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Giri,

Poo suttral ore kakkal. Aduyum time travel capsule concept super. ACD Charu kathai therunchu thaan SKPDkku ACD mela kobama? 😉

Giri, excellent. waiting for the continuation.

Well written Bonheur. liked it.

impressive bonheur, really was a very cute short story

👏

giri just read your poo sutral, 👏

Originally posted by: Bonheur

Folks, Inspired by Madhu, I have written a short story. Just for the fun of it and out of sheer boredom

Wow.....Bonheur,

Nice piece of work buddy. Madhu has inspired you well. I like the story....Well done.....

Poo Suttral continued

Pulikesi's Palace:

Before we proceed further, I wish to bring to ur 'kind attn' certain issues.

1) ACD was in his complete police uniform, when he went to meet Meco, the scientist (mukiyam😃).

2) Priya adisayama , oru azhagana cotton-zari saree ( idhu avalavu mukiyamai illai😉)

3) Since this is happening in 1796, the dialogues will be in sentamizh + english-- sentamlish ( idhu romba romba mukiyam😆).

4) I also suggest you imagine only 'VADIVELU THE UNBEATABLE' in Imsai's role.😉

Ok, let us see what happened after this.

After finding themselves in a pazhangala aranmanai of Pulikesi, did ACD realize that they had again taken the pills😛. Another shocking thought came to him that , he had not bothered to find out how to return back to their actual time period😲. Priya , still oblivious of the fact that she is time -- travelling, looks at the palace and wondered " Wow enna pramadama set pottu irukkanga, Pulikesi padathula vara madiri. Enna padam edukaranga? Vanga poi shooting parkalam"🥳 ACD kku azharadha sirikaradane theriyalai – actuala rendume avarukku avalava sariya theriyadu😆.

In the mean time, Pulikesi's veerargal took them at sword point inside the manimandam of Pulikesi, who is seen in 'vetti arattai'😉 with his trusted minister ' Manguni Pandiyan'🤡.

Pulikesi looked at ACD & his costume with suspicion , but buckets 😆seeing Priya. Same expressions reflected on Manguni also.

Manguni : " Mannar Pulikesi munal thalai vanangu maanida".

ACD : " indha A.C. Durai yaarukkum thalai vananga maatan.👏"

Pulikesi 😃: "ada , nee Nixon Duraikku uravo, vaa nanbaa , vaa ! (pointing to Priya)❤️ indha paingili yaar? En 24 mani nera andha purathil illaiparattum"

By now Priya sensed something was terribly wrong and tried to hide behind ACD and punched him on his back, and said " vanga thappichu poidalam".

ACD w/o thinking: " illai, indha ponnu en manaivi". ACD shirt backside fulla wet aagidudu ( Priya aanandha kanner vitta enru sollavenduma?)

Pulikesi ( disappointed😭) : "Manguni Pandiyare, sagotharikkum, aval kanavanukkum oyvu edukka erpadu seiyungal".

ACD and Priya were left in a huge room alone. ACD quickly updated Priya ,beginning from Meco's lab.

Priya veruppudan :"Ellathukkum indha pills than karanam". She tried to throw them out, but ACD stopped her saying it might come useful.

After 3 hrs, Pulikesi sent for ACD alone. Cautioning Priya to be alert and giving her his gun, ACD went to meet 'Imsai'.

Pulikesi : "Vaa AC Durai, vaa! Un uduppu vidyasamaga irukkirade, naan oru murai adhai anindhu parkattuma?😛"

ACD very sternly says no. Pulikesi gets very angry😡 :" yaar ange, ade yarada ange? Monpuzhuvum(earthworm) Muyalum(rabbit) vaithu thayaritha 'Akka Maala' bhaanam 3 peepaigal (barrels) kondu ivan vaayil niruthamal ootrungal".🤢

ACD gave him his dress. Pulikesi in police uniform + kreedam costume was admiring his looks in the room size mirror. He also saw ACD's extremely well – built reflection.😃

Pulikesi to ACD : " Aan azhaga, ithanai kattumasthana udalai eppadi pettrai? Punnakku paal saapittaya, thavittu rasam kudithaya?😆"

ACD :" gym exercises and table tennis practice"😳.

Pulikesi : " nee solvadu onrum puriyavillai kattazhaga".

Pulikesi had a brilliant idea. Remember the famous portrait of 23 rd Pulikesi. Well, now you know who modelled for the king , except for his face.😉😉

Pulikesi decided to take ACD for bear – hunting and ACD ensured Priya also accompanied them. He wanted to look for a chance in the forest to escape from Imsai. ACD helped trap the bear and the bear was chained to a tree. Now Pulikesi wanted to try the gun of ACD, who hid all the bullets and gave the gun with just one bullet. Pulikesi took aim, instead of killing the bear, he hit the chain and the bear escaped😃. Everyone ran away and Pulikesi🤡 in fear threw the gun. ACD took the gun and hid behind a tree with Priya.

Pulikesi in extreme fear : " yaar ange, yaar ange............yaarada ange, thappithu pona andha 'Jambhavanai' marupadiyum pidiyungal"

By then Priya and ACD had reduced the 'gems' count by another 2😃. Since they heard the word 'Jambhavan', they found themselves in Land of Kishkinda , in the forest near Jambhavan – the old minister of Sukreevan.😃 - to be continued

Giri.......amma....giri.....Ippadiye....thodarnthu....you and roga maari....maari...udanz....uttuttu iruntha....eppadi?.....I need some time between each stomach muscle carmps.......

Super....as usual.....

hi all,
hows forum goin on...missin u ppl......life is hectic... 😭 😭 looks like i hav missed a gd romantic piece 😉

atina,
why no pics..... 😉