RaTri TS: Hum Tum saath saath... Final Part updated Page 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc


Thanks for liking it. This story would be full of ratri scenes I assure you. I know Maine bahut Rone dhone wali stories likhi hai ab tak. This time no Rona only pure entertainment.

Phir toh mazaa aa jayega 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Phir toh mazaa aa jayega 😃


Hope you like it and enjoy this story also...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was trying to think about the track of the story... I didn't find it that attractive myself. So i have decided to slightly modify the story... so i have decided to change the title of the story... hope you like it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm Title dear... Sounds sooo romantic... Teaser s also very interesting and romantic... Waiting for the story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina744

Awsm Title dear... Sounds sooo romantic... Teaser s also very interesting and romantic... Waiting for the story...

Thanks for liking the title and the teaser... will update after my current story finishes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice title now : RaTri saath saath 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Nice title now : RaTri saath saath😃



Lovely thought my dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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TEASER for Part 1

When he entered the guest room to keep her bags, he saw that she was almost ready in a saree with her usual light make up and was trying to lock her necklace behind her neck but wasn't able to do so. He went close to her and touched her neck so as to help her lock the necklace (Trisha's eyes were away from the mirror, so she could not see him coming). As soon as she felt his touch, she lost herself under the effect of his touch and closed her eyes. After helping her out, he saw her face in the mirror, it was absolutely flushed and she looked so gorgeous and alluring with her eyes still closed. He lost himself in her looks for few minutes and when he came back to his senses, he gave a light pat on her cheek and she opened her eyes quickly.

Raghav: bahut sundar lag rahi ho tum, saree mein. He picked up a kajal pencil from the table and made a small dot behind her ear and said..kahin meri nazar na lag jaye... and she blushed at hearing this and turned her eyes down and he went outside smiling to himself.

Hope you like the teaser for the story...

This is going to be a short two shot story..

Edited by braveheartdoc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a cute romantic teaser

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