YOU ARE MINE....VIDITI FF (UPDATED CHAPTER 16 In another thread) - Page 30

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Posted: 6 years ago
HEY EVERYONE!!!I AM SORRY I COULDNT UPDATE TODAY!!!I WILL SURELY UPDATE ON SATURDAY...
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Posted: 6 years ago
😭😭😭 please please don't make me cry again.
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Hey everyone!!Here you go the next chapter.THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVELY COMMENTS🤗
CHAPTER-15 PART 1
(IN THE DARK WORLD)
"Vikrant rehne do nahi hoga...Shivanis desperate cries didn't reach Vikrant.He was still very violently trying to hurt himself.Well actually he was trying to remove the chains on his hand by breaking it...but shamshing those chains to the wall was only leading to bleeding hands.
No he couldn't lose hope...not when that's all he had.He had to go back to his life...the life where he wanted a happy ending not here in this dark world.
Finally a sound echoed and the chains broke.Vikrant cried in happiness but the tears were also present because he was hurt.His hands were covered in blood.
"Vikrant tum thik toh ho na...Asked Shivani though it was evident he had got hurt.
"Haan mein thik hoon...He said and quickly covered his hand with his cloth and removed Shivanis chain.Both of them started slowly creeping towards the path where the light shown.Shivani didn't know how to get out of here but they would eventually find a way out.She felt a sudden insight in her head and the vision showed her a door.A door covered with spider webs.Yes that must be the door to outside world.
She soon said this to Vikrant and they both started searching for the door.She heard the sounds of kids crying and turned towards the path where the noise grew...and there was the door...standing right in front of them.She opened it and...
(SHAITAAN CHOWKI...)
Aditi knew she needed rest but No she had to find a way to bring Vikrant back.She had a dream about him three days ago...He had said she was a warrior and Yes! She was a warrior. She will definitely find Vikrant and that's why she was going through the files of Siddhant Murder case and all the related to Vanraj.
(VIKRANT HOUSE...)
Viraan knew he was having yet another Nightmare.The nightmare sessions started from the day his brother had gone to second World.He slept and suddenly had Nightmares about Snakes...babas and finally all these ended with the yellow eyed man...VANRAJ.
In this Nightmare though he could see a very weird door.A door that was covered with spiderwebs.It was completely dark and suddenly a bright light shone infront of him.
He turned in gaze so as to protect his eyes but then the most beautiful voice reached him.
"Viraan...mujhe tumhari madad chahiye...The moment his eyes met the womens face all his breath wooshed out.Damn she was beautiful.The glow made her seem like an angel but yet her face and kurta made her seem like human.
Wow was he in heaven.Well he didn't mind heaven at the age of 30 if such beautiful women existed there...hmm he wouldn't mind flirting with two or three.
"Aditi ko bolo ki Vanraj ka saara raaz Shaitaan Chowki mein milega...Idhhar udhar dhoondo aur nahi milega...samne dekho aur tumhe raasta dekhegaShivani said hoping Viraan would stop admiring her lips and understand what she said.
Hmmm the two brothers were soo very different yet so same.They had the same personality...face and features but their behaviour was different.It was time to leave.
The light shone terribly and Viraan closed his eyes in the intensity.He jerked opened his eyes to only find himself on his brothers bed with sweat covering him.He was busy admiring the angel but still he had heard what she said.Aditi Bhabhi!!!
(SHAITAAN CHOWKI...)
Aditi heard the sound of the bullet to find Viraan riding one.He looked similar to his brother in the leather jacket he wore.Oh how she missed Vikrant.But what was Viraan doing here...
NEXT:Part-2

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Posted: 6 years ago

Dil behalta hai mera
Aapke aa jaane se

Aapke aa jaane se

Itne dinno baad aaya chaudvin ka chaand
Waise update is very gud waiting for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: mitras

Dil behalta hai mera
Aapke aa jaane se

Aapke aa jaane se

Itne dinno baad aaya chaudvin ka chaand
Waise update is very gud waiting for next part

