|The Storm| - MaAn FS (Part 5 PG 15 updated 6/1) - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Beautiful dear!! 👌👌👌 you expressed his trauma, fear, his sorrow really good. It really tugged at the heart.... Please keep writing dear!! 😊😊

Thank you for the tag!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

😀 when I see a tag from you...because I know it's an OS update


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Didn't even imagine...agar wo Anuj? nahi hota, to pata nahi kya haal hota.

Itna angst to wo serial main nahin dikhate jitna tune is update main de diya.

Aur wo Anuj ka angst kyu...I love him, please use mat tadpa aise...rehaan kar..



Originally posted by: nish_vir

If he allowed his unfortunate past to drag him down today, his future would cease to exist and the present he had barely salvaged would become just as miserable as his history.



Beautiful update..aur update ka next part jaldi dena hota hai...so will be waiting..pleej.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Oh my! Please write more ASAP! Loving it so far!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Damn...🔥 that was beautiful...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

You are definition of perfection for me🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙌🙌🙌


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I mean me getting emotional over a fictional character,that's something very very rare (as rare as Anuj maybe)

The way you described every single scene it has my heart ❤️

matlab I was literally forced to feel each and every emotion of Anuj 🤧

I knew anu will be safe at last but still you managed to race my heart beat for a second when he saw her voter id 🥺🥺🥺


Next part plzzz haaan👉👈

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

OMG my heartbeat is like running a marathon my eyes are filled really it's like I m seeing this scene in front of my eyes I can't even imagine aapne likha kaise hoga ye

Really is don't have words to appreciate this👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

The way you have placed the exact scenario here it just flashed over my eyes through this 😭😭😭...well executed one🙌❤️

Please Update soonest

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Woah. this truly pierced my heart. could really feel the pain of Anuj through your words. so wonderfully written. I am glad you put that last 'Anuj' there. looking forward to more updates..
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Zaalima!! Mera dil ko kyun toda yaar💔 you are just awesome how can you enact each and every scene precisely👏 I felt each emotions Anuj going through😭 please update ASAP

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Oh mah gawd!


She’s alive, she has to be alive 💕🧿

I have those feels with the way you ended the chapter


This is an absolute thriller!


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