New Ratri FS 'Addicted To You..' Authors Note on page 8(22-

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The team was in Amer palace in Amer near Jaipur Rajasthan.
Raghav and Trisha were undercover. Trisha was dressed in a simple saree.While
Raghav was dressed in a simple white crisp shirt with denims. The criminal was
caught and Rajbir and Bikram were asked to take the criminal to Delhi
immediately by the next flight. While Raghav and Trisha had to stay back in
Jaipur for formalities and were scheduled to return the following day at 10am.



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After Rajbir and Bikram leave.

They were standing at the highest terrace of the palace, they had reached their
chasing the criminal.

Trisha-"Chalo Hum bhi nikalte hain."

Raghav-"Trisha itna sundar palace hain ab Delhi se hum log roz yahan nahi
aayenge toh pls...tohdi sii sightseeing kar le..."

Trisha-"Paagal ho kya..iss saare main sight seeing..."

Raghav-"Dont worry tum bahut sundar lag rahi hoo...bilkul iss mahal kii rajkumari
kii tarah...please please..."

Trisha melts seeing his pleading face and agrees."Chalo jaldi ek ghante mein
yeh mahal bandh ho jaayega."

They were both in awe for the beautiful architecture of the
palace.

As they were moving through small tunnel like passages...Trisha.."I don't understand
ek jagah se doosre jagh jaane ke liye itne patle passages kyun banvaye raja ne...wo
bhi covered...aisa lag raha hai ki kisi goofa mein hai..."

Raghav-"Goofa mein aisi jarhiyaa nahi hoti...aur naa hi itni
beautifully carved windows...Yeh hi toh beauty hai inn jagahon kii.."

Trisha was ahead and Raghav behind her.As she was about to step out of the
passage into the courtyard she did not notice the step and was about to fall. When
Raghav hols her arm from behind and prevents her from falling. But he grips the
upper part of her arm and to balance her puts his arm around her exposed waist.

They share a minute of awkward eyelock , Trishas heart beats
increase as she feels his hand on her waist. Raghav.."Boss dehke "

Trisha-"hmm.."

Raghav leaves her seeing her feel awkward.

They move ahead in silence. Until Raghav's eye falls on a restricted area
board. A idea comes to his mind.."Trisha.."

He indicates towards the restricted area .Trisha
understanding what he is impling.."Soch naa bhi mat..Ek responsible officer hokey
tum ek palace mein rules todoge..."aur waise hi palace ke bandh honey ka samay
hain humme nikalna chaiye...warna yahin par rahe jaayenge"

Raghav-"Trisha please hum jaldi se explore karke aa jayenge kitna maaza aayega...please
kabhi kabhi toh life mein rules todo trust me bahut maza aata hain...aur tum bhi
uss stupid aatma waali story par believe karti ho kya...6 baje ke baad yahan raja
aur unki raaniyon ki aatma aati hai.."

Trisha..."No way.."

Raghav-"toh chalo...trust me bahut maaza aayega...please"

Trisha sees around and finds no one around everyone was moving towards the exit,
"Theek hain chalo jaldi..."

They slowly move to that part of the palace, making sure no
one sees them.

It was just same as the other parts but
was more dusty and old and just had a small courtyard an room...which was
locked and empty as seen from the window outside..They both explored the
drawings on the wall..Raghav then opened the room when trisha was busy admiring
the paintings on the wall.

Raghav whispers and calls trisha..she goes into the room ,it
was dusty and empty...He calls goes near the small balcony which was at the rear
end of the palace.. they both look at the amazing view...!!

trisha-"yeh toh sabse best view hain ..."

Raghav;"Mein ne kaha thaa na mazaa ayega..."

Trisha looks at him and then turns back to admire the beauty."I wonder why
issko bandh rhaka hain.."

Raghav-"Kyunki iss balcony kii height dehki hain..bahut riski hain..issliye..!!

Trisha sees. She was bending overand looking over the other side with her back
to raghav. The cool breeze was blowing such that her hair flew to one side. Raghav
couldn't help but notice her deep dori blouse exposing her back. He so wanted
to touch her. After a minute's stare he took all the control he had and turned
towards the back and moved slightly away before his hands would be traitors to his control and servants to his
thoughts.

Raghav-"Chale yaa yahin par rahne kaa iradaa hai.."

