RaTri TS: Hum Tum saath saath... Final Part updated Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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TEASER

Raghav: waise tum itne din ki chhutti lekar kya karogi? Kahin ja rahi ho kya?

Trisha: main Jaipur ja rahi hu. Meri close friend ki shaadi hai. I tried to avoid but usne bahut forcefully kaha hai ki mujhe engagement se shaadi tak uske saath rehna hoga and she is just not ready to hear any excuse. So I have to go...

Raghav: main bhi tumhare saath chalu?

Trisha: tum... tum kya karoge wahan... Aur office mein kaam?

Raghav: kaam to hota hi rahega, but tumhare saath holiday ka chance main chhodna nahi chahta. Tumhe main akela nahi jane dunga, kahin kisi ne tumhe mujhse chura liya to? He said with a smirk..

Trisha blushed at hearing this, but she composed herself.

Trisha: tumhe main wahan kaise le ja sakti hu?

Raghav: keh dena ki main tumhara boyfriend hu...

Trisha: Raghav...

Raghav: ok agar boyfriend nahi to driver bana kar le jaao...

He got up and bent in front of her.

Raghav: your personal driver Raghu at your service mam...


This is another RaTri story... this time i've tried to write a light hearted story without any rona dhona... hope you like it...

Please provide with your valuable reviews...


PART 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/134290276

PART 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/134411580

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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww such a cute teaser .Raghav wanting to go with trisha for her friends marriage. loved raghav teasing trisha as taking him as a boyfriend or a driver raghu .thanks for such a awesome teaser.waiting for this cute story
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

aww such a cute teaser .Raghav wanting to go with trisha for her friends marriage. loved raghav teasing trisha as taking him as a boyfriend or a driver raghu .thanks for such a awesome teaser.waiting for this cute story


Thanks a lot for liking it... will post this after my new story finishes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome teaser loved it.Raghav asking her to take him as a driver but for god sake take him. Please update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

aww such a cute teaser .Raghav wanting to go with trisha for her friends marriage. loved raghav teasing trisha as taking him as a boyfriend or a driver raghu .thanks for such a awesome teaser.waiting for this cute story


Thanks for liking the teaser. I'll post it after my new story finishes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Awesome teaser loved it.Raghav asking her to take him as a driver but for god sake take him. Please update it soon


Thanks a lot dear. will post it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Light hearted story, wow 👏👏
Nice and cute teaser Manisha, loved to see the smirking Raghav and composed Trisha 😉
Will wait for this one too ! Loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely teaser
I like raghav's care he doesn't want to leave Trisha alone he is even ready to be her driver
I think u really like Jaipur in ur PKD story too Jaipur was included
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Lovely teaser
I like raghav's care he doesn't want to leave Trisha alone he is even ready to be her driver
I think u really like Jaipur in ur PKD story too Jaipur was included
Continue soon



Thanks for liking it. Yes I love Jaipur as a city, its beautiful. My childhood memories there.also it is a place where we can go by car,bus,train,flight anyhow from delhi. So to plan a story which needed a place where all the options I need in my story, everything is there. Also I'm well aware of that city... I'm in love with this place.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Light hearted story, wow👏👏

Nice and cute teaser Manisha, loved to see the smirking Raghav and composed Trisha😉
Will wait for this one too ! Loves❤️


Thanks for liking it. This story would be full of ratri scenes I assure you. I know Maine bahut Rone dhone wali stories likhi hai ab tak. This time no Rona only pure entertainment.

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