Ratri OS : Mahal ka Raaz Part 2 updated on pg 3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: nymphadora12
Wow great story!
Loved how raghav moved trisha when he noticed manish's intentions weren't good.
I loved how they came to the final conclusion of the murderer.
Raghav has great analysis intelligence. 👏
How cute raghav kept the earring with him and returned it later.
The fall was cute too.
Keep writing stories!

Thanks for review. This is an investigative story so Raghav should be shown as an intelligent guy with good deducting power. According to me Ratri scenes are necessary in each story.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Great story with lovely ratri scenes. Detailed review I'll give later. Just one doubt... Murder to banvarilal me kiya. So you mentioned about aditya's height. Although he did that on the instructions of aditya only but how did Raghav guessed about banvarilal. Please sorry if I misinterpret something. I've just read it in a hurry.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Great story with lovely ratri scenes. Detailed review I'll give later. Just one doubt... Murder to banvarilal me kiya. So you mentioned about aditya's height. Although he did that on the instructions of aditya only but how did Raghav guessed about banvarilal. Please sorry if I misinterpret something. I've just read it in a hurry.

No dear you don't misinterpreted anything, its accurately right Raghav said of Aditya height but he also revealed that he was in Mumbai so someone left with the same height and strength is banvarilal the servant but he do not have any motive so it's obvious that banvarilal done vikram's murder on instruction of someone and Raghav ko sirf shak tha par banvarilal ne khood confess kar diya.

Take your time to give review. Hope I have tried my best to clear the doubt if not please pardon me. 😳

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

No dear you don't misinterpreted anything, its accurately right Raghav said of Aditya height but he also revealed that he was in Mumbai so someone left with the same height and strength is banvarilal the servant but he do not have any motive so it's obvious that banvarilal done vikram's murder on instruction of someone and Raghav ko sirf shak tha par banvarilal ne khood confess kar diya.
Take your time to give review. Hope I have tried my best to clear the doubt if not please pardon me.😳

Thanks a lot. Ya my doubt got cleared now. I'll try to post the review by tonight. Its a bit difficult to write so much on phone. I'm more comfortable with my laptop. I'll do that after reaching home.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Lovely update.

Raghav understanding the unnecessary flirting by Manish and then he sat close to him, he is so possesive for her, can't see anyone flirting with her.

The window climbing scene was so well written. Loved the conversation between Trisha and Raghav when he asked her to climb the window and the scene when she holds his collar was very cute. The expressions on Trisha's face when he held her in her arms and then when asked her to come down as she was not very light weight was hilarious.

The suspense in the story was nice. The way Raghav guessed the killer... awesome.

Thanks for a great mystery story full of ratri scenes.

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Such a lovely update

Loved how Raghav came into conclusion about the killer

And the trip and fall scene was so cute

Also Raghav's possessiveness when Manish flirts with Trisha

The last scene was cute ear ring one

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Lovely update.
Raghav understanding the unnecessary flirting by Manish and then he sat close to him, he is so possesive for her, can't see anyone flirting with her.

The window climbing scene was so well written. Loved the conversation between Trisha and Raghav when he asked her to climb the window and the scene when she holds his collar was very cute. The expressions on Trisha's face when he held her in her arms and then when asked her to come down as she was not very light weight was hilarious.
The suspense in the story was nice. The way Raghav guessed the killer... awesome.

Thanks for a great mystery story full of ratri scenes.

Thanks manisha, Raghav is always possessive for her. Ratri scenes are necessary even in shows too so I added all of them wherever it is required. Hope I was able to kept your expectations.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Az07
Such a lovely update
Loved how Raghav came into conclusion about the killer
And the trip and fall scene was so cute
Also Raghav's possessiveness when Manish flirts with Trisha
The last scene was cute ear ring one

Thanks uma, Raghav always care for her and can't see anyone else with her. Raghav extraordinary thinking must be shown somewhere in the show so I have added it like this. Hope the case was interesting and as per your expectations

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

thanks soo much for this awesome update. Really loved it soo much .the RaTri trip and fall scene was soo cute. loved all the RaTri scenes soo much loved how raghav caught the killer. thanks for this awesome story with awesome RaTri scenes loved it soo much

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