Trisha-"Yeh palace kitna khoobsurat hain...yahan kii raaniyan kitni lucky thii.."

As they were going back..to the other part of the palace...

Raghav-"Hmmm...lekin raja kitna lucky thaa uske paas palace bhi thaa aur..(going
closer to her ) khoobsurat raniyaan bhi ...wo bhi ek nahi kaii "*winks at her...

Trisha nods her head..."tumhe bhi kaaii raaniyan chaiye kya...?"

Raghav looking at her amused...then going close.."Ek mil jaaye wo hi kaafi hain"

Trisha smiles trying hard to hide her blush.

As they were about step out of the restricted area Raghavs sharp eyes see a
guard and he quickly slightly pushes trisha to a corner wall and then hides
too..such that Trisha iss pinned between him and the stone wall..he cover her
mouth and indicates her to see towards the guard.

She sees him and nods and indicates him to remove the hand ,he obeys.

They were standing so close that their breaths were fanning the other. Raghav
found himself losing his control again while Trisha had butterflies in her
stomach due their closeness.

They had stayed like that staring at each other even after the guard had left.

Raghavs thoughts..."Aaj aisa kya hain pata nahi...aaj dil kar
raha hain tumhe dil mein chupi har baat batadoon...bhoothon ka pata nahi lekin
kuch toh hai iss jagah mein jo mujhe tumhare aur kareeb le jaa raha hain."

Finally realising,that the guard has left he moves apart.

Little did they know that the guard had come for the closing
check to ensure no one was trapped in this huge palace...



P.S

Hope u all like this.

I wanted to post pics of the interiors of the palace here so that you could
relate to the story but couldn't.

I think it would be available on google , do check if u want to.

Please do comment.

Will try post the next part today itself.

Please excuse me for the error if any.😃

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

such a awesome update dear .loved it soo much it's sooo cute .really could imagine each and every scene .you have narrated it soo wonderfully. simply loved Ratri romance .thanks for such a awesome story dear

Originally posted by: Rr2000

Hey annikka it's really fabulous
I have to say u are d owner of all d romance confined in their stories...
And sorry dear for not posting ishqbaaziyan part 1 as i was a bit busy in my coachings...

As they move out they don't realise the fact that the palace was almost closed down, both were lost in thoughts of their own.
Trisha's thoughts...raghav I m waiting for that day, jab tum apni dil ki baat mujhse kahoge wo meri zindagi kaa best din hoga.
Raghav's thoughts-Kaise baataun..yahan baataun... haan yahan ussey jagha pasand hain...aur thoda different bhi hoga..!

As they were moving, they see the sheesh mahal...both just love it.
An idea strikes his head.He hold Trisha's hand and takes her beyond the rope inside the sheesh mahal..
Trisha-"Raghav tum phir se rules todh rahe hoo..."
Raghav-"Bas do min.."
He takes her to the centre of the Sheesh mahal and makes her stand their. Gathering courage he speaks.
"Yahan ka har mirror mein sirf hum hain dehko.."

She sees in awe. He goes down on his knees
"Trisha I love You...I know ek dum se yahan iss tarah...magar...I Love You..."
Trisha with a smile on her face and moisture in her eyes..
"I love you too.."
She makes him stand..and both hug...each mirror reflecting the love they had for each other.
"Iss se beautiful proposal tum mujhe de nahi sakte thee...I love You Raghav..."
Raghav smiles. She smiles. And again they get lost in each other.
After what seemed eternity to both..they came apart and moved closer and his lips touched hers and he pulled her closer to himself, her heart slammed against her ribs. Before she could think he deepened the kiss. She surrendered and went on her toes and dug her fingers in his hair.
Finally they came apart she was too shy to meet his eyes and looked everywhere except him.
He ran his fingers through his hair smiling.

Thankfully the palace dint have cctv cameras he thought smiling.
Trisha after composing herself with lot of effort..."Chalee ..".
He smiling "hmmm..".
Neither of them spoke. As they moved out their hands entangled. As they moved towards the exit both of them were shocked to see the exit closed. They looked at each other. He went to the wooden door and peeked through the slit only to find the metallic gate outside it also shut. He was shocked but masked his expression. She also looked and was terrified.