Shyari is very nice.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Uppdate is aawsome Amika.Ye Virran vi kya police join karne ke mood me hai kya. Amika Vik and Viran dono vhai agar ek sath a gaye to Shivani Aur Aditi dusri duniya mai bhag jayenga.Aur bapas nahi ana cahenga.
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Posted: 6 years ago
so nice dying to read next part😊
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SORRY GUYS I KNOW I AM DAMN LATE...JUST HAD EXAMS AND STUFF GOING ON!!SORRY!!!!
CHAPTER 15 PART 2
(ANOTHER WORLD...)
Vikrant and Shivani opened the door to find themselves in a room which resembled to the jail in Shaitaan Chowki...The room was completely like the jail cell where he and Shivani had brought pintu...Siddhants trusted spy.
Shivani felt as if there was somebody in that room except them.The feeling grew even more when she started walking towards the signs made on the wall...the same signs she had seen in Shaitaan Chowki.
Vikrant searched the room in order to find something but there was simply nothing that could help them.He was angry...fustrated and didn't know what to do.Vikrant slamed his fist on the fall to lower his fustration but his fist didn't hurt.He again slammed the fall and found there was something wrong in the wall.Shivani too came forward and started tapping the wall...it sounded as if the wall was hollow inside.
They started breaking the door in order to find something and finally the wall crumbled and there was another room attached to it.
They went inside and both their heart stopped beating for a sec.There in that low dim room were thousand of pictures of...ADITI.Every picture had Aditis face on it.Vikrant touched the walls where the photos were attached.His blood started boiling...How dare Vanraj kept photos of his life like that.
Shivani on the other hand felt like her dada was calling her.She could hear his voice...She went towards the photos but when she came to a certain photo...the shortest in the room the sounds grew.She started removing the photos aand suddenly the wall on the other side started shifting.
Vikrant and Shivani saw transfixed everything that was happeneing in front of them and moved inside yet another room.The room had one man inside with long hair and untidy.It seemed as if he was kept there for a long time.
Shivani felt like she couldn't breath.She recognized that man...the most important part of her life...the man she loved soo much...her dada.
"Dada...Shivani wishpered and The man turned.
Vikrant couldn't believe it...The man was none other than ACP SIDDHANT ...whom they all assumed to be dead.He was also alive and kept here by Vanraj.
Shivani ran and hugged him and Siddhant also cried happy tears seeing his lovely sister here.
(SOMETIME LATER...)
After the greetings was done and it was found out that Vanraj had kidnapped Siddhant just the way he had kidnapped Shivani...Siddhant started telling Vikrant all he knew...
"Mujhe zyada kuch nahi pata...per mein sirf itna janta hoon ki iss duniya mein tabhi aa sakte hai jab Shaitaan chowki ke uss jail mein jakar wahan paach nishan saath laye jayein toh who log iss duniyya mein aa sakte hain...Siddhant completed it.
Shivani knew what she had to do...She had to telepathy to Aditi...but She also knew she cant directly say all this to Aditi.The last time she had said to Aditi about Vikrant directly through telepathy...Vanraj showed Her how he had kidnapped her parents as punishment to her deeds.She had yet to find them.
Vikrant could see Shivani was thinking of something.He knew she was thinking of telepathy to Aditi.No he wasn't going to let Aditi come to this dangerous zone at all.
"Shivani nahi...Aditi yahan nahi aa sakti...mein usse yahan nahi aane de sakta...who pregnant hai...uska yahan aana safe nahi...Vikrant said sternly to Shivani.
After a little bit of argument it finally settled that they would telepathy to Viraan...the army officer who could handle this.But Shivani somehow kne That Aditi was the only person who could save them...
NEXT:VIRAAN AND ADITI COME TO DARK WORLD.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow...Means vikrant would come back to real world with shivani and siddhant
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome Adu will have a complete family with Vik Virohi sidhant Shivani Viran and our little viditi.

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