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zahara

@ZAHARA.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

"Nimrit!" Ribban shouted as she saw Nimrit in Agam's arms. Her heart skipped a beat as she saw her daughter in pain. "Kya hua?! Nimrit!" She ran towards her where Agam had put her onto the sofa.

"Agam? How did this happen?!" She asked restlessly.

Agam looked straight at Nimrit. "Aunty, it was an accident. Actually, the room was dark so..."

"Oh god, why did this happen today?!"

"Ma, I'll go get the doctor.." Amrit said as she started to rush towards the phone.

Agam hurriedly shook his head, "No, no. No need. I'm a doctor."

Nimrit looked at him closely, forgetting her stinging pain for a second. "Doctor? Wow." She thought clearly impressed.

"Just get some bandages, antiseptic cream and cold water, hurry!" He ordered Amrit. Amrit nodded and went with Bubbly to get the equipment.

Agam looked at Nimrit who had her eyes closed, tears forming near the edge. "Don't worry, I'm here for you." He whispered softly.

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Saina

@--Saina--

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Haye Rabba Agam ji is a Doctor

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shanaya28

@shanaya28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Zahara such a lovely update..😊

My reaction same as Nimrit..wow..Doctor..😃

visualising Agamji as a doctor..well a charming one..

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Debalina

@Guggul

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

twists after twist.. Agamji a doctor??

I didn't expect this twist.. Ah well.. that is why the collective story writing is so nice. Surprises wait at every corner..

Zahara, very sweet one. I'm trying to think something. But Saina, Savee, u also come up with something..

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shanaya28

@shanaya28

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Agam so carefully nursed her wound ..he was feeling the pain Nimrit going through at that moment.. he wanted to embrace her and tells her everything will be fine..

Later that night Agam pacing the floor of his room unable to sleep thinking of Nimrit..Murmuring to himself..kaash i could go there and see her..All this while Rishabh watching him from the door..He enters the room and says talk to her..Agam gave him a surprised look .

Rishabh...i already talked to Amrit ..

Agam..Did she told you how is Nimrit?..is she in pain?..have she taken the painkillers?..

Rishabh smiled seeing Agam so concerned...Calm down buddy..Agam you will feel better so talk to her..he puts the cellphone in his hand and walked to the door..he stopped and looked back at Agam..

Agam..What..why you looking at me like this..

Rishabh..You are the Doctor but seems you have got the Dil ki Bimari..

Agam confused of what Rishabh saying about Dil ki Bimari...

Rishabh laughing at his expression..Agam my friend its called Prem Rog..you are in love buddy and with Nimrit..accept it you are a goner..

Agam smiled this time as it was the truth ..his heart did made a skip when he was in same room with her..he did feel the pain of Nimrit when she burnt herself..he could not see her in tears and wanted to give her a hug..

A bit later switching off the cell and felt relieved talking to Nimrit ..she was much better..agam walked to the window of his room and looked at the twinkling stars in the sky..A light breeze coming in the room and he closed his eyes to feel it on his face..Doing so he gets flashback of how their eyes met and how he was in awe with her simplicity and beauty..

Agam opened his eyes and so softly says if innocence had a face it will be yours Nimrit..with this thought in mind, he walked to his bed to get some sleep and waiting for the next morning to see Nimrit..

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krithika

@Wonderfullife

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Awesome Savee so beautifully written. Was smiling Reading agams condition. He is a gone case now.

Thanks friends it's a treat after treat from you all. Can't wait for the continuation.

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Debalina

@Guggul

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Aye hayee.. Main Vaari javan.. kya khoobsurat romantic update hai Savee.. U r a total romance gobbler.. Do u mix romance and in ur milk and gulp down everyday??

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shanaya28

@shanaya28

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Debo there is one couple who made me write FF.i wrote one and ended writing 5 in all..i was a bookworm esp those romance novels i read when in college..it did help ..😊

Now i'm more in more serious reading no more romance novels..😊

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Debalina

@Guggul

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: saveeta24
Debo there is one couple who made me write FF.i wrote one and ended writing 5 in all..i was a bookworm esp those romance novels i read when in college..it did help ..😊

Now i'm more in more serious reading no more romance novels..😊

I also read many books.. many many bengali romantic novels.. Why can't I write??

U read romantic novels that's an excuse. Accept that u r a good writer.. 😛 😉

Serious stuff sucks for me.. So, I am not into anything serious, may it be reading or anything else..😉 🥱

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Saina

@--Saina--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Aww nice continuation Saveeta 😳..Very well written..

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