RaTri story: Tum bin...jaaun kahan..Last Part on page 17 - Page 8

Di, why did you get nervous ?? It's lovely and you have done a fab job 👏👏

Such a emotional update manisha, really I had tears In my eyes while reading it .so write soo awesome dear ,loved it soo much

very emotional.. heart touching... you portrait their emotions very well... 👏

awesome story manisha...loved it a lot👏👏👏

Part 1.

A very emotional beginning
A broken Raghav who needs someone for emotional support
Trisha's marriage & vidhushak incident had created havoc in him such a way that he had addicted to alcoholism
Trisha is too shocked to see Raghav in this state
Raghav's proximity made her anxious which shows her state of mind. She is not happy with her marriage because she loves Raghav
That Slap shocked not only Trisha but the entire team too
Even Raghav himself was ashamed of his act
You have managed to create the curiosity in readers
Loved the teem bonding too

Part 2

FB! So the special team is getting diapered because of cheif's absence
Everyone is hurt shows there bonding they are a family now don't want to separate themselves from each other.
Raghav is scared of losing his Trisha. Her decision to resign CBI shocked everyone as they knew her love & dedication for her job!
After a lot of emotional turmoil he admits that he loves Trisha & finally proposes her but shocking him Trisha rejects him.
Raghav is too broken by her decision to get married to Samrat
Rajbir doesn't know how to console Raghav
Trisha's goodbye to Raghav was emotional suspicious too as she hugged him as if her life depends on Raghav making Raghav suspicious
Dr. Kamath an important character in raghav's life forgotten in show; comes to save Raghav from his habit to addiction to alcohol

Part 3

Raghav trying his leval best to move on in his life
But as said love will find its own way Raghav finally learns Trisha's truth from Dr. Kamath
Trisha did all this drama for making Raghav to move on in his life as she has cancer! That too in ovaries! She is not sure whether she will be saved because of which she doesn't want to see Raghav suffering because of losing her. Even if she is saved her chances of becoming pregnant is less and as Raghav loves kids she did all this thinking that after sometime he may move on with someone else. Anyone in her position will only think that way. Her love for Raghav is so pure that she didn't want him to suffer because of her & decided to suffer all alone in this state.
Raghav is too shocked & somewhere is blaming himself for not being with her when she needed him the most. He is ashamed of himself for slapping her when she needed his comfort.
Team mates too are hurt as she decided to suffer all alone. There efforts to retain the team till Trisha returns is great & they helped Raghav to go to USA
Now eagerly waiting to c Trisha's PoV & her state of mind.
You have brought up a sensitive issue because of which your nervousness is justified as a doctor & writer myself I can completely understand your nervousness. You very well portrayed this part & did full justice
Eagerly waiting for next part
Update soon!

I am sorry for the delay
Hope I didn't miss out anything in my comments