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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Love u all guys
...such a interesting story you are making... Tnx a lot annika fr the amazing game... Love the story a lot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: annikaa

His phone starts ringing suddenly..private no.
"Agent Raghav, yeh trial round hai..Agent Trisha ko dhundo..aur phir se yahan par pahuncho lekin ek ghante ke andar...warna...haha"
*call ends with a laugh.
Recieves message..

"Dhoondo patharon mein..
Dhoondo sanaaton mein..
Dhoondo anaek naamom mein..
Warna mit jayegi woh behti tarangon mein.."

Raghav rereads and thinks..."pathar..sannate...naam...tarange..kya ho sakta hai..?"



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Raghav.."oh yes shamshaan ..jahan par patharo pe naam aur sanaate...lekin..tarngo ka matlab..."He was continuously thinking..."ho sakta hai koi aessa shamshaan jahan par pani bhi ho..aisi kaunsi jagah hai...purani dilli ke paas wala shamshaan haan wahan par ek dariya hai wohi ho sakta hai.."looks at watch.."ek ghante mein mujhe trisha ke saath ya par pahunchna hai...damm.."
Runs towards the main road and take a bike from some random person on he road and also secretly takes his phone.

*shamshan means graveyard..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
The story continues...
Raghav drove as fast as he could towards that graveyard...constantly thinking about Trisha throughout...in between kept on peeping at his wrist watch to see the time considering the time limit given to him.
On the way to that graveyard, he called Inspector Dave..his very close friend, he told him about everything that had happened with both of them. He also asked him to keep a track of the GPS signal of this phone so that he can track his location. He told him not to reveal this to anyone else in the police department as that could endanger the life of his colleagues.

In around 20 minutes, he reached the graveyard...he left the bike there and immediately rushed inside. He was rapidly searching through the place for his Trisha...he could not think of anyone except her at this time..

After few minutes, he reached a place where wooden logs were kept stacked together. He went behind that stack and found Trisha tied up with her mouth taped. He freed her hands and feet, removed the tape from her mouth...Trisha was very drowsy and weak. He saw a stab wound on her right arm which was bleeding, there was significant blood loss from that wound.

He took out his handkerchief from his pocket and tied it tightly around her wound.

Raghav: Trisha...aankhen kholo Trisha...dekho main aa gaya...kuch nahi hoga tumhe.

He tapped her cheek and soon she opened her eyes but she was still very weak.

Trisha (in a slurred speech): tum aa gaye Raghav...yeh sab kya ho raha hai.

Raghav: Trisha tum bahut weak ho abhi Trisha, tum kuch baat mat karo. Hume jald se jald us amusement park me wapas pahunchna hai. I know tumhe hospital le jana zaroori hai...but...

He lifted her in his arms and took her to the bike...he made her sit on the bike and started driving.
Trisha being so weak due to blood loss could not sit without support. She kept her head on his back and both her arms around him.
Raghav knew her condition and considering her weakness, he cursed himself for not being able to help her at this point.

He held her hands with his left hand and kept driving. Somewhere he was feeling relieved to see Trisha sitting so close to him.

Soon they both reached the park. As soon as they reached there, there was a message on the walkie talkie...

Well done Agent Raghav...
pehla trial round tumne pass kar liya...
ab agle padaav ke liye intezaar karo...
All the best...hahaha..

The message ends...Raghav became apprehensive hearing that voice and realised that Trisha had slept off by now. He really wanted to help her now...

He managed to lift her from the bike and took her back to the chairs where they were sitting earlier. He made her sit there sleeping and he too sat close to her waiting for any next clue.
Edited by braveheartdoc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Story continues...
Raghav took Trisha to a safer place and make her sit. Raghav was so tensed that if something happens to her then... Suddenly he came out of his thought when he listen Trisha's voice.
Trisha - "I know... Tum... Zaroor aate"
Raghav - "Trisha I can't leave you alone. Tum tension mat lo main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga"
Trisha was looking at him with a confidence that he will definitely save her but soon she started to close her eyes.
Raghav - "Trisha ankhe kholo.." Raghav tapped her cheek.
Trisha opened her eyes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The story continues...
Raghav: Trisha I'm so sorry ...tumhe treatment ki zaroorat hai aur hum yahan jis situation mein phans gaye hain...I'm feeling so helpless for the first time.. please tum himmat rakho...hum is musibat se nikal jayenge..main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga.

But he saw Trisha becoming more and more drowsy...few minutes later, she stopped responding.
Raghav felt as if he had lost her.

He became so worried to see her unconscious and he instantly lifted her and began to move out of the park to take her to the hospital. He had to take her at any cost...he couldn't put her life in danger at any cost.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Story continues...
Raghav - "Trisha.. Anlhe kholo.. Mere liye please"
Raghav eyes were full of tears.
Raghav - "Trisha kuch toh bolo... Aise tum itna gussa karti ho aaj kuch bolo na"
Trisha was still not responding.
Raghav lost his patience and temper.
Raghav - "Trisha me kuch keh raha hoon... Trisha utha..for me"
Raghav knew it was the time when he could not control his feelings
Raghav - "Trisha I Love You... Please wake up.."

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Story continues...

Raghav was moving outside while he was talking to her.. As soon as he confessed his love to her, he felt some movement in her body while he had her in his arms. Gradually Trisha opened her eyes and with a lot of difficulty she said

Trisha: Raghav paani..please... Paani... And she again was becoming drowsy.

Raghav saw this and started searching for water...he knew he was running out of time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Raghav couldn't find any source of water there
Without a second thought he cut his fingers and dipped his blood into her lips
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The story continues...

Trisha was very weak and drowsy, after this Raghav made her sit on the bike on the front seat and himself sat behind her so that he could hold her securely. He drove as fast as he could to the nearest hospital while Trisha was leaning onto him.
In the hospital, he took her inside immediately and the doctors examined her and found her BP to be very low. They immediately admitted her and started her resuscitation. Some stitches were applied to her bleeding wound and blood was transfused.
She was still kept for observation in ICU after she stabilized a bit.
Raghav saw her asleep in ICU and thanked God that he could reach there on time.
He called up inspector Dave and told him to arrange for police security for her in civilian dress.
He knew they were being tracked so he didn't want to take a chance.

Some time later, he again got a message on the walkie talkie..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Raghav returned to the amusement park.
Walki talkie msg..

"Raghav tumne Agent Trisha ko yahan se bahaar kar ke apna hi kaam mushkil kiya hai..
Suljaa Sakte Ho Toh Suljaao
Warna Khud Ko Uss Bhool bhulaiyan Mein Kho Aao


Yaad Rakhna Samay Nahi Hota Kissi Ka Apna.
Iska Nahi Rakha Dhyaan toh padega tadapna


"Yeh pheli par pahei deta jaa raha hai...Ab iss paheli ka matlab kya ho sakta hai..
Thinks fr a while..
Bhool bhuliyan..jyada tak amusement parks mein mirror rooms ko kehte hai..yahan par bhi ho sakta hai wahi ho..aur iss baar bhi time limit hai..mujhe kuch jaldi karna padega.."

Closes his eyes n goes into flasback when he entered d park in afternon...he sees a huge park map on a wall near d entrance.

He runs to the entrance to have a look at the map.HE studies the map and finds a place labelled hall of mirrors.He takes a pic of the map for his reference and moves to the place.

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