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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: hiri_piri

very sad, yet very heart touching! nicely written archu. liked the part where agam remembers the doomed day. emotional rollercoaster :)

sad to hai. Par dukh ke baad hi to khushi ka imp badh jata hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Hi all i m back with forward update
PART - 4
PREVIOUS :-
Nimrit anjaane me tufaan me fas jaati hai...agam use dhundhane me kaamyaab ho jata hai...Ab aage...
CONTINUE : -
"Nimrit aakhein kholo please ..." ,agam neeche baith gaya aur nimrit ko apani baaho me lekar rone laga...
"please aaankhein kholo nimrit !! ye sab kya ho gaya nimrit ? tum is haalat me ..."
agam ne apane aansu poche " par ab mai aa gaya hu nimrit tumhe kuch bhi nahi hoga...mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga...tum mere zindagi me anmol ho nimrit...mai tumhare bina nahi rah sakata...tumhe is haalat me nahi dekh sakata...ab mai samajh gaya hu , tum...tum meri zindagi ho nimrit...mai tumhe kisi bhi kimat par khud se juda nahi hone dunga..."
agam nimrit ki haalat dekhakar samajh gaya tha ki usase barf bahot zor se takarane ki vajah se wo bahosh gayi aur itanea time barf ke andar dabe rahane ke karan wo HYPOTHERMIA ka shikar ho gayi thi...agar jald se jald use treatment nahi mili to nimrit ki jaan bhi ja sakati thi...
agam ne nimrit ko barf se jaldi se bahar nikala aur apane baaho me utha liya...agam nimrit ko nazdiki hospital le aaya...
"doctor...doctor ..." , agam ne hospital ke doctor se kaha.
"doctor please its an emergency...inhe hypothrmia ho gaya hai ...please inaki jaan bacha lijiye doctor" ,
"ohh, please aap inhe streacher par rakh dijiye...wardboy jaldi se streacher laao"
"doctor please nimrit ko bacha lijiye", agam ki aankho se aansu bah rahe the..
"dekhiye hum puri koshish karenge unhe bachane ki...abhi unka operation karana padega humein ...aap paper sign kar dijiye jaldi"
"ji doctor mai kar dunga"
opration khatm hone ke baad nimrit ko bahar laaya gaya...
agam daudka nimrit ke streacher ke paas gaya...
"doctor kya hua nimrit ka operation safal raha na ??? wo thik to hai na ??? bataiye na doctor !!!"
" haan operation safal raha par ..."
"par ..."
"humne inaki jaan to bacha li hai par..."
"par...par kya doctor !!" , agam ne gusse se kaha.
"par wo KOMA me chali gayi hai."
" kyaaa ????' , agam ko bahut bada jhataka laga ye sunkar...
"aur aage ka treatment aapako kisi bade hospital me karana haga .."
agam ki aankho se phir se aansu bah nikale...use is baat par yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki hamesha hasati khelati , kush rahane waali ladaki ab khamosh ho gayi hai ...na hi usake body me jaan hai aur naahi to hosh...sirf saanse chal rahi usaki...
agam soch raha tha ki kitana badnaseeb hai wo...jab use is baat ka ehsaas hua ki wo khud se bhi jyaada kisiko pyaar karta hai aur tabhi wo usase itani door ho gayi...ki ab to wo usaki awaaz bhi nahi sun sakati...usaki zindagi me khushiya aane se pahale hi bikhar gayi...
PRESENT :-
achanak zameen par kuch girne ki awaaz aayi...agam apane saare khayaalo se ekdum se baahar aa gaya...agam ne side me dekha aur wo shocked ho gaya...wo daudkar nimrit ki bed ki taraf aaya...
nimrit hosh me aa rahi thi aur dheere dhheere apani aankhein kholane ki koshish kar rahi thi...
agam ne nimrit ka haath apane haatho me le liya ...nimrit ne dheere dheere aankhien kholi...use usake saamane ek chehara dikhayi diya jo usaka jaana pahachana tha...wo aankhien badi karake use identify karane ki koshish karane lagi...
