A reader's appreciation for The Awaited Spring ... lovely story

Hinzeee, if i am not supposed to make this post, you can let me know and I will maybe tuck it in some other thread that is meant to talk about Books? I know there are some rules about not talking anything else other than the show. So feel free to tell me pls.

I wanted to appreciate this work written by our very own Riya and hence here I AM.

I am a fan of positive stories bec real life seldom is always positive. We have lots of ups and downs, lots of failed relations, lots of ego, lots of unnecessary MUs and what not. Ofcourse this enables people to learn if they have the right eye to perceive or i guess life teaches us to perceive things till we get it right. This is the reason why i guess people call life a journey!

Coming to this book written by Riya - I will say a very good work of art for a first story. ❤️

It is a simple love story and shows the emotions of both pretty well. I was more enchanted by the kiddo here and the fact that how a child observes everything. What i loved about this story is the fact that once an understanding is established between two people there is no scope of any misunderstanding as - there is a basic trust, there is this open communication, there is this "want to know things first" before coming to any conclusion, there is this faith that he or she will tell me when she/he wants to and most imp there is this feeling that tells us this relationship is worth it and so I will fight for it, i will compromise, i will FEEL.

The best part was his and her support (a unconditional one) even when they were knowing each other. And the kiddo just connected with the man, which i feel is very very special!!

All the above was portrayed very well and I loved the way they grew with time, just grew!!

I dont want to give the plot away and its pretty simple, but I guess people reading this would have understood the positive aspects 😊

One constructive feedback that I would like to give is - balance the description of surroundings, situations, characters in the beginning. I would say more of dialog and monologue with a balance of back story and description pulls the reader in. Too much of a description in the beginning might not attract a reader.

A really good story Riya and I am looking forward to your second one as you have a buyer ready!! 🤗

💯 Agree..

I read the sample chapters in Wattpad and then couldn't wait and purchased the Kindle edition immediately. Most importantly, I have already read thrice; proof in itself how well it's written.

The characters are so well defined, realistic and beautifully protrayed. The Princess is all ❤️❤️❤️ and your AK, just perfect 👌👌👌 and left me hoping to find someone like him in real.

Riya, you are too good, it's very well written piece of art ..👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: RainFire125

Hinzeee, if i am not supposed to make this post, you can let me know and I will maybe tuck it in some other thread that is meant to talk about Books? I know there are some rules about not talking anything else other than the show. So feel free to tell me pls.

I wanted to appreciate this work written by our very own Riya and hence here I AM.

I am a fan of positive stories bec real life seldom is always positive. We have lots of ups and downs, lots of failed relations, lots of ego, lots of unnecessary MUs and what not. Ofcourse this enables people to learn if they have the right eye to perceive or i guess life teaches us to perceive things till we get it right. This is the reason why i guess people call life a journey!

Coming to this book written by Riya - I will say a very good work of art for a first story. ❤️

It is a simple love story and shows the emotions of both pretty well. I was more enchanted by the kiddo here and the fact that how a child observes everything. What i loved about this story is the fact that once an understanding is established between two people there is no scope of any misunderstanding as - there is a basic trust, there is this open communication, there is this "want to know things first" before coming to any conclusion, there is this faith that he or she will tell me when she/he wants to and most imp there is this feeling that tells us this relationship is worth it and so I will fight for it, i will compromise, i will FEEL.

The best part was his and her support (a unconditional one) even when they were knowing each other. And the kiddo just connected with the man, which i feel is very very special!!

All the above was portrayed very well and I loved the way they grew with time, just grew!!

I dont want to give the plot away and its pretty simple, but I guess people reading this would have understood the positive aspects 😊

One constructive feedback that I would like to give is - balance the description of surroundings, situations, characters in the beginning. I would say more of dialog and monologue with a balance of back story and description pulls the reader in. Too much of a description in the beginning might not attract a reader.

A really good story Riya and I am looking forward to your second one as you have a buyer ready!! 🤗

Me tooo purchased this book it's lovely book... But can't able to finished it.. Due to my study load sry riya... I will really appreciate ur writing.. I definitely.. Mail uhh... Lovely girl writer.. It's soo.. Beautiful book... Loved the girl ahana.. N ur version of AK.. Aadit Khanna...

Again so sry riya.. But i will def try to finish it after exam in nxt week... N I will be post long appreciation for uhhh... Its My promise... To uhh...

Yaha to Gayatri ne baazi mar li... Maine bhi same Exactly yehi socha tha riya k liye kya yr G😭😭.... Can't able to finish it my bad yr...... 🥺😔😔😭😭😭😭

Originally posted by: QueeN456

Me tooo purchased this book it's lovely book... But can't able to finished it.. Due to my study load sry riya... I will really appreciate ur writing.. I definitely.. Mail uhh... Lovely girl writer.. It's soo.. Beautiful book... Loved the girl ahana.. N ur version of AK.. Aadit Khanna...

Again so sry riya.. But i will def try to finish it after exam in nxt week... N I will be post long appreciation for uhhh... Its My promise... To uhh...

