RaTri TS: Hum Tum saath saath... Final Part updated Page 6 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update manisha ma'am loved it soo much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love the update a lot... Trisha bought a dress according to Raghav's choice... They saved many lives in jewellery shop...Raghav saved his Trisha so romanticly... Love the punishment which was given by Payel... Payel noticed their closeness... RaTri saved Payel life... Thank God...Tnx to Payel who helps RaTri confessing their feelings for each other... So Raghav knows painting nd he made portrait of Trisha... Nd Lastly their romantic journey... Hats off to you... Thankuu sooo much for the lovely update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks everyone for your lovely comments including Uma, Babita, Tasha, Tara and Shaina. Will reply individually to all the comments by tmrrw... For sure...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wao its wonderful 👏 👏 story ,i love part when raghav saves trisha . and i loved this thing that payal's father had given important to his daughter not to the society ,its true that we can rarely find these types of family .Trisha and raghav helped payal and the interesting part is the confession of love of both them wao 😳 i love it yar . Thankyou so much for the story manisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

such a awesome update Manisha. really it was soo cute had a smile while reading the whole update thanks soo much for such a awesome update. really loved it soo much. so payal and Trisha went for shopping and Raghav was also there loved raghav telling trisha his choice and trisha buying the same clothes .trisha and Raghav togeather caught the thief and handed them to the police loved how raghav saved trisha from getting shot so now payal knows that raghav is not trisha driver he is her friend. loved raghav demanding a dinner with trisha and they both having dinner together. loved payal supporting trisha with that .loved raghav confronting payal about he loves trisha
soo Shravan was cheating on payal loved how RaTri caught them and got the truth in front. so now payal considers raghav as her brother and tied a rakhi to him .loved her demanding to confess his love in return. loved the confession in the last a lot .they both are soo cute Really loved this story soo much. thanks for such a awesome update.


Thanks a lot Tasha for liking the story... this means a lot to me as this was my first attempt at writing a light hearted story... thanks a lot for your motivation my dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: babita..

Lovely and a beautiful end to the light hearted story Manisha 👏👏

Thanks for liking it Babita...

I loved how Payal made raghav a brother and Trisha her bhabhi ⭐️⭐️
This was added later while writing, it was not planned initially...

The most important thing U have shown is how some bad men go on for marriage only for money and have no heart for the spouse later. Good that U showed this to make every one so alert to how some bad families can do injustice to the girls.
This happens quite commonly in many families specially with rich affluent girls...

Raghav saw Shravan with the girl and got everything to know and then settled sharavan with the help of Trisha. Out standing to see them rescuing two girls -- payal and the other gir Komal and her brother as well.
They both will go any extent to save Payal from this trap of Shravan...

The way raghav saved Trisha from getting shot was fabulous. He not only saved her but saved her love.
Liked to see how payal gotta know about Raghav's reality and then gave them the punishment of food. Raghav bought a lovely suit for her in white. Wow, so charming a reality it is !
Glad you liked the way all this happened... even i feel the same, we have seen Trisha mostly in formals and she looks soo charming in white dresses... i too find her very elegant in white colour...

Loved how Payal asked him about his feelings for Raghav and then settled the relation of them. A genuine girl who has lost her marriage but is so happy for her friend and a new made brother, Raghav whom she tied the Rakhi. It was an emotional scene, as now raghav has got his love and a sister in his lonely life !👏
Raghav has no one other than Trisha in this world to call as his own, now he getting a sister would obviously be overwhelming for him...

The journey back to Delhi was magical and romantic enough to make me landing in the Ratri land ! The painting he made of her from his imagination was so fab and lovely. ! I liked how he reacted to her bossy nature and then on her smiles said, " perfect my love "
Fantastic and stupendous piece of work Manisha ! Thanks and huggies 🤗
Thanks a lot for your beautiful words Babita, means a lot... lots of love to you as well..

Hope you all liked the story and hope i could do justice to a light hearted story... this was my first attempt, please pardon me for my mistakes... i have no experience in such stories... Hope i could bring out the character of Payal as a true friend and a mature girl who goes all out to help her friends.. this is how I had planned her character...

I totally agree with on this Manisha ! I loved Payal's character and the way you have made her so mature and brave who was not got down from the pain she got from shravan but instead keep on and moved on in making a good and lovely relation of Raghav and Trisha in making them RaTri !
No mistakes done dear, all went so well with the two lovers coming together with the hep of a friend who was saved from marrying a bad guy and her life was saved to get spoil.

Loves Mainsha ❤️
Thanks Babita for your motivation and support... loves to you too...🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Awesome update manisha ma'am loved it soo much


Thanks a lot Tara... Please call me Manisha...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina744

Love the update a lot... Trisha bought a dress according to Raghav's choice... They saved many lives in jewellery shop...Raghav saved his Trisha so romanticly... Love the punishment which was given by Payel... Payel noticed their closeness... RaTri saved Payel life... Thank God...Tnx to Payel who helps RaTri confessing their feelings for each other... So Raghav knows painting nd he made portrait of Trisha... Nd Lastly their romantic journey... Hats off to you... Thankuu sooo much for the lovely update...


Thanks a lot for liking the story... your support and motivation is very special for me... Glad you liked it...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEKER

wao its wonderful 👏 👏 story ,i love part when raghav saves trisha . and i loved this thing that payal's father had given important to his daughter not to the society ,its true that we can rarely find these types of family .Trisha and raghav helped payal and the interesting part is the confession of love of both them wao 😳 i love it yar . Thankyou so much for the story manisha


Thanks a lot for liking it... Yes thats true that its very rare to find such parents who dare to cancel their daughter's marriage right on the wedding date just for the sake of their daughter and not thinking about their society pressures..
Glad you liked it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Soo cute, loved the story soo much, it's too romantic

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