AlaSmine FS: Revenge Part 7 updated on page 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
Lovely update Ananya ❤️❤️❤️
Am glad Aladdin instantly relized why Yasmine agreed to this wedding
Our Aladdin will surely steal away his Nachadii before her wedding
Eagerly waiting for tour next update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: AProudBookworm

Lovely update Ananya ❤️❤️❤️
Am glad Aladdin instantly relized why Yasmine agreed to this wedding
Our Aladdin will surely steal away his Nachadii before her wedding
Eagerly waiting for tour next update

Thanks for reading dear...
I am glad that you like it...
Definitely our kalachor will steal away his nachidii..
Will update soon...😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sanchita1410


Oh really. I am very much excited for the next part😉

Sorry dear for letting your excitement down...All over again...😭😭
Hectic schedule makes it impossible for me to take time and write But I somehow managed to update the next part...
Hope you will like it😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
Sorry for letting down your expectation dear...
I tried my best to take time to write but all my efforts was in veins...So sorry for the delay...
I have updated the part...Do read it and tell me how is it???😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65
Part 6

It was a bright morning...
Yasmine was sitting quietly in the corner of the bed...She was dressed in a muslim bridal wear but was not wearing any ornaments...Her cheeks red with Marks of tears flowing down...

Suddenly a lady entered her room...

Lady- suno!!!

Yasmine did not respond to her... She was sitting still and quite...

Lady- tumse koi milne aya hai...

Yasmine thought that it could be the chief or else his son...

Yasmine - mujhe kisi se nahi milna...

Lady left the camp...

A girl looking few years older than her entered the room... Her walking style was little weird.. Not like normal girls at least... Her chest was broad enough and breast seems to be too bigger than reality..

Yasmine - kon ho tum...

In a girly voice - ji mujhe mukhiya ji ne bheja hia... Aapko nikah ke liye tyaar Karane ke liye...

Yasmine - hume kisi ki zaroorat nahi... Hum khud tayaar ho jayenge... Aap jaa sakti hai...

Girl-itna gussa kis baat ka... Aapki shaadi toh itne "acche" ladke se ho rahi hai.. Ladki ko toh apne nikaah ke din khushi se jhoomna chahiye...

Yasmine -" accha "main toh usse jaanti tak nahi... Aur khushi... Meri khushi toh kisi ke saath chale gayi...

Girl-kiske saath...

Yasmine quickly answered - Aladdin..

Yasmine was no more able to control her emotions she cried... Tears of pain flowed down her cheeks...

Girl- agar aap uss... Kya naam bataya aapne... Aladdin se mohabbat karti hai... Toh usse bataya kyu nahi...

Yasmine - kaise... Batate.. Uske sar par to uss meher ka bhoot chada hua tha... Aur jab mauka mila tab tak der ho chuki thi... Vo jaa chuka hai...

Girl-kya vo khud gaya...

Yasmine - nahi... Humne hi kaha tha usse jaane ke liye... Hum uski jaan par aanch nhi aane de sakte the...

Girl-inti fikr... Agar vo abhi aapke samne hota toh aap kya karti...

Yasmine - Toh hum usse gale lagate, chumte aur zor se kehte Aladdin hum tumse beintehaan mohabbat karte hai...

Yasmine started crying... - par ab in bataan ka kya matlab...

Girl wiped her tears gently..

Girl- matlab toh hai... Vo bhi gehra... Itna gehra ki usme hum dono doob sakte hai Nachidii...

Girl bite her tongue...

Yasmine came out of her thoughts... As if she heard some familiar voice..

Yasmine - kya kaha tumne...

Girl - kuch bhi toh nahi...

Yasmine - nahi tumne abhi hume Nachidii kaha...
Girl-mujhe toh aisa kuch yaad nahi aa raha...

Girl turned around to run... But Yasmine pulled her dress cover...

She was shocked to see two oranges fell down...

She instantly looked at her and found a masculine bare chest... and she came to knew what these oranges was doing inside her dress cover...

Yasmine - tum.. Tum ladki nahi... Kon ho tum...

Yasmine put her small knife on his neck...

Yasmine took off her wig of long hairs... And was stunned to see Aladdin smiling at her...

Yasmine Aladdin tum!!!

Aladdin - haan main... Par agar tum yeh katar mere gale par yuhi rakhe rahi toh pata nahi kab tak zinda rahunga...

Yasmine move aback...

Aladdin - vaise tum iss nikaah ki poshaak mein mashallah laga rahi ho...

Yasmine full of anger-yeh mazaak ka samay nahi hai... Tumhe yaha nhai aan achahiye tha... Tumhe kuch

Aladdin pulled her and made her lean down...

Aladdin - bohot ho gaya Nachidii.. Ab tumne mere baare mein bohot soch liya aur kae liya... Ab meri baari hai...

Aur yeh baat kaan khol kar sun lo ki tumhaara nikaah ho ga to mujhse ya kisi se nahi... Kyoki hum dono ek dusre se mohabbat karte hai... Aur do mohabbat karne waalo ko duniya ki koi bhi taakat alag nahi kar sakti...

Hope you will like this part...I really apologizes for the delay...But was struck in the busy schedule...
Do comment like and tell me your opinion on this part..😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
Awesome!!!!!😳 loved it👏 plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
Such a Cutee Update it was Ananya 👍🏼 . Lovely one . Waiting for Next One
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Super duper part. Waiting for next. BTW currently in show also their love track is going on. So can totally imagine the scene
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
Lovely update Ananya ❤️
Aladdin dressing up as a women to talk to yasmine is so funny I could totally imagine that scene
And his declaration that only he is allowed to marry her because they love each other
Do update the next part as soon as you can
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Awesome!!!!! 😳 loved it👏 plz update soon

Thanks shirin for reading and commenting ...
Will update soon..😊

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