Fanfic: Fatal attraction (chapter 2) AkYa

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2

Ananya rushed to her room smiling to herself like never before. 'So dinner with Akash?' She questioned herself. 'Kabhi sucha bhi nai tha captain akash saluja ki bhi funny side hogi.' She laughed thinking about Akash. 'Anyways now have to decide what to wear.' She opened her suitcase and started to think about she wants to wear.
Akash
Akash walked into his room and sat on his bed, he couldn't help but think of the hug. He hadn't felt this happy for a long time. 'Ananya itni bhi buri nai hai waise.' He thought to himself and a big smile appeared on his face. Let's see what I should wear.
At the hotel
Akash sat down at his table and looked around. 'Wonder where Ananya is its 6pm.' Akash though to himself.
Just then he heard heels coming tor he looked up and saw Ananya like never before. 'Wow she looks damn good!' Akash though to himself. Ananya was dressed in a black and red dress with her hair let down. 'Hello captain.. I mean Akash.' She smiled. Akash kept staring at Ananya. 'Akash?' Ananya Nudged him. 'Oh sorry, hey Ananya.' said Akash while still staring at her in awe. 'You okay Akash?' Questioned Ananya. 'You look very bueaitful.' Answered Akash. 'Oh, thank you Akash.' Ananya could feel her blushing. 'Dont worry I am not hitting on you!' said Akash with a wink and a naughty smile. 'Oh please Akash.' Smiled Ananya. Akash and Ananya ordered the food.

After finishing food
'Damn, the food was great here but I am too full.' Akash sighed. 'Want to go for a walk?' Asked Ananya. Akash looked at Ananya and they made eye contact and none of them could look away...

Precap
Both walked down the street and there was silence, just then Ananya tripped and and Akash saved her..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have been eagerly waiting for your update thank you so much! Cannot wait for the next part! Lol can totally imagine this! Please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
It's lovely but it's short
Next time plzz make it little longer
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
awesome dear.
But plz continue the FF in one thread /post ... or u can give the link of the previous part in ur latest post. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey this is nice,hmm where is the link to your first link dear?? Very nice thought 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
This was year another cute update Dude!

I am seriously loving the way your giving us little snippets. They are so damn adorable. Expecially with Akash's restlessness and Ananya's pondering over what to wear. It's really cute!

I love Ananya deciding what to wear. It was nice. It comes naturally to us girls to look good when it's a special occasion. And omg...She wore a red and black dress. That sounds like a really good combination! I personally lit it very much..it has the sensuous look to it. Haha.

And well well well. Look at Akash being all restless and impatient. Well patience is a virtue...and kehta gain saber ka phal meetha hota hai. Well his was sweet and killer. 😆 I loved how he just couldn't get his eyes off Ananya. That was such a cute scene. Well love does that to people. Ahem ahem. Kuch Kuch ho raha hai...

Ananys had to nudge him to get his attention. Wow he has fallen hard for her. It so cute and romantic. Hayeee... And...what compliment he gave her about looking beautiful that whole time I was smiling. I am serious. 😃 And yeah sure...you're totally not hitting on her. Haha. Naughty naughty Akash I tell you.

Awww that eye lock at the end. That was definitely the highlight. I can totally imagine them eyeing each other in that romantic way. *Sigh* Love I tell you!

And Omg I am excited for the next update. Muhaha. Their walk and Ananya falling...Akash saving her. Oh my god...is there going to be another eye lock??? Omg I can't wait. Please please update soon!

And I am so glad you continued this. And I would like to make another suggestion...if you don't mind...
please please make the updates longer of possible...and...maybe trying keeping all of them in one place...

Sorry I know I have been bugging you with suggestions...but you know..it's easier that way...but...it's your call...don't fell like I am forcing you are anything! hehe 😳

But yeah this second pice was just...excellent and fantabulous! Keep writing.

And update soon Loved it...veryyy much

Love Nabi ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Very nice update .. Please can you post it in one thread for story continuity
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
short but nice update...😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Amazing 👏
Update soon and pm me😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
hello friends. . I'm new here. .. :)
love this story. .
can anyone give me the link of the next part. .

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