viditi SS; the final hunt CH 9 last part UPDATED - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Such a sweet and lovely update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mitras

Such a sweet and lovely update

thnx😊 for ur valuable comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry Riya for late reply papa ka chalenge tha agar good percentage aye to hi mobile milega warna nahi Aj result publish hua and its good to aj mobile mila.It was sooo sweet update next update jaldi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Pichle dono chapters sath oadhe,Adu ki death ka padh ke tih darr gyi,but Shivani ne bacha lia and end me Viditi moment.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Babygirl728

Pichle dono chapters sath oadhe,Adu ki death ka padh ke tih darr gyi,but Shivani ne bacha lia and end me Viditi moment.

thnx di 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snu123

Sorry Riya for late reply papa ka chalenge tha agar good percentage aye to hi mobile milega warna nahi Aj result publish hua and its good to aj mobile mila.It was sooo sweet update next update jaldi.

congo forur good result 😉 and late reply ke liye sorry bolne ki zaaroorat nahin it's okay tumne pada aur pasand aya yahin badi baat hain 😃 waise bhi main koi great writer toh hu nahin jo mere story padne ke liye line lagaaye 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry for late review I have read ch 6 and 7 together both are awesome ❤️ I love it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishani488

Sorry for late review I have read ch 6 and 7 together both are awesome ❤️ I love it

it is fine dont feel sorry and thanks for liking it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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isko plz imagine karke padna tab real lagega
The blanket of mist covered the whole area two fig moving forward flipping their hands to clear the mist the visibility range is 0. they came across a hanging bridge which was actually made due to fallen tree log connecting to cliff and down there was enormous river ready to swallow a whole person alive.
Aditi stopped seeing this site. vik came beside her and stood. He just looked into her face n hold her hand. She looked at vik and vik gave assuring look to her and both of them crossed the bridge.
After walking a pretty much distance they came upon a vast ruin whose roofs are deceased but several passage connecting each other(a bhool bhulaiya) The sky grew red with sun at its horizon ready to set. And the vissible walls r marred with the artless paint of blood which dried out a decade ago. There was certain melancholy in the environment The book opened and the pages read
USE UR WIT NOT UR POWER
ACCEPT UR FEAR AND MAKE IT UR STRENGTH
as soon as they entered aditi felt a gust of wind and her body went stiff. They were welcomed by cowebs of spider and dreadful bats. The carpet of dust says that it is an unvisited place
vikrant... yahan toh bohot sare raaste hain inmese sahi kaun sa hain
wahi toh main bhi soch rahan hoon
ek kaam karte hain jahan se jayenge wahan se mark kareke chalte hain toh hum nahin bhatkenge
hmm...(while he picked up a small stone which can be used to mark place in walls)
the journey begins
they came to places where they saw skeletons and bone shattered. they saw shadows that past across them and sudden loud wispers.The site is enough for a strong hearted person to quit
aditi was moving forward n vik following her from behind.suddenly he screamed ADITI and pulled her
she saw knifes are protuding from walls which is enough to pierce ones flesh out.
after crossing such obstacles they came upon a vast room and mist separated both of them
vik saw the illusion of shivani laying dead and aditi dragged by those insani janwar. and he heard the words tum usse nahin baccha payen
meanwhile in other part aditi saw the burning orphanage, the photo , then how she confronted her father for her being adopted.and her fear grew that she is all alone and his father is abandoned her for being adopted
they r actually confronting their inner fear suddenly both of them remembered to use ur fear as strength
aditi said loudly haan mein adopted hoon lekin mere papa mujhse bohot pyar karte hain , aur mein akele nahin hoon mera saath dene ke liye vikrant hain she sat on her knees and the cloud dissappeared
vik also said haan main usse nahin baacha payan na shivani ko nah aditi ko lekin mein vaanraj se isska badla loonga yeh mera wada hain khudse and the mist dissapeared and they reunited.
they saw glowing piece of weapon in the middle but held very high and they couldnot reach ther So aditi climbed at vik shoulder to get the weapon
yaar tumtoh baas dekhne mein patli ho aise weight bohot hain tumhara
vikrant... aditi said annoyinly
arrey mazak kaar rahan hoon
tumhe abhi bhi mazak ki sujhi hain
she took the weapon and climbed down and the ruin start to collapse and somehow they managed to escape
after coming out aditi saw vik hand bleeding she took her handkerchief and started to wrap it
arrey chotti se injury hain thik ho jaayengi
but she didnot responded and continued her work vik kept staring at her
aise kya dekh rahen ho
kuch nahin yahin ki tumhe mein kaab samajh paaunga and both of them smiled
aditi kya hua?
kya, kuch nahin
toh phir yeh haasin ke piche udasi
patan nahin maan bohot ghabra rahan hain kuch bura hone wala hain
vik kept his hand on her to comfort her
suddenly the locket glow but in unusual way a bright glow this time
they came upon a stiff mountain. The cloud roared and it start raining. They started to climb the mountain it was slippery due to rain and loosing balance means to lose life here
they came halfway and saw plane land on the mountain
vik sat exhausted aab nahin chala jaa rahan aaj yehi rukte hain kaal aage ka dekhenge
meanwhile adu glared at the sky and saw the fifth sign the star pattern but it is only possible if evil collides with good then does it mean vaanraj is here
she was about to inform this suddenly something hit vikrant in head from back and he fall aditi screamed VIKRANT but the insani janwar hold her back she saw to yellow eyes glowing in dark
before loosing consiousness he saw adu struggling with those villans and he closed his eyes

does it mean everything ends here...

to know stay tuned
and thnx to all who appreciated my prev work sorry for mistakes and do comment😉
Edited by Riya95 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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no this can't be the end, since i feel that u r also ardent viditian like us and won't let them get seperated or defeated. the update is super awesome and waiting for the next one eagerly.

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