She looked at him.."Ab kyaa...?"
Raghav-"Arey tum Boss ho, toh tum bataogi aage kya"
Trisha "yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hain Mr. Raghav Sinha...tumhe hii sight-seeing karni thi...tumhe hi adventure sooj raha thaa..aur tummhe hi abhi propose karna tha...!!"
Raghav-"Yah acha hai tumne sab mein mera saath diya...aur sab enjoy kia...aur ab ilzam mere par daal rahi ho.."(smiling mentally)

Trisha gives him her typical stare..."Mujhe apna phone do.." extends her hand.
Raghav looking with attitude..."bhool gayi mera phone struggle karte samay upar se gir gaya thaa...Apna use karo.." points to her slim clutch in hand.
Trisha worried..."Mere paas phone nahi hai.." pointing towards the clutch "tumhe lagta hai issmein phone fit bhi hota.."
Raghav looking in disbelief..."Toh kahin aur rakh leti par rakh ti toh..."
Trisha.."Kahan rak thii apne sar pe..?" looking irritated.
Raghav..to irritate her more.."Wahin jahan ladies rakthi hai.."
Trisha-"Tum ...tum pagal ho...mobile kaisee...chee...whatever...ab what next"
Raghav.."mazaak kar raha thaa...ab kya itna khoobsurat palace hain yahin par raat guzar te hain.."
Trisha:Raghav r u out of ur mind..!!"...starts screaming for help...
Raghav -"koi phayada nahii...koi nahi sunne wala...sabko lagta hain yahan bhoot bhatakte hain.
Trisha gives a worried expression. Raghav to lighten her mood.."Tum mat daron main hoon naa..!
Trisha turning towards him.."ofcourse tum jahan hote ho problem wahan hoti hai...Pehl;e nahii propose kar sakte the kya..."
Raghav giving a confused expression "tum gussa issliye ho kii hum log yahan phaas gaye yaa kyunkii ...maine pehle propose nahi kiya..." raising his eyebrows.
Trisha hits chest lightly .."bada mazaak suj raha hain naa.."
Raghav-"...Ok baba sorry..."
Trisha -"finally tumne agree kiya kii mistake tumhari thii...ab bhar paayi bhi tum karoge.."
Raghav-"jo hokum jaan..." *winks.
Trisha..."mujhe bhook lagi hain"
Raghav chalo ...trisha follows..
(raghav had actually remembered the small canteen inside a small room of the palace.)

When they reach their they find the shutter closed...
Trisha looks at Raghav with a sarcstic smile...
Raghav gives her a winning expression and takes out his fav. Multi-purpose device and unlocks the shutter.
"Chaloo khathe hain.."

They had to climb over the table and get in that was the only way.
Trisha.."Kaise..?"
Raghav sees her saree and understands..he lifts her up in his arms to place her on the table.
Trisha shocked.."Kya kar rahe ho..?"
Raghav-"Waisa kuch nahii jo tum soch rahi ho...Trisha blushes.
He places her on the table."Apni taange uss taraf karo..itna toh kar sakti ho"
She does that, while he jumps in.
She is seeing around. He is lost in her. Trisha sees him and sweetly.."Raghav mujhe khaana abhi chaiye...",rubbing her shoulders due to cold. Raghav understands her sarcasm "hmm..maggi..?...thand mein khaane ka mazaa hi kuch aur hain.
She nods. He starts preparing while Trisha watches him adoringly.
He lights the small stove using his multi-purpose device.
Trisha-"Iss mein calling facility hain kya...?"
Raghav laughs. Trisha-"I mean uss mein sab kuch hain..toh..".He still laughs.
Trisha annoyed.."Yeh rakh sakte ho ek extra phone nahii rakh sakte..!!"
Raghav smacks his head "tum phir ...u r impossible ..forget it yeh lo khao..garam garam maggi aur batao kaisi bani hai.."hands her the bowl.
Trisha laughs.."Maggi toh maggi hogii naa..!"
He smiles both eat like kids and narrate to each other their maggi stories..!!

P.S
Next part maybe tomorrow or day after.
Please do leave your precious comments.

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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Lovely start to the story dear...i loved it...😊

The timeline is good as you continued from a case and the location is just awesome...i know about the beauty of this palace... its so eloquent...👏

The child in Raghav comes out wonderfully as he wants to explore, break rules and follow his heart...i love him like this😃

Our Trisha ..always that rule book type😉 but she always gives in to his requests😆

The way you presented their romantic feelings took me into the ratri land my dear👏👏

Thanks for this...loves❤️