Yaha to Gayatri ne baazi mar li... Maine bhi same Exactly yehi socha tha riya k liye kya yr G😭😭.... Can't able to finish it my bad yr...... 🥺😔😔😭😭😭😭

hahahaha, yaar abhi tho kuch aur writing ke liye muse hai hi nahin as i am not watching any show, so when i read this i wanted to pen some thoughts. isliye likh dala!!🤗

How are you otherwise, all good?

Originally posted by: Km181

💯 Agree..

I read the sample chapters in Wattpad and then couldn't wait and purchased the Kindle edition immediately. Most importantly, I have already read thrice; proof in itself how well it's written.

The characters are so well defined, realistic and beautifully protrayed. The Princess is all ❤️❤️❤️ and your AK, just perfect 👌👌👌 and left me hoping to find someone like him in real.

Riya, you are too good, it's very well written piece of art ..👏👏👏👏👏

Righto Komal. I loved the understanding between the two..the growth was lovely!! And they were strong individuals too.

Originally posted by: RainFire125

hahahaha, yaar abhi tho kuch aur writing ke liye muse hai hi nahin as i am not watching any show, so when i read this i wanted to pen some thoughts. isliye likh dala!!🤗

How are you otherwise, all good?

Yup everything is fine... Tell me about u... Missing uhh here yr n your awesome writing n long post... Plz aya kr naa yaha kbhi kbhi.... Missing uhh badly... 😔🥺

Originally posted by: QueeN456

Yup everything is fine... Tell me about u... Missing uhh here yr n your awesome writing n long post... Plz aya kr naa yaha kbhi kbhi.... Missing uhh badly... 😔🥺

I am good re, busy with my classes and my conference calls!! This month is too hectic hence not able to hop in. April mein thoda light rahega, so will hop in. 🤗

Originally posted by: RainFire125

I am good re, busy with my classes and my conference calls!! This month is too hectic hence not able to hop in. April mein thoda light rahega, so will hop in. 🤗

Take care G... Ate rhna.... Meet uhh soon here... 🤗

Originally posted by: RainFire125

Hinzeee, if i am not supposed to make this post, you can let me know and I will maybe tuck it in some other thread that is meant to talk about Books? I know there are some rules about not talking anything else other than the show. So feel free to tell me pls.

I wanted to appreciate this work written by our very own Riya and hence here I AM.

I am a fan of positive stories bec real life seldom is always positive. We have lots of ups and downs, lots of failed relations, lots of ego, lots of unnecessary MUs and what not. Ofcourse this enables people to learn if they have the right eye to perceive or i guess life teaches us to perceive things till we get it right. This is the reason why i guess people call life a journey!

Coming to this book written by Riya - I will say a very good work of art for a first story. ❤️

It is a simple love story and shows the emotions of both pretty well. I was more enchanted by the kiddo here and the fact that how a child observes everything. What i loved about this story is the fact that once an understanding is established between two people there is no scope of any misunderstanding as - there is a basic trust, there is this open communication, there is this "want to know things first" before coming to any conclusion, there is this faith that he or she will tell me when she/he wants to and most imp there is this feeling that tells us this relationship is worth it and so I will fight for it, i will compromise, i will FEEL.

The best part was his and her support (a unconditional one) even when they were knowing each other. And the kiddo just connected with the man, which i feel is very very special!!

All the above was portrayed very well and I loved the way they grew with time, just grew!!

I dont want to give the plot away and its pretty simple, but I guess people reading this would have understood the positive aspects 😊

One constructive feedback that I would like to give is - balance the description of surroundings, situations, characters in the beginning. I would say more of dialog and monologue with a balance of back story and description pulls the reader in. Too much of a description in the beginning might not attract a reader.

A really good story Riya and I am looking forward to your second one as you have a buyer ready!! 🤗

OMG, Geeee!!!

Thank you soooo very much for this! I'm just so overwhelmed that I'm not getting words to express what I'm feeling right now!

Thanks for giving a chance to my words, and more than that writing a review about my book! I'm so happy to read your thoughts.

I'm elated that you liked the story that I weaved and it could hold your interest.

Bold - I'll keep that in mind. Sometime I got carried away in the explanations so much that I might become a little too much than required. I'll have a word with my editor as well with respect to this from next time.

Thanks for your insight, G! Really means a lot to me. You are a sweetheart!

Originally posted by: Km181

💯 Agree..

I read the sample chapters in Wattpad and then couldn't wait and purchased the Kindle edition immediately. Most importantly, I have already read thrice; proof in itself how well it's written.

The characters are so well defined, realistic and beautifully protrayed. The Princess is all ❤️❤️❤️ and your AK, just perfect 👌👌👌 and left me hoping to find someone like him in real.

Riya, you are too good, it's very well written piece of art ..👏👏👏👏👏

OMG! You girls are just so precious.

Thank you so much, Komal! Apne characters ki tarif kitne bhi baar padh lo, each time it gives the same rush of happiness. Besides, this was my first so it's extra special.

I'm so glad you liked the novel! Thanks much ❤️🤗