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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Everyone !!

It is no secret that this tiny, productive forum is a hub of highly talented writers...the analytical posts, the stories, the humorous comments, the fun posts are proofs that we may have less members in comparison to some hyper-active forums but there is absolutely no dearth of talents here.A lot of OSs have been written and I have noticed a familiar pattern in them. Almost every story is positioned in the safe side, maintaining the thin line between friendship and love, careful not to muddle it😃
During a very interesting controversial discussion with Diana and May, a very evil maggot got inside my head and since then making me rest less to Pull a Dare amongst all OS writers in the forum.
Dare to think beyond the friendship fence, dare to think something intimate about the pair even if it appears like committing a sin, even it itches you to bang ur head in the wall for even harboring such unperdonable thoughts about Vikram-Sobha !! i know the feeling trust me...it is damn so easy to imagine anything any random telly couple of say Yeh Hai Mohhabattein or Humsafars, or anything I have watched before or watching now. All except this classy duo !! It feels like better dunk yourself in freezing cold water and numb your brain than to think LOL intimate about them.

...looking dreamily into each other eyes, yaah fine.
...hands accidentally touching. sure !
...hand holding ? well, ya, maybe !
...hugging ? O my. I am not sure.
...peck in cheek? what ?? wait. no I absolutely am liking the direction of your thoughts. Stop right there !!
😆

Isnt this way our brains are programmed in Vibha's case. I am sure it is. all the os s written here reflect it. But then how can a writer thrive without stretching his/her imagination ??

So I here, dare the writers of the forum to spread the wings of their imagination s and peek into the unexplored territories of Vibha Relationship and write something romantic, intimate, comfortable close physical proximity...Think what u have never dared to think before.
And accept my challenge. And pen down some wonderful dreamy vivha moments.
Let me assure u, I do not ask hot , erotic os s. they have to dignified subtle yet close.


May, Diana, Rithu, Nancy !!
I know u can do this easily..so pick up ur pens asap and start scribbling furiously.

your time starts NOW !

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow treat for readers like me waiting eagerly for more n more Vibha os cant hold my excitement
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sweta !
thank u sweety. And yes u can join in too. write down an OS and post it here.or you can post in the forum and paste the link here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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... ... ...
ok, so my part in crime :



A Late Night Affair : ViBha OS ( Written for Vibha Dare OS contest )



Tears streamed down her eyes against her wishes as she waved Jiya nd Rehan goodbye for a month long summer camp. they would be all by their own so far away,her mother's heart squeezed in painfully...but they really never got chance to be in nature,always confined in four walls,suffocated by overprotective parental love...all those campings,trekking,swimming would do good for them. optimism kicked in as she blew kisses to her sweethearts for the last time while the door shut close,the bus blew horn and the engine started with a jerk.10 feet away, Ketan and Riddhima were mouthing last minute advices to their six years old daughter who was clearly giddy with excitement .to be all alone by herself for the first time,that was definitely a happening!

Vikram was also standing nearby talking to Mahesh while gliding fingers through his hair absentmindedly.he looked different...much older,she wondered why. was that because of the unbecoming color of his shirt or that his hair...OMG!! Hair!! His hair! How did it happen! Sobha gasped and eyed all around to distract herself.She turned her head to catch the eye of sharika who was sobbing her eyes out on the shoulder of abhay.Alok,her son had gone too. As she watched the scene,something felt not right, inside her head...what was it?? Wasnt Abhay...what...dead?? She tried to reign her confused brain when a mascular arm surrounded her cozily as a whisper,long familiar, a voice..." lets go home,love.shall we?",came in form of a smiling Samarth Sachdev,one eyebrow raised in question...right hand extended towards her.

"NO".shobha screamed and bolted upright,eyes snapped open at the same time.She clutched her heart which was thudding like a running steam engine and her neck,forehead felt cold and clammy with perspiration.It all felt so real.That same nightmare had visited her again.would they never let her be at peace with the present? Would they never set her free? Frowning deeply, shobha got up and walked to the nightstand to pour herself a glass of cold water and clear her mind. Did she need counseling?

