YOU ARE MINE....VIDITI FF (UPDATED CHAPTER 16 In another thread) - Page 28

Created

Last reply

Replies

302

Views

81.1k

Users

17

Likes

673

Frequent Posters

Riya95 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Plz vik ko dusri duniya maat bhejo 😭 and for this ch it was awesome as always 😊
Snu123 thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Romanogers

Heyy Bhagwaan ! Discovery Jeet kam tha jo forum pe bhi peeli aankh wala Vik Adu ko alag karne aa pahuncha hai. Please uss Vanraj ko durr rakhna Viditi se. It was an amazing update . I was totally into the chapter. Please update the next part soon.

Awsome update.I am with you Romanogers.
AMIKA14 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
HEY EVERYONE!!I AMM SOO SORRY I COULDNT UPDATE TODAY DUE TO MY EXTRA CLASSES!!!HOPE YOU DONT MIND!!I PROMISE TO UPDATE TOMORROW😭
AMIKA14 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
HEY EVERYONE!!!SORRY I COULDN'T UPDATE TOMORROW...HERE YOU GO THE NEXT CHAPTER.
CHAPTER 14 PART 2
(VIKRANTS HOUSE...)
"Vikrant...Aditi moaned when Vikrant left her lips for much needed oxygen and moved down to her neck sucking her pulse point and bringing her body gently close to him.
Aditi had come for her morning coffee but it seemed like ACP saab had different ideas for their morning coffee session.She had been sipping her coffee when he gave her an amazing morning kiss.
Ting Tong...
Vikrant and Aditi broke apart after hearing the bell ring.Who could dare to interrupt them this morning.He went with an deadly angry mood.It seemed like he couldn't spend a little time loving his girlfriend.He opened the door and in came the...
"Aaap yahan?!?!Asked Vikrant dumbstruck.Ofcourse no one would dare to interrupt them except the...
"Haan!!!Said the terrible trio plasting their big smile.
"Mummy ji ...Paapa ji...Viraan...Aditi said in a giddy mood and hugged each of them...Damn her family was full.
Vikrant simply rolled his eyes...Here you go again...the very loving family and their very loving daughter.Didnt the serials normally show that in-laws always used to hate each other and saas bahu drama...well it seemed like the serials needed to see their family in order to change their noble plot.
Well...It looked like he was in for a dhulai session...damn he was gonna get nice kicks by his parents for getting Aditi pregnant before marriage.Hmmm...he would consider telling them after they came from the New Vedpur case.
(VEDPUR...)
Aditi quietly heard the conversation between Vikrant and the small boy.He was definitely an amazing dad.She was sure he would love their child immensely.Damn she did the best thing of her life loving Vikrant.She smiled and patted her belly.She hoped their child was listening to everything his or her dad was telling the boy.She couldn't wait to have her cute little family.She gave them a little space and went ahead for the investigation.
(VANRAJ...)
Aditi had no clue what to do...she clutched her belly protectively and saw Vikrant and Vanraj fighting and the door to the second world opening.Plz don't let anything happen to Vikrant...she prayed to everything holy up there to protect Vikrant and their unborn child.She stared as Vikrant pushed Vanraj inside the tunnel.
Vikrant could do this...he knew he could push Vanraj inside and kill him...just a little and he could end the darkness and live a happy life.He almost pushed Vanraj inside when suddenly he clutched Vikrants hand.Suddenly Vikrants mind went black and he heard a vpice talking.
"Agar Aditi aur apne bache ko zinda rakhnna chahte ho toh tum mujhe jane doge...Vikrant knew it was Vanraj talking in his head.No couldn't let Vanraj kill his Nation...but he also could let him have Aditi and his child.
"Vikrant!!agar mein gaya toh tumhr bhi apne saath le jaunga...dusri duniya mein...Vikrant could hear the desperation in his voice...Vanraj wanted him to leave him alive...no never gonna happen.
He couldn't let him Kill his Nation and his love and child and if it meant to go to the second world to protect his nation...love and child...then so be it.Vanraj clutched his hand and Vikrant gave a final push and Then everything went black.
"Vikrant!!!!!Aditi screamed and ran desperatley hoping she could bring Vikrant back.He left...he left her and his child.She protectively held their child and cried for her love to come back.Her world had shattered...her everything was gone.The only thing that kept her alive was their unborn child and the hope to get him back.
(DARK WORLD...)
Vikrant opened his eyes just to see a dark haunted place in fornt of him...everything was sad and evil.He knew it was the second world.He wanted to cry...yes he did...he couldn't believe he didn't have the chance to see his baby and Aditi again in his life.Damn why did his life turn out like this.He felt a chain in his hand and saw he was chained up.
And finally the tears couldn't hold.He remembered all the lovely moments he had with Aditi and his unborn child.Everything was gone...He lost his world.
"Vikrant...He heard a confused and sad voice calling him.He wipped his head.He knew that voice.He remembered that voice...the voice of one of the bravest girl he had ever met...
"Tum zinda ho?!?!...And he finally saw her...in the darkness a little light illuminating from the fire.It was her...a tired and weak face...her hand chained up...It was her...SHIVANI...
NEXT:CHAPTER 15

Miss_Shree thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Vanraj bahut kharab h😭...meri adu😭😭... l think Shivani will help Vik in coming back ... Nice update...but l just wanna to cry😭
Romanogers thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
After reading this part my mind is totally blank. Mujhe nahi pata mera reaction kaisa hona chahiye. Update the next part soon.
Yukta2813 thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update.. .just loved it ā¤ļø and hope Shivani would help Vikrant to come back...
mitras thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Kya kahein? Kya naha kahein ? Speechless kar diya yaar. I can't say anything about this update.
Next update jaldi karna plzz
Riya95 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
After reading i was like OMG vaanraj i will surely kill u 😔 hope shivani will save vik jaldi update karna saas atki padi hain meri
Shaina744 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Yeh kya thašŸ˜’ No Vikrant nehi ja sakta ...What about his child and his aditi 😭 no ...usse ana hoga...Chalo thank God that shivani is there ... Waiting for next part .. Update soon..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".