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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
thanks for the awesome update dear. loved the confession soo much .really you have written it soo wonderfully. so now they are stuck in the fort for the whole night. loved their Maggie scenes soo much .thanks a lot for such a awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

After they had finished eating.
Trisha looking worried..."Raghav hum yahan par poori raat kaise kaatenge...? Thand toh badti jaa rahi hai"
Raghav-"Wo sab mujhe pe chodo..chalo mahal ke garden mein walk karne chalete hain...iss full moon day par toh aur bhi jyaada khoobsurat hogaya hoga ...!!"
He helps her to climb out.
Trisha...rubbing her arms..."mujhe thand lag rahi hai.."
Raghav-"apni saaree ko aod lo."
He turns to close the shutter of the shop.
She struggles and removes the safety pin holding the saaree,At the very moment Raghav turns and a strong gush of cool breeze blow her pallo exposing her blouse. She stares at him embarrassed struggling with it trying hard to put it over. Raghav comes forward and put it over her shoulder. During the entire process she looks at him with love and respect. He puts it around her and gently tucks one side of it on her waist. Then goes forward for a kiss, but just kisses her on the forehead.."Ab better hain...?" Trisha nods.
They both walk in the palace enjoying each, others company in this beautiful place which seemed exclusively reserved for them.
They go and sit on the banking wall of the fountain.
Both were lost in the beauty of the place. The full moon's light falling on the royal walls created a different atmosphere altogether.Raghav breaking the silence-"Inn mahalon kii baat hi kuch aur hain naa...waise tum mujhe thanks bol sakti hoo...aakhir meri wajah se hii tumhe itna khoobsurat scene dehkne ko mil raha hai..!"
Trisha looks towards him with attitude..."Thank u Mr.Raghav Sinha...ek sunsaan mahal mein sardi ki raat mein...thand mein itni khoobsurati dikhane ke liye..."sarcastically smiles. Raghav also smiles.
Trisha..."Ab poori raat yahin bethe rahange kyaa..???"
Raghav "nahi chalo...chalk e soote hain..!"
Trisha.."Kahan..?"
Raghav..."Raja ke exclusive bedroom mein"
Trisha-"Raghav you have lost it completely."
Raghav.."Arey chalo toh.."
Raghav takes her to one of the many courtyards of the palace where there was a open round room. A mattress with pillows, had been spread out. It was kept for demonstrating how the room used to look in those days.
(It was actually there when I had been to this place.)
Trisha-"Raghav tum naa poore pagal hog aye ho yahan aake...aaj tumne bahut saare rules thode par r u serious hum yahan kaise...?"
Raghav.."Humare paas iske alava option kya hain...!"
Trisha was shivering though she din't show much which was worrying Raghav...he had read the previous days temp had been 10 and there was chance that it would fall even more today.
But he kept the atmosphere light so that he would deviate her thoughts.
Raghav-"Who dehko...pointing towards a small mandir on the courtyard wall which had lord ganesha's statue ..."Ab toh baape ne bhi haan boldiya chalo.."
Trisha sees him and nods having no other option.

After sometime:

Both were sitting on the mattress opposite to each other.
Trisha "Raghav bahut thand lag rahii haii...tumhe nahi lag rahi kya..?"
Raghav-"..haan thodi lag rahi hai..." he was actually feeling very cold.
He looks around and thinks for a while.Then getting up "tum yahin raho main yun gayaa aur aayaa".
He goes back and gets a small log of wood and lights it up and places it on the holder above the pillar of the room.
Raghav-"tumhe pata hain puraane dinno mein aise hi hua karta tha.."
She smiles, still feeling cold.
After few mins, she starts shivering more and Raghav goes and hugs her and sits. Trisha understands.
They were in each other embrace and still feeling cold, especially trishsa.
Raghav was worried and started rubbing her back.
He found himself slowly loosing control, they were literally glued together.
Trisha was still cold but lost in his thoughts...
Few mins. Passed and yet Trishas shivering din't stop.
Both looked at each other. A thought crossed Raghav's mind but he rejected it, knowing that it would be against Trisha's principles.
But he was too worried for her.
Raghav.."Abhi thand lag rahi hai.."
She nods in a yes.
He unbuttons his shirt, Trisha looks at him shocked.
Raghav-"Mujhe pe bharosa hain naa..?" She just nods in affirmation.
He slowly removes her saare pullo and pulling her close to his bare chest wraps the saaree around the 2 of them.
Both felt the warmth. One hour had passed when they had started shivering more...she held his shoulders tightly gripping him more and more...due the cold.

Raghav just couldn't see her going pale. With much difficulty he hesitantly spoke..."Trisha tum mujhse shaadi karna chathi hoo..?"
Trisha surprised looked at him..."...haan.."
Raghav with a very serious expression..."Tum iske baare mein sure hoo...kya hum abhi shaadi kar sakte hain.."
Trisha was initially shocked at his question and them realisation dawned her, he was doing it for her.
Trisha-"Raghav tumhe mere liye yeh..."
Raghav-"Mera sab kuch tum hoo..."
They shared an eye-lock.Their eyes spoke the depth-of-love of their hearts.
He slowly adjust her saaree makes her get up and quickly buttoning his shirt holds her close and walks towards the small temple in the courtyard.
He sees mud lamp with very little oil and a half burnt wig. He lights it and takes the kumkum on his fingers and fills her maang, only after ensuring that she was okay with it.
Raghav-"Main Bhagwaan aur Agni ko Saakshi maan kar tumhe apni patni bana raha hoon aur vaada karta hoon tumhe humesha kush rakhoonga aur humesha tumhaari raksh karoonga."
Trisha smiled and had tears of joy in her eyes.
After her parents death in a car accident 3 years back, she now felt that their was someone whom she could call her own.
They hugged. He took her back and they consummated their marriage.
Trisha's happiness knew no bounds how could he care for her, for her principles even in such a situation.
It was the most beautiful night of her life.
They kept themselves warm with the physical intimacy throughout the night.

P.S
Hope you all like this one too.
Please do leave your encouraging comments and reviews.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
thanks for the update dear off to read it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

thanks for the update dear off to read it


Happy reading 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Such a wonderful update Anika
Both of them roaming in garden in the full moon night
I liked how Raghav covered Trisha when her Saree felled of and kissed her forehead
Both of them sharing a room due to circumstances
Both of them hugging due to cold and then body warmth
Even after all this when Trisha fell sick he married her how sweet
😳
I would really love to read a sequel of this story if u r ok with it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Az07

Such a wonderful update Anika
Both of them roaming in garden in the full moon night
I liked how Raghav covered Trisha when her Saree felled of and kissed her forehead
Both of them sharing a room due to circumstances
Both of them hugging due to cold and then body warmth
Even after all this when Trisha fell sick he married her how sweet
😳
I would really love to read a sequel of this story if u r ok with it


Thanks..😊

Ek update bhaaki hai...

Waise how was your exam..?
Done with all..??
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: annikaa



Thanks..😊

Ek update bhaaki hai...

Waise how was your exam..?
Done with all..??



Oh that's great I thought this is last part
Exam was great went well yes at the moment it's all over
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Az07



Oh that's great I thought this is last part
Exam was great went well yes at the moment it's all over


Nice...
Happy freedom until next...😆
Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Such a awesome story dear .read all the chapters at the same time. It's soo awesome soo romantic. Loved it a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Such a awesome story dear .read all the chapters at the same time. It's soo awesome soo romantic. Loved it a lot



Thanks..
😊

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