"Same dream once again. Is it?"shobha startled and few errant drops splashed into the rich persian rug beneath her feet. " Good God! Shobha! Your face needs water spray,my carpet does not.u look...nightmarish!!"shobha shook her head amused and unknowingly left a sigh of relief as looked into the eyes of her husband. mock anger hooded with sly merriment danced into them.
She downed a glass of water in one breath and sat down to her side of the bed.Feeling his questioning glance still upon her,she nodded quietly. A shiver run down her spine as she recalled that appalling dream...after so many replays she seemed to remember every tiny details of it and yet each time it showed something different...just like the daily soaps' plot-- all same thing again and again with an added twist every time.

"where are u lost now?" Vikram snapped fingers in front of her eyes and smiled.she could not smile back; the images hung thick in her head,so vivid,so startingly alive.he took off his glasses and pinched the bridge of his nose shaking his head. "shobha,shobha,shobha...listen!!'', he continued in a soft melodious tone pulling her into his arms staring deeply into her melting dark chocolate orbs,"it was just a dream,ok?"

"oh,but it was horrible,terrible," shobha complained trying to block out the disturbing images. "what? Terrible? Or do mean terrific?','vikram laughingly teased as he played with a long wavy lock with his index finger."it was so strange but looked so real. Ketan and riddhima were together,married and even had a daughter.sharika was with Abhay,he was very much alive.Samarth was still my husband and we were seeing off our children to their summer camp. Ur hair...". Vikram stiffened and pulled shobha away at arms length eyeing her intently,"what about my hair?"

" you would be too depressed to hear about it." she pouted and let her fingers touch those those very much still existing silky strains.exhaustion overwhelmed her and yawning she slumped into his shoulder,shifting her weight onto him.It felt so secure,so right and cozy...his breath fanning her hairs,his warmth seeping into her,his arms keeping her safe and the strong thudding of his heart lulling her to sleep.

" The story has too many loopholes to be real...so many flaws in plotline and yet realistic? You must be watching too many hindi serials,haa?". Shobha jerked her head in surprise when vikram started talking all of a sudden.she was almost asleep! " riddhima is still married to that poor excuse of her husband.sharika,oh well,that wonderful talented ex-girlfriend of mine has ultimately achieved her dreamlife and must be enjoying everymoment of her life partying in... ...jail",vikram's playful voice hardened during the last part and he gripped shova's hand with unintended force. "yes, u r right, too many holes for a convincing story",shobha burst into a dazzling smile intending to veer his mind away from the unpleasant direction it was taking. And this time too it succeeded. Vikram's eyes softened immediately and he stared dreamily, bathing in the sunshine her smile poured out.He knew this old trick of hers, she had used it many times before yet gave in like always.

"And we attended Avni's civil marriage with her divorce lawyer Ketan Mehta last month,if u care to remember", he continued in a light jocular spirit while settling his head down comfortably in Shobha's lap. He sprawled his feet unceremoniously upon orderly arrayed pillows,set one of them flying accidentally." who would have thought these two were seeing each other in secret all the while.i somehow guessed after a while but that is beside the point", vikram added quickly not letting shobha fuss over the truant pillow. Shobha caught his mischief and smiled inwardly.she tenderly guided vikram's head to an adjacent pillow and prepared to go to bed herself once again.

this time it would be a pleasant sleep she was sure. vikram snuggled her from behind burying his face into her lavender scented hair,she felt his beard tickling his neck deliberately and tried to sniffle the giggle threatening to burst out any moment. The children were sleeping in the next room. What if they woke up from the noise! "take a deep breathe in,think something happy and close your eyes." vikram murmered against her ear,"Think of me...u will have a fantastic sleep. ok?". Shobha patted his intertwined arm and whispered goodnight. Just was she about to close her eyes,vikram jerked up," hey wait. Tell me what happened to my hair??"



