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Posted: 10 years ago
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One fine day
Written for Vibha OS Dare contest


She quietly tiptoed into the hall after hearing noises in the living room. She wondered if he was back yet. "Ahem..." he cleared his throat from the chair he was sitting. "Beta why are you sitting in the dark," she asked switching on the lights. He shot her an angry glare and she switched it off before hurrying to bed.


The next day morning, she slowly entered his room with two cups of coffee. "Vikram, get up. Was it so bad last night? I knew Sharda choice won't be right for you. But what to do we don't know what kind of girl you want to marry," she told her sleeping grandson. He immediately shot out of bed, "You all thought a good-looking socialite is whom I'll be compatible with?" Nani didn't understand what the problem was the girl, Neha was pretty, polite, from a good family. So what else does he want. She asked him directly for his preference.


Vikram took his cup from her and walked towards the window and said, "Nani, there was a time I wanted to marry a girl as radiant as the sun, whose smile lit up the entire room, a face I'll be glad to see the first the morning. But I tried that once. Such girls are just that, pretty faces nothing more. I want someone who is strong and fight for what she wants, someone who is persevering and works for our common happiness, yet someone who is sweet and cares about the people around her. You know Nani, she should be like a good cup of coffee. Strong enough to help me stand firm yet sweet enough to make me relax." Nani looked at him seriously and asked where he will find this coffee girl. He smiled back and walked out of the room, "Relax Nani, one fine day such might be standing right at the threshold of our home." Nani sighed as he walked towards the front door. Her grandson expected Love to walk in through the door. As if life is so kind.


He went to get the morning paper and was surprised with what he saw. It was just Shobha. But still it wasn't. She was smiling at him and held a bag in her hands. His mind registered that she was saying something. But his ears heard the words he spoke earlier to Nani. He realised that they fit Shobha. All the qualities he wanted in a woman were traits he admired the most about her. And she was just standing there at threshold of their home just like he joked. "How long will you take to get the paper?" Nani came looking for him. She saw the strange look in her grandson's eyes. It wasn't love, but it was interest. Interest in the woman standing before him. They had both been hurt through love but still believed in it. Maybe interest could blossom into something more.


Shobha realised that Vikram seemed a little lost. She waved her hand trying to get his attention, "Sir, Sir, are you alright?" He nodded, he was alright now. Everything about his life will be alright soon. She saw Nani and said, "Good morning Nani. It's Mom's birthday so I made Chole batura and phirni for breakfast. I brought some over for you both," she offered the bag to the smiling woman. Nani asked if they were not partying. Shobha replied Garima had made dinner reservations in Sharda's favorite restaurant and invited her and Vikram too. Nani agreed to come and nudged her grandson who was still tongue tied. Some coffee fell on his shirt.


"Coffee! Shobha coffee!" he shouted. The two women looked at him. He lowered his voice, "Would you like a cup of coffee?" She declined graciously saying she was heading to work early and work on her presentation. "My God, Shobha, it's seven in the morning. You're boss must be taskmaster to make you come so early," he commented with a twinkle in his eye. She decided that one cup wouldn't delay her that much. A few minutes later, he brought a piping hot cup of coffee. Nani teased saying he doesn't usually make coffee for anybody. "Of course, my coffee is special. Not everyone is lucky enough to start the day with Pinnacle's best brew."


Two years later, Vikram was making coffee for his lovely wife as she was hurrying to leave for work. "Would you like a cup of coffee?" he asked. She smiled at him before declining remembering the day they both decided to give love a second chance. "My God, Shobha, it's seven in the morning. You're boss must be taskmaster to make you come so early," he said his line. She laughed and asked if she should quit. He gave it a serious thought and replied, "Then you must have this cup. Pinnacle's coffee will never be the same without you." She took the cup nodding earnestly. As she turned to leave, he pulled her back gently and kissed her forehead, "Shobha, without you neither will I." She hugged him and admitted, "Nor I without you".

