RaTri SS : Black End!! Chapter 3 on Page 21 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

I've always liked your banners Amreen!

This has gone so well too, liked it gelling with the theme👏👏

Great job, luv ya❤️🤗

Thank u bhabhi!!! 😊
Love u 🤗

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

😭😭Itna acha kaise likh leti ho amreen😭

Ye mere khushi ke aansoo hai...

Super awesome tha😭😭

Okay... Enough of my emotional drama😆

Starting from the beginning...

Raghav ko threatening wala mail...

Then the blast😕duhh. ... You created a perfect thrill wala atmosphere..

So stone terrorist group wants their member to be released...

Since raghav was the one behind putting him into jail ...uske bachon ko kidnap karlia

Trisha's outburst is justified... She is already paniced about her kids... Now the blasts..🤢

Sim destroyed..IP track karna bekar... Ab ye sleeper agent muh nehi kholega to koi lead nhi hai...

ACP ne to aur dara dia... 6 saal ke bache ki body... I so do hope that its not one of their kids..

Amreen... The flashbacks were lovely..

The fight of the dad son duo😆phir trisha ki entry.. Innocently homework dikhana...n then comes supermodel reha😆

Mumma ka scarf legi..

Hayee.. Raghav ko scarf dene se mana kardia tha Trisha ne😆😆

The second flashback was nice too .. Raghav beingbthe cool dad.. Hitler mom se bachata bachon ko😆upar se khichai bhi karta...

Trisha is badly traumatised... Sleeper ne reason to boldia.. Par dhundna asaan nhi hoga Reha n Rish ko...

Upar se aur pata nhi kaha kaha bomb hoga🤢

Hatts off to u Amreen.. This was too good for a first attempt... Itna acha likh kaise leti ho..mujhe bhi sikhao namere khali khopdi me to ideas hi nhi aate🤢

Oye.. Mid march tak 2nd update dede plz... Uske baad exams h to padh nhi paungi😳😳

Haath se likhti hu ishu 🤣
Tum pair se likhti ho kya 😆
Ok.. now my thank u... thank u... thank u to u...For such a lovely review ⭐️ muaaahh!!
Thanks... I am glad ki setting ko achhe se express kar paayi mai 😊
Well maa aisi hi hoti hai na... ❤️
Hmm... leads toh hai nahi... par Raghav is Raghav... vo nikal hi lega apna clue... 😉
Thank u dear... family scenes are my fav too 😃
Aasan toh kuch nhi oar vo sach hi kya jo is se chip jaaye 😉
Well seekh rahi hu ab... writing has been my passion since childhood... abhi toh I will be 18 soon.. in less than 2 months
Aur meri khopdi mein ideas ki kami nhi h par life time ki zaroor hain 🤣 🤣
Aaj I am so happy wid my bio exam ki soch rahi hu aaj update de du... well I hope I am able to do so 😊
*Fingers crossed*

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu

awesome start...

pehle raghav ko mail and then bomb blast...

okay ratrii is married and had two kids...

banner is beautiful

bacche gyab ho gye😲😲and case bhi aise hi time pr aaya

pure sehar me blast ho rhe hai...

trisha ka darr zyay hai...

sleeper cell muh nhi khol rha...

and acp ye bachche ki body😲😲😲

cliffhanger pr chodna zaruri tha kya

raghav ne trisha ko to nhi bataya...but hume to bta deti k dr. arti ne raghav ko kya jawab dia

Thank u very much annu di for reading n commenting even when u were busy 😊
And thanks for liking the chapter n banner too...
After all she is a mother before being a CBI... she is bound to be traumatised!!!
Cliffhanger par chhod doongi toh hi toh sab aage padh ne k lite betaab honge na. 😆
Koshish karungi ki aaj bata doon 😉

Hullo lovely readers!!!
Will try to post part 2 till night!!!
Cannot promise as have guests at home... but mera exam itna achha hua n am so happy ki I will try to give it 😊

Hey amreen.. It was just amazing Darlo..!!

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Hullo lovely readers!!!
Will try to post part 2 till night!!!
Cannot promise as have guests at home... but mera exam itna achha hua n am so happy ki I will try to give it 😊

no problem ammu we will wait

I must say this story intrigues me...
One thing is that Trisha emerges as the strongest character amongst all. All her emotions have been portrayed so strongly that she even overshadows raghav. I love the banner its really creative :)
Totally suits the theme...
The reason is revealed by the sleeper but it won't be easy to find the kids...
The father-children love was awesome in the flashbacks!!
Amreen one request... Will you try to Post more fb scenes...in love with them.
Loved it and I'm sorry for being late :)
Hope you understand :) :)

hey! *waves hands frantically!* 😆

Hi amreen,

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Hi amreen,

Please update the second part of the story. I am eagerly waiting for such a wonderful story to get completed with a perfect and good ending. So this is my humble request to my cute writer to give us the second part.😳😊

me to ammu