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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc 😊 thnx fr d wonderful update..!!!...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: richa.amonkar

<font size="2">nyc😊thnx fr d wonderful update..!!!...</font>

thanks richa. Samorachi update udya lihinaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANKS A LOTTT.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW Awesome SS dear.👏

New character Dhrashti , and all are doctors ❤️

Just loved how you are taking us to past and again present so wonderful.👍🏼

AgNI first interactions are so cute .😍

Agam telling Nimrit to open her eyes and Nimrit touched to see all her loving ones waiting for her to open her eyes , everything was so heart touching.❤️

Dhrashti making fun of agam to take off his hand from nimrit was very funny. But the moment agam took his hand nimrit feeling unwell really they are made for each other.❤️

AgNi cute moments in Manali was so beautiful to read. Loved it.❤️😍😍

You were Fantastic Archu , Thanks a lot.👏

Continue soon , Can't wait.⭐️👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithikas

WOW Awesome SS dear.👏


New character Dhrashti , and all are doctors ❤️

Just loved how you are taking us to past and again present so wonderful.👍🏼

AgNI first interactions are so cute .😍

Agam telling Nimrit to open her eyes and Nimrit touched to see all her loving ones waiting for her to open her eyes , everything was so heart touching.❤️

Dhrashti making fun of agam to take off his hand from nimrit was very funny. But the moment agam took his hand nimrit feeling unwell really they are made for each other.❤️

AgNi cute moments in Manali was so beautiful to read. Loved it.❤️😍😍

You were Fantastic Archu , Thanks a lot.👏
Continue soon , Can't wait.⭐️👏


A BIG THANK UUU. TUMHE ACHHA LAGA MUJHE BAHUT KHUSHI HUYI. KAL HI NEXT UPDATE KAR RAHI HU...
.PLEASE PADHATE RAHANA AISE HI AAKHIR YE SAB SAARE am FANS KE LIYE HI TO HAI...
THANKS ONCE AGIN...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anurna

A BIG THANK UUU. TUMHE ACHHA LAGA MUJHE BAHUT KHUSHI HUYI. KAL HI NEXT UPDATE KAR RAHI HU...
.PLEASE PADHATE RAHANA AISE HI AAKHIR YE SAB SAARE am FANS KE LIYE HI TO HAI...
THANKS ONCE AGIN...

How can I miss this Awesome SS dear.❤️

In fact I noticed it late , feel bad.

I am a AgNi fan dear , love their beautiful story and not any particular actor dear.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
@krithi i know isiliye to maine tumhe aur savee dono PM kiya ...and thanks for ur appereciation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update archu! i like the way everything is in hindi for a smooth flow. i just can't write details in hindi, i feel i write it much better in english. dialogues obviously have to do in hindi to stay true to character!

anyway, superb, loved the snow scene, in fact even i was contemplating a snow scene in my update today, but decided to skip it as i already had the cabin idea in my mind. i like how agam holds nimrit's hand and she is stable, and just as he moves away, she starts to deteriorate. its almost as if she can feel his presence and feel safe! nicely written :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hiri_piri

nice update archu! i like the way everything is in hindi for a smooth flow. i just can't write details in hindi, i feel i write it much better in english. dialogues obviously have to do in hindi to stay true to character!


anyway, superb, loved the snow scene, in fact even i was contemplating a snow scene in my update today, but decided to skip it as i already had the cabin idea in my mind. i like how agam holds nimrit's hand and she is stable, and just as he moves away, she starts to deteriorate. its almost as if she can feel his presence and feel safe! nicely written :)

THANK U SWEETU HIRI...
haan hindi kyunki mujhe achhe se aati hai...aur tum jitana bhi likhati ho na wo pahale se hi awesome hota hai to...
u r always good ...
haan snow scene isliye kyunki behad romantic hota hai...
thanks for everything...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Archu first sorry for late reply and of course will not miss reading your beautiful SS..

Very well written with a blend of past and present.loved the flow of the story..👏

Agni moment where agam asking nimrit to open her eyes so heart touching..could feel wat's agam going through seeing nimrit in coma..

Their beautiful moment also is so beautifully penned down.love reading the SS ..do continue..

You doing a great job..👍🏼






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