"nimrit " , agam ne nimrit ke sir par haath rakhate huye kaha. agam ki khushi ka koi thikana nahi tha...wo bahut bahut khush tha nimrit ko hosh me dekhakar...
nimrit ne agam ki taraf dekha...wo sirf agam ki aankho me dekhe jaa raha thi... nimrit ki aankhien kah rahi thi ki usane agam ko pahachaan liya tha ...par wo itani kamzoor ho chuki thi ki usaki muhh se awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi...wo koshish kar rahi thi par kuch bol nahi paa rahi thi...usake hooth puri tarah se sukh gaye the...
"nimrit ,mai tej aur drashti ko bulake laata hu"
kahate huye agam nimrit ke haatho se apana haath chudaane laga par usane dekha ki nimrit usase kuch kahana chahait hai ...nimrit usaka haath nahi chodana chahati thi... wo nahi chahati thi ki agam usake paas se kahi jaaye...agam ke presence me use secured mahsus ho raha tha...kyunki wo abhi bhi us haadase ko bhula nahi paayi thi...
agam nimrit ke paas hi baith gaya.
"nimrit agar mai jaaunga nahi to tej aur drashti ko kaise bulaunga ?
"usaki koi jarurat nahi hai" , tej aur drashti ne andar aate huye kaha.
agam ne chuak kar peeche dekha.
" hamaare dost humein yaad kare aur hum na aaye aisa ho sakata hai kya ???"
"nimrit tumhe hosh aa gaya isase jyaada khushi ki baat mere liye koi nahi hai" , drashti ne smile karate huye nimrit se kaha.
"haan nimrit hum bahut khush hai...", tej ne smile karake kaha.
"par ab tumhe jaldi se thik hona hai aur usake liye mujhe tumhara check up karana haga..." , drashti ne nimrit ka haath haatho me lete huye kaha.
cheack up ho jaane ke baad drashti ne nimrit ko kuch medicines di .
"chalo agam ab tum bhi jaakar fresh ho jaao...nimrit ko kuch derr aaram karana hoga...abhi bhi ye bahut weak hai andar se..." , tej ne agam kekandhe par haath rakhate huye kaha.
"thik hai"
tej aur drashti room se bahar chale gaye...
"mai jaldi aaunga nimrit tab tak tum aaram karo"
nimrit ne apani palake jhukaakar sahamati dedi. aur agam room se baahar nikal gaya...nimrit use jaate huye dekh rahi thi aur tab tak dekhati rahi jab tak wo usaaki room se bahar nahi chala gaya...
to be continued...
hamesha ki tarah aap sab ke comments ka intzaar rahega...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
so, finally Agam has accepted that he loves Nimrit with all his heart n soul... and now Nimrit too has regained conciousness...
wonder how the story progresses from here on... their love and romance will bloom henceforth ... waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
nice update archu, totally agree with charu, waiting for next update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
bahut acche se likha hai dea...😊

ur doing a gr8 job...👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
All my sweet friends charu ,hiri, and richa thank u very much for reading. Jald hi next update likhungi bahot jald.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Very Nice Update dear.👏

Agam's tadap when nimrit admitted in hospital was so beautifully written .👏

Waiting to read their love story taking off .😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: krithikas

Very Nice Update dear.👏


Agam's tadap when nimrit admitted in hospital was so beautifully written .👏

Waiting to read their love story taking off .😍

thanks a lot. Aur jo dard mai batana chahati thi wo tum tak pahoch gaya isase jyaada khushi ki baat kya hogi. Jald hi update karungi. Thanks again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Wow that was an awesome update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: lakshmi42

Wow that was anawesomeupdate👏

thank u so much lakshmi. Agala part kal post karungi.

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