Edited by shreya_rc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sure, I'll give it a short but no promises. Shreya, May post your stories first.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was waiting for this thread😃😉
Thanks Shrey! 🤗
All writers, members of Adhy, I urge you to make your brains work and start scribbling asap. 😃

Okay, here's my entry😛
Edited by SuperChillz1 - 10 years ago
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( Written for ViBha OS dare contest)

He could feel the softest of melodies emerging as the bow glided over the golden strings of a violin. Over intricately carved pillars and ceiling, amber lanterns hung low casting their rays ominously to create a very ambient atmosphere. Huge french windows adorned the simple walls spray painted to a shade of intense bisque.
Through the glass, he could see the eiffel tower carve its way up in to the night sky, decked up in millions of lights.

Everything was as Vikram would have wished for. Simple yet elegant.

Just like her.

He shook his head. This restaurant felt too fancy, maybe and - how hard he tried to refrain those thoughts from invading his excited mind - romantic. Or probably he wasn't accustomed to having such elaborate dinners. He was sitting in one of the finest restaurants serving the best flavors of French cuisine.

His eyes perceived Shobha who was gracefully draped in a faint pink shaded saree embellished with golden silk threads. Her smile exuded such immense happiness, he felt complete.

It was all too sudden. He always wanted to come to the city of Love, but never in His dreams he thought it to be with Shobha.

It's such a wonderful place, Vikram. Oh Jasmines! " Shobha smiled fondling the flowers and continued. "I am so happy...!"

He nodded. He had to admit, he wasn't much interested in the decors. He preferred observing the most different and beautiful woman in his life. Jasmines were specially for her.

" They all look so lovely! " she said.
Young couples danced artistically as the instruments complimented each other with harmonious tunes.

" Yes. Of course. " He took a sip of wine and got up. Adjusting his cimmerian coat, he held out his hand. "Will you dance with me? "

"Are you serious? I can't dance..."

He smiled slyly "Neither can I."
"But before that, I want you to know something... " he hesitated.

Her heart skipped a beat as she took his hand.

With delicacy, he picked a jasmine flower from the vase resting on the table and held out to her. She raised her eyebrows as sweet fragrance of fresh jasmines captivated their nervous hearts.

" You are promoted. " He blurted out.

"Huh? "

" CEO, Pinnacle Industries. "

With his words coming as a surprise, a big smile appeared on her face as his words took time to comprehend themselves. She took the jasmine, her fingers lightly brushing against his and burst out laughing.
" Oh Vikram, tell me frankly, You were looking for an opportunity to say those three words, weren't you? I almost ruined your moment..!"

He had to agree. He felt different today regardless of the fact.

"Alright, alright.You look beautiful with your laugh lines more prominent." he laughed, whole heartedly, accepting his defeat at being unable to mask his nervousness.

"Same applies to you!" Shobha chided as they walked over to the dance floor.

Her eyes emanated innocence and immense joy that could calm any anxious heart. Like a fierce storm, she had invaded his calm and lonely life, shaking his foundations to the core. She was the only person who believed he could change, who believed he could love again.

He held her close, his arms resting on her waist as she wound her hands around his neck.

"Vikram. I am fine being your secretary. Really. No wait. I'll prefer being a homemaker first. "

They swayed along the soft music.

"Oh, Come on Shobha! With you being promoted, some responsibilities will be off my shoulders. I can spend more time with family. "

"Family? What about me? And kids?!"

"Jiyu-Reehu prefer Naani's company more, " said Vikram, a playful smile on his lips. "They'll be munching on French food right now and sightseeing. And about you.. Well..." He trailed off.

She thought for a second, "Yeah. Right."
" But I haven't accepted this position yet. You have to convince me to. " she grinned.

"Hah. We'll talk about it later. Let us enjoy our moment, Mrs. Ahuja. "
Shobha smiled, resting her head on his shoulder as they danced over a wonderful evening in Paris.

Edited by SuperChillz1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rithureuben

Sure, I'll give it a short but no promises. Shreya, May post your stories first.

Sure. Do try to write😊
i have already posted it.
Edited by SuperChillz1 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuperChillz1


Sure. Do try to write😊
i have already posted it.


I just read it. It was so beautiful. Just the kind of life, I want for Vibha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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May,
oh thank u ... maza agaya ! are head pe likho bhi in bracket '' For ViBha Os Dare Contest . tab aur jhakkas lagega.

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