Edited by rithureuben - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Three cheers for Rithu !! Hip hip Hurray !!
it's raining os s in the dare thread .
I have only one question to the writer thoough.
where is the dare part ?? lol ! tum tho darpok nikli, hihi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Diana !
oh lovely. u r back. and u cannot possibly turn down a dare giving excuse of being busy.😆 no u have to produce something a bit daring. remember the conversation we had a few weeks back ! 😃 letz see, what are u serving. we shall wait.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@shreya_rc
What a genius idea!
I'm enjoying reading all the contributions! 👏 👏 👏

Since I'm a late entrant to this forum, I'm not sure if you're kidding about daring to imagine the romantic/intimate etc...Why ever not?!
Edited by whatthewhat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: whatthewhat

@shreya_rc

What a genius idea!
I'm enjoying reading all the contributions! 👏 👏 👏

Since I'm a late entrant to this forum, I'm not sure if you're kidding about daring to imagine the romantic/intimate etc...Why ever not?!


thank u for ur support.😃 and check ur PM, plz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya_rc

et tu ??myopic I mean 🤣 !!
i will come up with something around sunday night...that would be monday in India ! so Monday it is

Yep. 😎 🤣
Okay. I'll wait 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rithureuben

May, the second OS is very sweet. I always wondered if Vikram will stay away from Shobha is she is sick as he seemed to have OCD tendencies. But the reverse is quite interesting too.
Shreya, your OS is great. True to character right to the hair obsession. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Posting my entry now.
Happy weekend ladies.

Thanks 🤗
Your os is cute too😳 though nothing much daring in it as shreya said😉
Vikram would surely take care of Shobha if she falls sick. This banda forgets he has OCD when he is around Shobha😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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he forgets everything including himself when he is around sobha ! 😆
Edited by shreya_rc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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haha ! Awesome awesome.. Just back on forum for few mins.
Yet to read May's OS and Shreya Di's OS too!

Will try a hand at the given topic..intimate, eh? 😆

Hope so my college timings permit !😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OS - I Love You (For Vibha dare contest)

Shobha tried to concentrate on her work, scolding her mentally, but unable to do so, she looked up at Vikram who was intent on staring at her. Not understanding what was his problem she huffed and went to stand infront of him "What's your Problem sir?"

Vikram raised his eye brow "Meri Problem? I didn't say I have any problem, nor I am screaming at top of my lungs Arey Shobha, I am in a trouble, please help me'. "

Shobha sighed " Sir, enough of sarcasm, now tell me whats the matter?"

Vikram spoke silently "You?"

"Me?"

"Yes You! Mrs.Shobha Sachdev What I want to know is, why are you running away from truth, why are you intent on living a lie. Why are you still pining for that man, who tortured you. That idiot kameena, who didn't even wait for two days after divorce before marrying another rich girl. Why are you denying it? "

Shobha turned back as if to leave and mumbled " You won't understand Vikram"

Vikram now angry grabbed her hand and pulled her back, making her fall on to his chest " I doesn't understand? Shobha I am watching you for past 1 year. Enough to say that I changed a lot because of you. Why are you doing this? Why aren't you moving on. And why are you asking me to Move on?"

Shobha tried to get away from him, but Vikrams grip was stronger. Shobha struggled You are hurting me vikram"

"You are also hurting me Shobha? I know you love me why are you denying it?"

Shobha has tears in her eyes " Aap meri burin aadat ho sir, jiske bina main jee nahi saktha, lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki, main aap se kuch relation form kar sakti hoon. Its practically impossible sir."

"Oh really Shobha, and can you enlighten me the reason why its practically not possible?"

" I am a married woman who has two kids , I hve my family of whom I need to take care of. But you are a bachelor, and a very good man. You deserve better and you need to get a family of your own. "

Vikram seethe, How can he make her understand. He sighed and crushed his lips on hers. At first she was shocked, but slowly she too started to respond. After a moment he pulled away from her and spoke " Shobha! You are my family. Don't you see in the last one year my life was so much interwined with yours that, you became my family Shobha, your kids who treat me as their father and your mother who nurtures me as his own child. They became practically my family Shobha. I know you love me. What happened now was Proof of that. You complete me Shobha. With out you, my life its incomplete and I don't want to live that life. "

Shobha was looking at him with tears in her eyes but along with tears there are loe and adoration too.

He came near her and spoke " I love you Shobha. I want to give you all the happiness that I can. Will you marry me ?"

Shobha nodded as she smiled and they both hugged . She moved her hands through his silky hair and smiled , yes he was right, she completes him in the way he completes her. There's no necessity to fear about any society or such things. He is her Prince charming as Garu used to tease her. She unknowingly got tears in her eyes and Vikram teased her " Don't ruin my shirt Shobha sachdev"

Shobha smiled as she wrapped her arms around his neck "Mr. Vikram Ahuja, you will never get rid of your khadoos ness"

Vikram mock glared at her , but as she started to laugh he smiled and spoke "Thank you.."

Shobha understanding why he is saying repeated "Thank you Vikram.Thanks for every thing"


PS: I know this is not that good.. But I wouldlike to know the views of you people and also, I would like to read your criticisms. So please do comment 😉


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