supposed to meet at the beach in an hour. Everyone was there except Riya. They were all waiting for her.

Shree - OMG where is this Riya? We are getting late for surfing.😕

Chotu - Calm down Yaar. She will be here any minute. I see you are getting too excited to surf among those girls in swimming suits huh?😉

Shree - Chotu... You better..*he stopped talking as he saw his best friend walking towards them in a black colored swim suit*😲

All were looking jaw-dropped at her physique. She was more than a sexy woman. Arjun didn't like the way she chose to come for surfing.😡 Her suit was clinging to her every curve and was exposing her legs daringly. 😳

She approached his friends and all were asked to put up a safety guard.

Riya - Shreee... How to tie it yaar.. I dont know how to tie its knot at my back. 😕

Shree - Wait a sec Riya.. I am expanding Chotu's safety guard's belts. 😆

Riya - Comeon hurry up, I can't wait till I hit the water. *she was restless*

Suddenly she felt two hands tying the knot at her back.☺️ Without peeking a glance at her back, she knew it was Him.😳 His soft touch on her back made her shiver. She didn't know when it was over.

Their guardian asked the ETFians to go in a pair while he was working on Chotu's safety guard.😆

In no time Arjun took her hands and they both were in the ocean, side by side, exploring the water waves.

😳

Scenario:: Continue please!!😳

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

mahi rocking loved it

ok so continuing

Arjun: riya careful you will fall off

Riya: sir please we are vaction let me enjoy( with that riya is surfing and really good at it )

the guys are all stairing at her

Arjun: theek hai if you hurt yourself dont think ill help you samjhje ya samjao

Riya: what ever sir

after a while of surfing she going on the beach n lays down on the sand n relaxs

arjun hears guys whispering

guy1: wow what hot babe

guy2: damn she is sexy

arjun goes to the guys

arjun yup my girl is hot but she is mine

guy1: what she doing guy like u when v r here

arjun she loved cops and sinceim one

guys back away

and with that he picks her up in his arms

Riya: sir aap

Next guys continue pleaseee hope u liked it

Edited by Fiza28 - 13 years ago

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

NOTE: THANK U EVERYONE WHO IS REPLYING TO THIS GOTW...I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE A DISASTER BUT IM GLAD U ALL R LOVING IT...😆😃 KEEP PLAYING...IM ENJOYING THE IMAGINATIVE WRITINGS HERE...😉 WE HAVE SO MANY CREATIVE PEOPLE IN OUR FORUM...👏👏👏 AND ONE REQUEST ...IT WON'T TAKE MUCH OF YOUR TIME TO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON IN THE START OF THE TOPIC...WHOEVER IS PARTICIPATING IN THIS GAME...😆🤣🤣 SORRY BUT I DO CARE ABOUT THAT...LOL...😳😆

THANKS AGAIN N CONTINUE WITH THE FUN ...😃

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elle..

@elle..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Fiza..i loved arjun's jealoisness
Lemme continue
Riya-sir chorie muje..kaha leke ja re h. Leave me
Arjun-chup karo riya...
He enters the hotel room...throws her on d bed...opens the cupboard nd takes out a decent beach dress

Arjun-ye lo..
Riya-kya karu iska?
Arjun-mere sar pe maro..huh. ofcourse pehno ise

Riya-par maine already ek pehni hui h
Arjun-to change kro bewkuf ladki
Riya-itne der se aap ajeeb behave kr rhe h. Aur bewkuf muje keh re h..nai pehnungi ye dress

Arjun-riya...its an order.
Riya-basically..hum yaha vacation par h...so aap mere boss nahi h...samje aap mr.raute

Arjun pins her to d wall...
"".muje koi fark ni padta ..hum vacation par h ya nahi...kyunki mai tumhara boss hu...hamesha ke liye..ab smje ya smjau""

Next::rathod givin tips to arjun for first night ;);)

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

First night as in Suhag raat dear😉

well let me try😳

Arjun; Aaj main bahut khush hu, finally mein aur Riya are married... However she's waiting for me inside, oh god what do i do????😕

Rathore: What do you mean by what you must do???? Its your suhag raat!!!

Arjun:lekin mujhe bahut daar lag raha hein😆

Rathore: Dont be shy, you are a man, behave like a man, darna ladkiyon ka kam hein...

Arjun: ap nahin samjhe ge😳

Rathore: Arjun you can be an arrogant cop and very strong, yet tum apne suhag raat se dar rahe ho, theek hein to ye lo kuch tips😉... First go next to her, speak to her and make her relax, then take her hands in yours, kiss them, kiss her forehead, then each eyes, then both cheeks, and finally kiss ...

Samjhe ya samjayu????, then rest will happen automatically😳

Arjun: Wow sir, apne to kabhi shaadi nahi ki, to yeh saab apko kaise pata hein😆

Rathore: What the!!!!!!!😆

Next: Arjun looking at another girl, Riya angry, and she's the one dragging him away😉